Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 17

Wonderful plot.very beautiful portray 👏

fabulous update. sad by learning about geet past. hope asad babu dont insult our geet. waiting for next

AWESUM' SUPERB UPDATE 😊 👏

Maan got to know about Geet's painful nd sad past, and he was in tears 😭 .

Luved Geet nd Meera's conversation, she really cares for Meera. And Asad he really doesn't like the way Geet dresses, or maybe just doesn't like her

Hope this Asad doesn't throw Geet out or cause any problems 😡

Waiting for next chapter

I luuuv dis movieee...just saw it last week on starmovies...
Love to read more

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

that was amazing hun.. love ur plot.. soo maan is helping geet but deep inside has already started falling for her.. oh no ab asad ka kya probkem hai.. hope geet is able to mske him let her stay.. cont soon hun..

Thanks a lot😊

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

omg.. this is really shocking past.. must say Geet is so lucky that she is safe till date & got a very good friend like Meera.. gr8 going Asad seems very strict..

thnx for pm..waiting for next part😊

Yep! Geet was verylucky to escape relatively unscathed!

Originally posted by: yappingduck

thats incredibly awesome...
geet's past was heartrendingly painful..its a wonder that she still maintains her cheerful and happy go lucky persona, inspite of having had to undergo so much..
glad that maan wants to help her out of her pitiful life..
the convo between meera and geet was breezy..and lovable

asad seems to be intriguing and conservative and narrow minded, making inference about a person from first impressions...looking forward to know what role he has to bring maan and geet closer..
loving the way the story is shaping up

I am so glad that u read the updates with so much attention. Thanks hun!😊

Originally posted by: flopsy

AWESUM' SUPERB UPDATE 😊 👏

Maan got to know about Geet's painful nd sad past, and he was in tears 😭 .

Luved Geet nd Meera's conversation, she really cares for Meera. And Asad he really doesn't like the way Geet dresses, or maybe just doesn't like her

Hope this Asad doesn't throw Geet out or cause any problems 😡

Waiting for next chapter

Thanks hun😊

AGAIN A SUPERB UPDATE

Originally posted by: maanland

AGAIN A SUPERB UPDATE

LOVED THE WAY U MIXED GEET'S PAST

LOVED THE WAY U DESCRIBED MAAN'S FEELINGS HIS TURMOIL HIS PAIN HIS DREAM LIKE PAST 24 HOURS IN THE CAR

VERY WELL WRITTEN

GIVING WORDS TO EACH AND EVERY DEEP DEEP THOUGHTS

👏

IT WAS REALLY VERY CREATIVE OF YOU TO CHANGE THE ORIGINAL AND BRING GEET'S PAST INTO THE PICTURE

AND THAT TOO GEET DID NOT NARRATE THIS

LOVED THE REPORT OF THE DETECTIVE

INDEED A VERY PAINFUL PAST OF GEET

BUT NOW MAAN IS HERE SO GEET DOESNT HAVE TO WORRY

HAI NA

😊😊

YOU SAID THAT U DONT HAVE CREATIVITY SO YOU CANT WRITE A FULL FLEDGED PLOT

BUT THE WAY YOU ARE INDIANISING THE PRETTY WOMAN

IS REALLY COMMENDABLE

INDIANISING AS YOU ARE PUTTING ALL THE CORRECT EMOTIONS TO THIS STORY

SO THAT WE ARE GLUED TO IT

MAAN'S EMOTIONS HIS CONCERN HIS CARE ARE MAKING IT EVEN MORE INTERESTING

KEEP IT UP DEAR👏👏👏

YES IT WOULD BE GOOD IF WE READ GEET'S SHOPPING AND THEN ASAD AND GEET'S CONVO IN A NEW UPDATE

SO EAGER FOR NEXT

P.S. SORRY FOR THE LATE COMMENT

GOT BUSY IN RAKHI

Finally You are here!🤗 I checked the thread number of times just to see that familiar all capital comment by my favt reader here! Missed you, even if it was only for a day😳 You liked my digress! I am so glad! I was rally worried if this tampering would adversely affect the otherwise classic plot. But then i thght a back story was needed to explain her naviety! Yes Maan is here for her. But dont forget he too is wounded and needs her in the same way! Mutual gratification😊

Hope you had a fantastic time at Rakhi. I did😆