SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :)

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

to kill arjun i can not trust dev please make make maan entry before geet marriage

danger updated yaar

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mani24

@mani24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

di me kabse waiting for my fav SS di jaldi se update kardo na plzzz😳

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tia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

geet was marrying dev yuck bt good poloce came
bt wt a shock u gave me when i came to know she was married to some other creepy creature
i was scared when her mil said wt his son did to her o sr
my thinking took a u turn bt thx god nothing of that sirt happen
for a moment i have doubt on u little bit ha that geet nooo
bt see u proved me wrong n me so happy abt it
\n thjx god there was no lv type between that creepy dev n maanu ki geet
now eagerly waiting 4 my maanu
ab maanu ke bina geet ki shadi kaise hogi😆😆
lvd itwaise ek update mai itna kuj baap re😆😆

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Treasure Logan

@treasuretrowel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Very good update dear harika. It is really worth-while.

Actually worthwhile is a very small word out here, but considering the fact dat you wrote this episode in such a nice way, specially your focus upon the lesbians, kudos to you.

It is a jolly shame that owing to numerous social beliefs and so-called samaj ki niyam, we being the young generation are many times not allowed to voice your opinions, which is bad enough, because instead of shying away, people should come forward and discuss all these things clearly. It is necessary, as awareness will spread and crimes related with sexual harassment such as rape, sodomy, bestiality will at least reduce if not end completely. This is necessary to change the old-age beliefs and societal outlooks.

I wud like to say one more thing, now instead of thinking wht me doing here and starting the block-unblock drama once again, you had better think over wht i am saying honestly. See harika, you liking or disliking me, else not wanting to talk to me, is not important, it is important that we all come together out here and try to understand each other's views, which is necessary for harmony. I will not say anything more, because you are brainy and intelligent enough to understand. Just consider the genuineness of my comment, this is my only sole expectation from you, if you can manage to fulfil it.

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

yaar when was geet pregnant...update mai aisa kuch nahi hey..
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u read ruswa na?? i was talking abt ruswa amy

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: sdlife19
Actually i did not like the way it ended

but will not say a word here

I still have questions like why did maan marry geet

did he love or just tat he felt the reason he should marry her

and than sapna turning like tat.. i was not very happy with it as geet had given her the place of her mother and i wanted tat to be divine though she was the main reason for geet's destruction

and dev so he just lusted geet and wanted to marry her for his lust but good pammi showed her real face

and maan had the patience for staying and understanding geet and helping her go through all the moments tat haunted her

is was right she had suffered for no reasons.. but last she got the love tat she wanted

i understand di and abt the relationship between sapna and geet it was indeed divine nothing changed bt sapna did change which would only let geet to move on happily warna woh issi pain mein rehti all her life that sapna sacrificed so much for her aur khush nahi rehti maan ke saath hope u understood my pov!!

maan did love geet love at first sight 😆 dev ke liye ladki chuna toh he loved her 😆

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
Very different story.. Geet was sexually harassed by lesbos... She saw every relation turned down in front of her own eyes...So it was difficult to trust on Maan.. But Still Maan's confession made her her realize that it was love.. not lust.. somehow he wanted to keep her close to him... Nice story..Harika.. loved it.😃

thanks teju😳

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: priya111111
the way u ended the story tells how much u have hurt with the comments given by some people dont think about them. Any how coming to the part i didnt know anything about lesbians from this update i came to know how they interact the girls who live in hostels must have come across this type of people so with the knowledge u tried to tell through ur writing i am appreciating for ur thoughts.

thank you so much sam😃

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: monikaseth
No its not last part i am not accepting have to write more this is most amazing true story which touched my heart you cant leave like this

will give an epi thanks for the loving comment monika😳

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle
Heyy Roohi ya Gundi kise ho aaj kal bahut chup hogaya mai dont worry I am back with my torture

Razaa what it meant re the story was soo sensible but yeah you written what s happening in now days

So you dont have to give explanation to anyone what ever the story you wont let down values specially the love between maaneet

Thats y I like your stories and ha titles of your stories were really soo different sach kaho tho I dont know the meaning of them silly me

And story the way you potrated was outstanding and was just awesome trust me maaneet bidding relation was really wonderful

And sapna what she did for geet was really makes me speechless she killed her son but at end she too leading the same life uffo

Geet have maan with her but in normal cases for those girls no one will be there how pathetic it was seeing girls being raped or being murderd these all were still happening

Your story makes me remember things which I am for getting thanks for that

And ha dont give any explanation if any one hurted you with there words just fight back throw them out of your reach you did nothing just writing your own stories so what to bother about good for nothing bashers I love the way you are ise hi raho my Gundi haha. And ha dont end your stories re short stories nahi chahiye muje I want atleast 50+ parts story and story have to be like ROOH RUSWA RAZAA etc so dont dare to start any short story will kill you. You will end story before I started enjoying the esscnse mercilessly hate you for that huh

you will kill me with your love pagal thank you so much for supporting me yes will give an epi you had taken time and pmed me the link on fb itna kuch kiya hai toh epi toh deserve karti ho thanks😆