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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

congozz dear ..

nice start

looking forward for more

thnx for pm dear

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

nice story start..

do cont soon..

thanks for the pm...

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

all d best for ur first story... nice CS... plz add me 2 ur pm list

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Rumana Begum

@Chahhat4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Wowww mind blowing story dear...

Very very interesting characters...

Loved it a lottt...

All the very very best...

Desperately waiting for next chapter...

Update soon dear...

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Pihu

@Parimishty

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Chahhat4eva
Wowww mind blowing story dear...
Very very interesting characters...
Loved it a lottt...
All the very very best...
Desperately waiting for next chapter...
Update soon dear...

Thnx a lottt Chahat..4 ur appreciation...m glad that u lykd it...😊
Next Ch wil ud soon...either by today evening or tommorrow mrng..

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

good Character sketch...

but I feel ki agar characters ek-do kum ho jaate to shayad koi fark nahin padta...itna lamba CS yaad rakhna bada mushkil hai...

very interesting prologue...

please pm me whenever u update...

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Pihu

@Parimishty

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

good Character sketch...

but I feel ki agar characters ek-do kum ho jaate to shayad koi fark nahin padta...itna lamba CS yaad rakhna bada mushkil hai...

very interesting prologue...

please pm me whenever u update...

Thnx dear...m glad u like it...will surely PM u wenever i'll ud...n abt CS i knw thoda bda h..bt kya karu..story jis hisab se proceed karni hai..uske liye jaruri tha...n dnt wry jb b confusion ho jst ask me...