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sweet-mishty

@sweet-mishty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Awesome Story
plz continue waiting

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: suhaaana

thanks tia but i dont wish to continue this ..it sjust for independence day

umm i wish to read more
bt as the end is also good n gave a message
i will not bug to update more
lvd it 😆😆

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

hi thanks 4 da pm..fab OS !Well written

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Shalini barman roy

@shalini28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow great one suhi.

I loved the last line.Its awesome yaar

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Sonakshi Sharma

@sonal36

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wow gr8 writing

and loved the most is last line

and we salute to our real heros

Jai Hind

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

lovely update. geet is so in love with real heroes soldiers. but alas pooe her she lost her dad. waiting for more continue soon

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

umm i wish to read more
bt as the end is also good n gave a message
i will not bug to update more
lvd it 😆😆

thanks a lot tia..
if time will permit then will surely continue the story...

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

congratulation for new story

awesome nice part

loved it

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

loved it

like is nt working..

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maanluver

@maanluver

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

that was such a emotional n amazing story di

geet was so interested in the army

n she just got lost

when she watched these real life heroes on tv

nothing could interest her more than army shows

geet couldn't wait for her daddy to come back

baby was very impatient to see her dad

tej really loves his sister a lot

n he was just looking at her

but geet was too lost in the armed forces show to notice his presence

n tej was just looking at her craze for them

she just loved those brave soldiers who fought bravely on the border

without thinking about themselves

n sacrificing their lives for our safety

geet lost her dad at the age of 16

her dad sacrificed his life to kill these criminals

who think that they can run after doing these horrendous crimes

geet couldn't comprehend the death of her father

maan was the one who saved geet from them

loved maan's lines in the end

they were just so beautiful

culprit was the person..the baby is innocent… person's deed make him wrong… not the family …

these lines had so many emotions captured in them

they carried such a beautiful meaning

this was an amazing story di

just adored it to the fullest

They shall not grow old,
As we who are left grow old,
Age shall not weary them
Nor the years condemn.
At the going down of the sun
And in the morning
We shall remember them.

Lest we forget.

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