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(Banner Credit goes to Rakhi Di...thank you diii for this lovely banner..)


(Banner Credit Goes to my Chidyaaa a.k.a Vanshi Maaneet...)

(Banner Credit Goes to Rakhi Di...thank you diii for such a lovely banner...)

This update is dedicated to Charu Di a.k.a angelic_cute...she'll always ask me when you are updating..updated or not...sooo diii dis is for you..hope u'll like it...

RE-Cap: Maaneet came on Dinner Date...arranged by Geet.

Maan read the poem...it was sooo beautifully written..he was sooo touched with the poem...

Geet tumne btaya nai ki ye pics tumhe kahan se mile...??

Maan i'll tell u...after some time...for nw...plzz cme wid me...

Okkk

They were moving towards geet's studio at the back side..

Ahh..Maan i just remembered something you move ahead me coming in few minutes..

Geet what happened...if u want then i can wait for you..

No Maan You move ahead...i am coming in few minutes..

Okk

Maan moved towards to the back side...there a room (kind of art studio) with dreams written over it which caught maan's attention...Maan thought to explore it till the time geet comes...and see what are geet's dreams...

But Maan didn't knew that a sweet suprise cum shock is waiting for him inside...thodi der pehle jo dekhne mila that was just a trailor...

As soon as Maan opened the door he was shocked out of wits

The whole room was covered with his pics...some were old..some were new (after their meet...)

(Credit for this edit goes to Sumaiya Riya...)

On a wall their sooo many pics of his were hanging he went inside to have a closer look...

"MY Maan" it was written on the wall near the pics...

(Credit for this edit goes to Charu diii...a.k.a angelic_cute)

He touched his name from his hands...

Then his attention drew towards the poem written their...

"I am normal girl like all carrying bundle of dreams in my heart

Wanted to fly high with open wings

But I cont voice out because of my fear

Doubting my abilities I have kept mum

But god had already decided something for me

You came to my life do wash away my fears

To guide me in the carpet of success

To make me believe nothing is impossible

I am your silent admirer your one glance one smile

Will boost my confidence you are my mentor

Getting strength by your words is my favourite hobby

Yours every word still ringing in my ear drums

In my path along with success I got one more

I feel in love with you irrecoverably

When where how these are the questions

I am asking myself from the day I felt I am in love

I am cherishing my love every min every sec

I am dumb I must accept this for taking this much time

Your love makes me looks more beautiful

I started admiring myself I am waiting to witness same admiration in your eyes for me

My wait came to end when you came in to my life

But I wanted to hide myself one glance in to my eyes

Then you will come to know my unsaid words

My heart is beating in high pitch like see waves

Red hue formed on my cheeks is witness of my love

You are looking more dashing in casual look

I chided myself for not giving attention for your looks (smiling shyly)

I wanted to worship those lips which had given strength to me

I wanted to make you drown in my hazels to watch my reflection

I was dreaming dreaming dreaming about you daily

You became soul reason of my existence

But when I am seeing you in front my eyes

Words got shortened to express myself

I cont believe myself when I came to know

You wanted me as your life partner

Now I can say we are meant to be together

You are my love my soul who understand my silent confession

I thought these only will became my dreams

Dreams won't come true

But today I can say

Dreams do come true"

(Credit for this poem goes to my pooju baby...a.k.a Twilightsparkle a.k.a Pooja Sparkle)

He could feel the corner of his eyes burn after reading the poem..

He could feel himself drowning in the ocean of her love...

Her love is as deep as depth of an ocean...which has no end..

He was sooo much drowned in her love that he didn't came to know when geet came there and was standing at the door step..

When Geet saw a small layer of salt water in his eyes...she went towards him and softly called him...

Maan..

As an instant Maan turned and hugged her...tightly...leaving no space for air even to pass..

Maan kya hua..??

But Maan didn't said anything and pulled her more towards him...

After some time Maan left her

Geet now tell me..about this dream of yours...(referring towards his photo's and poem...)

A shy smiled played on her lips..

Maan 3 yrs before i saw you for the first time...listened to you...and i got the strength to achieve my dreams..

First i saw you as my mentor...but then slowly-2 i got attracted towards you and when that attraction turned into love i myself dunno.

From that day (3 yrs before when he gave speech in Pari's college) i used to listen or read your every speech...in news papers when ever your interview would come...i would cut that part of the newspaper and kept with me...

Your habit of keeping your personnel and professional life separate i liked most. Whenever media would ask about you personnel life you would politely refuse them not to ask about your personnel self.

Even after achieving sooo much in such a short span of time your down to earth nature and your humbleness touched me...

And the list goes on...

They were sitting in the backyard of the house...i.e. outside Geet's Studio (Dreams)

Both were sitting silently on the swing...lost in their thoughts...

Maan was sitting silently so as to absorb whatever geet had told him...he was short of words...

He was thinking how could someone love sooo selflessly and sooo deeply...

But then someone said it right...

True love is always selfless...and he is indeed lucky to have a life partner who loves him sooo selflessly...

Geet's Thought...

Oh my love here my heart beat that singing your name

Oh my love look in to my eyes which hold dreams for you

Oh my love takes my hand follow your shadow that reflects my soul

To reach me Oh my love my soul craving for your one warm hug

To stay in your heart forever


(Poem Credit goes to my pooju baby..a.k.a Twilightsparkle...a.k.a Pooja Sparkle..)

It was like Maan read her thoughts...

Geet..

Yess Maan...

I dunno what to say to you..i am overwhelmed with your love...i am speechless seeing your love for me..

I'll try my level best geet to always keep you happy..and reach your level of love..

Geet just hugged him tight...she knew he is in very emotional state right now..and he just needed a hug..

Maan sshhh i love you for what you are...and i know that u'll always keep me happy...

Maan just hugged her more tightly..

After a while..

Geet..

Yess Maan..

Can i have the pleasure to dance with you..??

Geet just stood their..dunno what to say...from the day she fell in love with him..she always dreamt of having a dance with him..and now he himself is asking her..

Getting no response from her...Maan again called Geet..

Geet i am waiting...

Yesss Maan..(She replied in Yes to Maan's request for Dance)


Music Started

Maaneet were standing adjacent to each other...

pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

hoti kya hai jawaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

maan gave his left hand to Geet and Geet put her right palm in his

And came towards him twirling...

(Now both were facing each other)

Both were lukng into each other eyes...

Geet felt like drowning in his eyes...

woh bhi ek daur tha

waqt hi aur tha

She held Maan's shoulder from her right hand and Maan slid his left hand on her waist...

(She felt jittery with his touch...)

jab woh the ajnabi

dono tanaha se the

par woh kehte kise

baat jo dil mein thi

Maan then took charge...

Maan step forward towards left while geet took step backward...towards right...

(Their closeness was making Geet's breathing heavy...it's not they are so close to each other for the first time..but dancing and that too salsa is something different...she didn't thought ki dancing with him would be soo difficult..his proximity, his smell, his touch, his cologne...everything is affecting her sooo much...)

Maan came to his place...then he moved backward towards left and geet moved forward towards right...

Geet moved back at her place...

They held each other's hand..

Maan brought her towards him...

And then he make her come side ways...

Now both changed their places..

Both's back were facing each other...

And their hand's held in cross (Both of them were holding right hand of other)


Both of them turned their face and faced each other...

Both came towards each other..

Geet's left hand was at her back...and maan's left hand was free...

Geet again moved to her place...

Maan made her twirl and she came towards him twirling...

Geet bent down a l'll with her face towards maan...and maan supported her from her waist...Maan was on her..

(She could feel his hot breath on her..)

(Her face was totally flushed...)


She stood up...again went to her old place holding maan's hand...

She again came to maan twirling...


Music...

Both were holding each others' hand and standing close...and their hands lifted up..

Both brought their hands down and twirled holding each other's hand..

And exchanged their places...

Geet's one hand was on maan's back and maan's one hand was at geet's back above her waist...and below her shoulders...and the other hand tingled with others' hand.

(His hand was just below his B*****..uff she was fully red...and maan was enjoying dance and his effect on her...)

Music...

Both left each other's hand..

And moved back...

(She left a breath of sigh..but that was short lived)

pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

Then came towards each other...

Maan held geet's head from his right hand and geet held maan's from her left..

Their forehead touching each other's

(Looking into each other's eyes...and their breath falling on other...)

They moved in circle in the same position looking into each other's eyes...

hoti kya hai jawaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

woh bhi ek daur tha

waqt hi aur tha

jab woh the ajnabi

Both now moved back...

Maan held Geet's from her right hand...

Pulled her towards him...and moved their hand above her head..

Now Maan bent a l'll..

Geet's hand moved towards his neck...

And other hand she placed on her head..at the back side..

Maan made her twirl and she was in his arms...

(Their lips were mere inches away...if maan bent a l'll then there lips would brush each other's)

Maan's left hand supported her...from her waist...

And her right hand at maan's neck...

Both stand up in the same position...looking into each other's eyes.

Both moved back...

Maan held Geet's from her right hand...

Pulled her towards him...moved their hands' above geet's head and then above his head...

In such a way that geet's back was touching his back and he held her from her waist..

(Although they were in this position for a while...but his hot breath on her shoulder gave her goosebumps...)

Maan made her twirl and she was in his arms...

Maan's left hand supported her...

And her right hand at maan's neck..

Both stand up in the same position...looking into each other's eyes

pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

hoti kya hai jawaani suno

Maan slid his right hand on her waist..

Geet held maan from his back below his shoulder..

Their other hand...entwined with each other's hand..

pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

hoti kya hai jawaani suno

They moved towards left...first

Maan made her twirl once holding her finger..

Then they again came back to their old position...

And moved towards centre...

Looking into each other's eyes...

Geet moved to the left of maan holding his left hand wid her right...

Maan Pulled her towards him...

Geet held maan from his back below his shoulder..

Maan's hand slid on her waist...

Geet bent down a l'll and maan was on her..

They moved in semi-circle...

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

They stood up...

Maan made her twirl 4 times holding her finger..

Maan pulled her towards him..

Geet's hand was on his neck..

And his hand was on her waist...

Both's forehead were touching each other..

They were looking in each other's eyes..

They were lost in each other's eyes...


Geet couldn't take the intensity in his eyes...she just hugged him and he also reciprocated the hug...

With the click of music system they came to present...

Geet was fully flushed...as images of their closeness and dance was still lingering in her mind...

Maan knew from her facial expression as to what she was thinking...

Maan first broke the awkward silence between them...

Geet I am feeling hungry...come lets have dinner na...

Yesss Maan come lets go...

They both went towards the garden area...

Geet knew that Maan talked about dinner soo as to make her comfortable and she should not feel awkward with their proximity...this what she likes most about him...

He knows how to handle situation...

She was indeed very lucky to have him as her lover and life partner..

Maan was again surprised to see such a beautiful dinner setup...

The whole garden was lit with lanterns...and in between there was setup for dinner arrangement...

There was a lake also side by...it was sooo pleasant view...


(Pic Credit Goes to My Chidyaaa a.k.a Vanshi Maaneet...)

Lovely setup Geet...

Geet smiled hearing appreciation from him...

All the date setup was for him and he liked it...what else she wants...

Dinner was of Maan's choice...all were Italian Vegetarian dishes...

(Avocado, Tomato and Mozzarella Pasta Salad)


(Baby Corn and Sweet Corn Pizza in A Pan)

(White Sauce Pasta)


(Baked Mexican Rice with Cheese Patties)

(Baked Cheese and Mushroom macroni)

(Credit for the pic of dishes goes to my Drama queen a.k.a Hira Anees a.k.a Sweetgirls1)


Wow...Geet everything of my choice...


Geet smiled hearing him..


Maan taste them and tell hws it..??

Ummm..!! Its sooo tasty.

Geet sigh in relief...

You cooked the food Geet..??


No Maan...i dunno cooking..especially Italian to i dunno...


I asked the head chef of HM to cook these dishes...cz i wanted everything perfect for you..and if i would have cooked na then you wouldn't have been able to see them...

Maan smiled hearing her...she told him truth about herself...that how bad cook she is...if any other girl would have been in her place then she would have even lied to just to impress him.

This quality of her made maan fall for her. No show off...no double faces...jo dil main hai wo hi mooh pe bhi hai...

Dinner m all the time geet was speaking and as usual our maan was listening..

Desert was again of Maan's choice..choclate brownie with hot fudge and vannila ice-cream toping..


(Choclate Brownie with Hot fudge and Vannila ice-cream toping)

(This is my favt dessert)

After dinner they thought for a walk..

Both were walking bare foot on the soft grass with their hands entwined...they were enjoying the lake side view and cool breeze...

Geet's Thought..

Its such a romantic atmosphere here...i wished ki hmari ek kiss bhi ho jaati...that day also i kissed him...who will tell Maan that a date is incomplete without a kiss..and if i would kiss him then he would tease me to hell...and i don't want that...

After walking they sat near the lake..

Maan was looking at Geet's glowing face...which was shining more due to moon light and light of lanterns...

Maan main 2 mins m ayi...

Kya hua Geet (What happened Geet..??)

Nothing Maan just 2 mins...wait here plzzz..i am coming...just for 2 mins..

Okk..

Geet wen and bring some thing...

Maan here's a gift for you...

No maan plzzz dnt open the gft now..? plzzz

Okk not opening...since you have barred me from seeing y gift...i want something from you..

Yess..

Geet can i (referring to her lips..)

I am all yours Maan...she said in reply...

Maan kissed the corner of her lips first..then he softly claimed her lips...

Their kiss was soft...yet passionate...

Maan held geet from her waist while geet's hand automatically went around his neck...

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Thnx Dona Di, Charu Diii, nautanki queen, chidyaaa, pooju baby, & Vrinda Valli di & Nalini Diii for helping me with this ud...

Thats all for this ud...i tried my best to make dance passionate plzzz do leave ur review about dance steps...would be waiting for ur cmnts and likes...

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Edited by Parimishty - 11 years ago
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it was chotuuu update abi shuru hua n abi khtm huhhh
me first yayyy
but idea was super romantic adding poem n pics at right time n poo poem was super awesome


hmmm dance was super passionate
ahem ahem if u know what I mean
n room hayeee ye Tou Mera dream room hogya ;)
n end m kiss hmmm he he he
kiss completed the date very well
awesome update
continue soon
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