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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mani24

Hey meri jaan se bhi pyari di me back from EID vacations aur di I missed u sooo much missed writing to u lekin ab am back aur di this new story is just MINDBLOWING aur di aapki har story mere liye SPECIAL hai kyunki it's frm u for our maaneet aur di me waiting eagerly for this one jaldi se likhna me waiting now 😉



muaaahhh love u 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya111111

any story from u will always make me to follow

congrats dear



thank u sweety 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aaja mainbhi waiting😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

waiting jaldi de
aur aaj hi khatam kar😳



will try kal tak toh kardongi 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yet another story...
congrats dear...
will be waiting for the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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new story!!!!!!!!!😃😃
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my q
did she lv someone before??😆
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Originally posted by: tiakashyap

my q
did she lv someone before??😆



haan tia
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1:


You don't have a choice beta, you know how much your mother loves maan ... Woh maan ko apna damaad bohut pehle hi maan chuki thi, now its on you to decide if you still want to hold the one sided love you have for rahul or move on with maan who loves you, mohinder patted geet's back who looked at the unconscious form of her mother simran. The face of her mother seemed very normal she wondered if in real she was sick. Geet walked out of the room with slow steps, her mind still lingered around rahul, the one name which has been her world since childhood. The love, the warmth she had always felt seemed to be an illusion now ... It was his friendship that she mistook for love. She came down by walking to the ground floor probably it took her an hour as her mother was admitted in the fifteenth floor of London's costly hospital. Her driver tried to call her, his voice went deaf to her ... she didn't kow where the road was leading her to ... badly trapped between her love she had for rahul and the friendship she had with maan. How would she forget the twenty years she had spent with rahul? Whom she desired more than anything, his name ran in her veins, his existence filled her memory. But when the sight of rahul proposing to sameera came infront she fell on the ground weeping helplessly. It was her mistake to even take a normal friendship to something else, she suddenly felt rahul holding her by arm making her stand on feet. He wiped her tears and pointed at something ... geet looked at the direction, closed her eyes with the light that fell on her and fainted!!



Geet!! ... He screamed stopping the car and reached to hold her before she falls ... geet ... kya hua?? ... geet akhen kholo, maan patted her cheeks getting worried. She opened her eyes to see the future, she shoved his hands and looked around, rahul was nowhere and that was when geet understood it was god's decision too. He wanted her to move on!! It wasn't that easy yet she will have to, she cannot let her mother and father to suffer, but agreeing to marriage with maan would be a betrayal to him. she wont be able to love him like she always loved rahul, geet stared at maan who was taken aback with the way she pushed him. she simply sat in the car all numb to curse god, curse her fate.



A person whom she loved always taken her to a friend and a person whom she had taken as a friend loved her!! but in all this geet understood maan's pain ... because she was going through the same stage. She loved rahul who is in love with sameera, maan was someone whom she could relate with her babaji, any girl would be lucky to have a husband like him.



Maan I am ready for the marriage, mujhe bas mama ko bachana hai she told as he was taking the driver seat. Well he had nothing to say coz only he knows what simran mean to him ... she had been his support like a mother after he lost his parents. Probably more than geet she loved him, that's the reason she wanted him as geet's husband. now when she was on a life and death question maaneet couldn't back from their responsibility. That very evening geet and maan got married in the hospital and for that reason it was a secret one, simran and mohinder blessed the couple only maaneet knew what they felt like during marriage fighting within fearing how they would maintain this relation. Simran hugged them with utmost happiness although sad that the most happiest moment of her life had to go this way.



She promised herself for a proper marriage for she knew maaneet they will honor this relation ... no one would be able to separate them. That night geet shifted to maan;s house, well she was no more living ... A dead body indeed. As she entered their room, her legs involuntarily headed towards the bed, she lay on it with all her feelings draining away. She cried for god knows till when, maan couldn't face the agony geet was having, his feeling of being a culprit began to eat him up alive.



It was their suhaag raat officially and geet cried the whole night and drifted to sleep as some realization dawned in her, she knew what she has to do now ... after a little while Maan came inside, he saw her pale face which was gloomy, he removed her jewellary to let her sleep comfortably, that was when he decided he wouldn't let geet to force herself into this relation, nobody knew they were married, all he wanted was simran well being ... he will free geet when she would want to go away!!



A day passed geet was still in the same clothes, sleeping on the bed his heart ached to see her like that ... he understood she didn't even have food. Maan decided to talk to geet and tell her that she will lead a normal life like she used to!! He wont claim her anyway, he would set her free from the burden she had with this relation. Why was she being so normal he thought he would finish this once with a heavy heart he spoke ... Geet you don't need to do all this ... main bas yeh kehna chahta tha ki you are free, koi nahi jaanta ki we are married, I give you back your freedom, I give you back your life, bas kuch din we can part our ways he said showing his back to geet. She knew he would say all that but being a girl she would never be able to move on that too with the marriage, with the mangalsutr, the sindoor the new life. She was lucky enough to get him, a person who loves her.



She turned maan to face him and said ... Oh you you want to free me now?? Do you even know what this marriage means to me now?? Kitna aasnaan tha tumhare liye kehna that you free me ... lekin maan mere liye maeri shaadi sabse badke hai ... though I am brought up in London I know my limits ... I am girl and know my life is around you, even if you leave me main tumhari biwi banke jeyongi with you ... without you!! shaayad main tumhe woh pyar nahi depaongi jot um mujhse karte ho lekin ill give myself to you in ever which way that is possible ... aur rahi baat mama ki she wants us to be together for a life, jis din hum alag hue uss din woh mar jayengi, agar tumhe lagta hai ki she will accept out separation toh yeh kabhi nahi hoga, shaadi kiya hai mazaak nahi, geet said with a finality in her tone.




A month passed maan was getting suffocated with geet being around him all the time, she would do everything that a wife does for her husband. He would have felt happy if they were like every normal couple but this was different. He felt she is forcefully doing it for making a dead relationship alive, how can he forget what she said, she wont be able to love him the way she loved rahul?? Marriage can never work without love. This fact began to take a toll on maan, a guilt ran through him feeling helpless to do anything to give happiness for geet.




He began to work more trying to stay away as much as he can thinking atleast he wont trouble her with his presence. But nobody knew that the inevitable had to happen, that night geet went back to her home, to her parents as they held a hawan. Maan came late as he was loaded with work, by the time he made out hawan was over and the women were busy talking to geet talking to her, nobody knew that she was married. They began to suggest their respective sons for her, which maan did not miss listening to!!




He just left without saying a word as his mind began to eat him up for the helplessness he had, he couldn't even claim his wife in front of them.



Precap: His passion, her submission ... A regret!!


taani this story is for u sweety!! as i already told you what u mean to me!!


NOTE:

Raw 18+ part so majority of it ill post on blog not here!! I am going to remove silent readers from the blog!!

And about the next part I donno how many of you will accept it but yes it would be unacceptable coz maan would be almost forcing geet so please if you don't like it avoid it don't bash me for it!!


NEXT PART:

PART 2

Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yepiii giving first part
precap is so so...
waiting

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