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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: Diva7
Arakshit😉

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

For someone I imagine Suta this way

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Diva7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Susegad

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tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

hi palin ..

i try not to read incomplete stories in forum but after reading ur hemalini and laddo ,i just can't stop to read this one too ..

but when i read it i was cursing myself why i started this ...the story started with chidi ..our lovely geet but slowly took a turn i never imagine ..specially the part where pammi get her married ..she was simply taking revenge from geet even when she was not at fault ...she suffered a hell ..i thought u wil stop but u made her mother at age of 14 ,this is so hell ..i was cursing all the people who spoiled geet ,cut her wings before she take first flight ...

maan what a description father at age of 26 ..well i don't mind as he is raising geet child ..but now i fear for day when geet will know abt suta's reality ...geet suffered a lot in her life and at time when she was unknown to cruelty of life ..her innocence ,her childhood all shattered but i hope now u will not make her suffer more and shower little happiness on her too ..

waiting for update soon ..

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

do i have to say... i missed u? u already know that😳...reading u made me realise more how much we missed u... welcome back palin...🤗

u have made the simple and loveable word to khatharnaak ... "COOL" 😆

reading just the front of the T , like maan , i too had thought whats so cool about it? but reading the back cracked me up... and the fact that maan didnt saw the back of the T before wearing made me more laugh...

if i had known about the words in the back ... i wonder what pic would i put😆

love sutas and anus bond.. i envy it 😳

maan niharofying mother daughter duo moment was sweet... geet too doesnt need words to understand suta...

am so eager to know how u have planned to meet maan geet and suta... maan and geet have just met... suta nearly hates maan... and when the truth comes up what will happen to geet and suta... but along with all that am more looking forward for much more laughing riots from u...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Poor maan bhura phasa lovely update waiting 4 maan reaction when he come to known about suata plan

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valli30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

lovely update

poor maan suta ki cool ke chakkar mai kya kya karna pad raha hai😆

geet getting emotional listening to the word mother😭

sab maan ko ghoor rahe hai poor him

waiting for next part

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Beautiful update.

The back drop of the story is Awesome n very sensitive.

The start of the story was heart wrenchfull. Rano's love for Geet is never ending. The way she tried to shield her from every pain n destruction is Out of world. Still Geet had to face the heinous crime. Wat amazed me is her level of innocence. So pure like a dew n untouched by nature.
She didn't understand wat game fate played with her.
That part brought tears in my eyes.

Rano n Mohinder's continuous support to Geet like a parent was unbelievable n so touching. Wat her own family couldn't do they did. Feel like killing Pammi. Darji did best to himself by killing himself. Wat they could do to the little child in name of honour was like a nightmare.

Jab family hi aisi ho tab dusro se kya expect karna. Ashok did a sin n crime to 14 yrs kid.

Geet was sad for her pregnancy not beoz of the obvious but becoz she couldn't play, cudnt get out of her room. She hated the baby.

Ashok character later on was confusing. He repented for his deeds but cudnt love his daughter. Admired n had a good relationship with Maan but cud not give his daughter time, love.

The personality of Suta n her behavior was justified given her upbringing.

Maan took up the responsibility as her father. But Suta remained indifferent to him. He tried his best to develop a good bond but she needs a good time to accept the change in her life.

Hindi professor incident was dam funny. Everything is sexy.
Maan behaviour toward his mom is unacceptable. It hurt her most. But Maan would understand this only in Suta's way.

Whatever prank does Suta play with Maan I don't know whether to pity Maan or think that he deserves this n needs a little bit taste of his own medicine.

He has to become a cool dude for his daughter now. The slogan was hilarious. From where did u got it.

Chance meeting with his dream girl. Want to know more abt this Geet.

Hats off to u for such a FF that u hv given us. Its my pleasure to read. Thank u for this beautiful FF.

Pls Continue soon.

Edited by crazydream - 11 years ago