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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 51 -
Sorry for being so late lateeef
Lovely update...👏

atlast!! Maan told Geet about Karan's ill intensions..

it was so sad to know what Veer beared in his childhood...still he is so nyc person!!
Kamina karan took advandate of anjali's unconcious state..😡😡

he took wrong advantage of his knowledge abt making a persong half concious..😡😡
hope nothing will go wrong!!😕😕
waiting for next update sooon 😊



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Before Geet protest she was made sit on the bed & was lifted in few minutes.He took her carefully to washroom & dipped her body inside the warm water.She hissed feeling the water enter inside her thighs & relaxed immediately feeling the warm water.He too joined her cradling her back inside his hard frame.He softly held her waist & massaged it.Then he rubbed her back which made her whimper in pain.Their love making made her body ache & he gently massaged it dipping inside the warm water.She got relief when he cared her tenderly.He pecked her lips & asked,"Feeling alright jaan?"She nodded & arched her back rubbing it to his naked frame & leaned & slept keeping her head inside his chest.He snaked her waist gently & slowly rocked backwards & forwards so that she feels peace after numerous love making.




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PART 53




Geet stirred in her bed & turned to feel the lack of warmth.Maan was not in bed & she turned to see Maan was absent in the room.She heard Maan's voice ordering servants from outside.She got up & saw she was still naked as he had made her sleep after their warm bath.He had took care of her tenderly,massaging her soft body which was aching due to their love making.She blushed remembering their bath how he tenderly took care of softness which was sore.How he kissed her every inch & let her relax inside his arms.She was overwhelmed seeing his love & some tears trickled from her almond eyes.On that time Maan entered screaming for servants & saw her crying & asked,"Jaan..why r u crying?Do u have still pain?"She wiped it & nodded no to him & snaked her arms around his neck & pressed her curves to his rock chest & said,"I love u!"
















His smile broadened & pecked her swollen lips & said,"I love u too!"He snaked his arms around her small waist.She saw his wide eyes which had some kind of pain & asked,"What is it Maan,tell me?"His eyes widened but softened immediately & kissed her forehead & said,"Get ready for camp jaan!"She was shocked & asked,"Now?"He nodded & lifted her in his arms & made her sit on the balcony swing.He sat beside her & kissed her forehead while she corrected the blanket around her.He saw this & snaked his arms around her waist & hid her soft body inside his hard frame.She protested,"Maan..i dont want to go alone!I want u there as my confidante!"Maan pecked her lips & said,"Trust me Geet...u wont be alone there!"She pouted but hugged him tightly.He was overwhelmed seeing her love as he knew that he will be alone & she dont want him to be alone in this troubled times.














But he lastly convinced her in great difficulty with his own words & some passionate moments where he loved her crazily.She knew he's gonna miss her so much & she knew his body language but they dint know what will be result of this passion. He dressed her dutifully & said painfully,"I'll miss u so much jaan!"Before Geet would protest once again he muted her & said,"But i cant neglect ur health too,so u need to go from here before i become weak!"She showed her almond does longingly & he pushed her softly seeing her stare,"Jaan go!"She pouted & sat inside the car.He drove the car glancing her from the corner of his eyes.The journey was silent as she was moody & it killed him from inside seeing her so silent.But he also knew that she's gonna adjust to the new environment in absence of him as they're gonna go to their tree house.















He stopped in front of their farm house & she asked,"Maan why we came here?Are we gonna enjoy our honeymoon once again?"She asked that with cute blush.He chuckled & said,"Jaan..if u insist then we will come here for our second honeymoon in future but right now u r here for ur camp jaan in absence of me!"Her eyes widened & turned to see a girl walking towards them.It was Naina who hugged Maan which made Geet feel jealous.Before she blast Veer came there & hugged both Maaneet & said to Naina,"Jaan take care of Geet,we will be off now leaving u guys!"Naina nodded to him while he kissed her forehead while Maan smiled at Veer mischievously.















Veer whacked his head & he glared at him.Geet dint see this cosy up scene but was burning in jealousy & said,"Stop right there Maan!"Maan & Veer looked up while Naina too stood puzzled.She was a bit confused seeing Geet's bossiness.Maan turned & raised his eyebrows asking from his eyes,"What's up?"When Geet asked angrily,"Who's she..u guys dint introduce us each other?"Maan saw Veer with raised eye brow as Veer too saw Maan likewise.Then both saw Geet's possessiveness in her words.Naina saw her intently..importantly her almond eyes which oozed possessiveness & she felt some kind of jealousy as she was talking to her husband bossily.















Veer saw his jaan whose expressions were changing & immediately cleared his throat to draw attention towards him as he knew that the cat fight is gonna start if he wont handle the situation!Veer answered,"Geet she's my wife..Mrs.Naina Shekhawat!"Both the ladies saw him with mouth hanging open & wide eyes.Maan whispered in his ear,"Dont tell me that u never addressed Naina like that in front of everyone!"Veer glared at him & turned to see Naina seeing them suspiciously.While Geet blurted out without thinking,"Veerji i dint know that u r married..i thought u r still bachelor & was thinking of hooking u up with Sasha madam..she apparently have crush on u..am mean on u both!"Veer saw Naina gulping his saliva while she glared at him keeping her hands on her hips.But he said abruptly,"Ugh i hate that white cockroch,always bossing around!"Naina immediately hid her face which was abt to crack with laughter.Veer's eyes softened seeing his jaan who was all the way trying to control her laughter.














Maan saw Naina too gulping his saliva & asked,"Jaan is it the time for that revelation!Just start ur class jaan u r wasting ur time!"Naina glared at Maan & Veer.But Geet innocently was abt to start her question bank when Veer closed her mouth from his palm,"My little sister..i do know that u r innocent but dont make me fall in trouble with ur innocence!"Maan stabbed his foot glaring to leave her when she bit his palm pouting prettily.Veer screamed in pain and made all kind of faces.Maan laughed heartily while Naina glared at Geet.Naina came forward & asked,"Are u alright?I think i need to throw some manners inside ur wife Maan veerji..she dont know how to behave in front of elders!"Maan glared at her while Geet's eyes widened hearing the word Maan veerji & she hid her tears feeling disgust of herself for burning in goddamned jealousy.














Maan knew what she was thinking & immediately dragged her from Veer & Naina.While Naina tend Veer hugging him.Geet was a bit upset for leaving Maan like that so she was behaving childishly.Maan dragged her to the corner & took her lips into very hot & soul searing kiss.He stroked his tongue with gently stokes & coaxed her soft lips from his sculpted lips.She melted feeling his kiss & stroked his silky soft hair.After deep lush kiss he left her breathless panting heavily & leaned his forehead on hers & spoke to her just like a father is speaking to his baby girl but the love was of partner love,"Jaan...i do know u r worried abt me..but this is for ur health..am suppressing my desires for ur health but cant u compromise for me?"She cried silently & said in quivered voice,"Maan!"He wiped her tears & pecked her swollen lips one last time & said,"Be good & healthy!"













Geet nodded while he pulled her from him & walked backwards holding her hand & drinking her from his eyes.Her angelic face...her curvaceous body..her almond eyes which showed his longing which made his heart squeezed in pain.But still he left her along with Veer while tears poured down from almond eyes seeing him going far away from him.Maan left her not seeing behind as he knew he would melt seeing her longing tears.Their love was spread inside each other's body like blood.Along with food particles & oxygen the blood was also transferring love to every cell of their body & now they were missing each other crazily.It was only seconds separation which made them crave crazy for each other.














Maan came back to KM in great difficulty & entered inside his room to calm himself but it made him crave Geet more.He saw her laughter echoing & her moans when he was inside her constantly made him more hard.He remembered her pouting cutely at him & laughing with him when he tickled.Now he understood her turmoil that why she dont wanted to leave him anyway.Here Geet was no less.Though Naina took care of her still she was craving for his touch.His breath on her skin to make herself home.His warm skin which always gave a lovely warmth made her desperate.At midnight Maan woke with the start feeling uneasy.He was feeling the lack of her warmth.He felt his throat has not been supplied by air which can reach his lungs.He was craving for her blissful scent.He groaned & walked past his room to his balcony where he had made love to her on the very same swing when she was refusing to attend.She was always a stubborn girl & her gesture always made him hard.Actually her every gesture made him hard.















He closed his mouth to feel the air when he felt her scent in the air.He sighed & turned to get Geet there.He was shocked & asked,"Geet what r u doing here?"But she dint gave him oppurtunity to talk further as she sealed her mouth on his chiseled mouth.He groaned anticipatedly & deepened kiss and after a second or two he realised that he was imagining things.Geet wasnt there.Likewise Geet too had felt Maan's presence as she had slept in the very same room where they had made love to each other in their first honeymoon.Naina had decided to take care of her from next morning & she was missing Maan badly.She had imagined Maan licking her softness & she feeling his hardness inside her.She groaned & chill spread inside her body feeling the cold breeze.She wrapped herself inside the blanket & had stood seeing the full moon...craving for his touch.After sometime she cudnt stand there due to her sleepiness & she had went & slept on the bed feeling his warmth.At abt 2 in the morning she felt something heavy draped around her & it was so hot.She felt so hot & soft.She was scared feeling it & before she would scream a soft palm pressed her petal lips & a voice whispered in her ears,"Dont be afraid jaan,it's me Maan!"She opened her almond eyes & saw a pair of beautiful eyes stare back at her.He kissed her forehead & said,"Sleep on jaan..u gonna get interesting day tomorrow!"She cutely smiled but asked,"Missed me so much!"Maan said,"Hmm!"Nipping her soft chin.She whimpered feeling his razor sharp teeth & felt his hands enter inside her blanket.















He glared at her,"Sleeping naked jaan..what do Naina think?"Geet said boldly,"She wont think anything as she's a girl too but i want to blame u..u spoiled me to sleep naked!U always rip off my dresses every night & make ur body as my clothes!"She felt a tug on her right breast & felt his palm cupping it.Maan groaned,"Do u know what it makes...it makes me hard to f**k u senseless!"She whacked his arms & complained,"Shameless!"He chuckled while he mouthed her tender nipple.She moaned feeling his lips which was rounding making her nipple hard.He worked with his mouth making her breasts tender,swollen & achy,craving more.He groaned erotically while his another hand enter inside the blanket & went towards her thighs.He softly opened it & inserted his finger & said erotically groaning with ecstacy,"U r wet jaan!"She let out a soft moan when he groaned sexily,"This makes me f*** u more senselessly!"She blushed while he said pecking her petal lips,"But we can wait for the right time!"She protested flexing her hips to his fingers while he admonished,"If u act like this jaan..then am not gonna come home every night!"Her eyes widened & she saw towards him & immediately started whacking him... will give next in next update





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He glared at her,"Sleeping naked jaan..what do Naina think?"Geet said boldly,"She wont think anything as she's a girl too but i want to blame u..u spoiled me to sleep naked!U always rip off my dresses every night & make ur body as my clothes!"She felt a tug on her right breast & felt his palm cupping it.Maan groaned,"Do u know what it makes...it makes me hard to f**k u senseless!"She whacked his arms & complained,"Shameless!"He chuckled while he mouthed her tender nipple.She moaned feeling his lips which was rounding making her nipple hard.He worked with his mouth making her breasts tender,swollen & achy,craving more.He groaned erotically while his another hand enter inside the blanket & went towards her thighs.He softly opened it & inserted his finger & said erotically groaning with ecstacy,"U r wet jaan!"She let out a soft moan when he groaned sexily,"This makes me f*** u more senselessly!"She blushed while he said pecking her petal lips,"But we can wait for the right time!"She protested flexing her hips to his fingers while he admonished,"If u act like this jaan..then am not gonna come home every night!"Her eyes widened & she saw towards him & immediately started whacking him...



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PART 54




Whack! Whack! Whack! Whack! Whack! Whack!..."Jaan stop it!"screamed Maan shielding his hands from her.Geet cutely held his hands & snaked it around her small waist & hovered over him.She glared at him & asked,"Why dint u tell me that u r gonna come at night?"He chuckled seeing her anger & softly pecked her lips.She melted feeling his rough sculpted lips & blushed.He adjusted her on him correctly & said,"Jaan if i told u then i would never see ur cute anger!"She pouted & asked worriedly,"Did i hurt u?"Maan smiled & nodded while she started kissing his chest.He groaned badly & immediately pushed her from him.She pouted while he said huskily,"Watch out mishty...this time u r not gonna make me tempted!"She pouted once again & turned that side while he calmly explained,"Jaan...i know that u cant live without me a second & i too feel the same way.But i cant neglect ur health.Just be urself jaan here.I know i affect u so much but for me be urself here..the way u used to be in starting.When i was hating ur mere presence,when i wanted to punish u for Sam's deed.I love u so much jaan & i want u fit & fine!"















Geet said,"But am fine Maan..am healthy!Look at my appearance..what happened to me?"Maan said slowly making her sleep on his body,"Jaan u r healthy...but mentally u need to be healthy.I know all those sufferings has made u so unstable...that's why i arranged this camp so that u can discuss with Naina!Jaan u need to tell her everything...she's no enemy..think her as ur elder sister & spill ur insecurities.I will be present with u too in this counselling & will help u jaan!"He dint get any answer from her & looked down to see she was sleeping peacefully.There was a cute smile on her lips.He smiled & softly pecked her forehead when she more snuggled rubbing her soft body innocently & arousing him in every way.He softly groaned & pecked her forehead once again & he too slept cocooning her inside his embrace.













Next morning Geet woke with start & found herself empty in bed.She called,"Maan!"He wasnt there as he had gone to KM to take care of office.No one knew abt Geet's counselling & camp except Veer,Maan & Naina.Geet walked towards the living room still wrapping herself in blanket when she noticed Naina who was sipping coffee.Naina answered,"Maan went home at 6 am..now it is 8...Geet get ready for the counselling...he will be coming at abt 10am!"Geet was delighted & she bathe & was outside in 30 minutes.She prepared his favourite breakfast & sat to eat it.Naina was observing her intently.Her face when she was preparing Maan's favourite dish & then blushing furiously remembering their passionate moments.One thing Naina got clear that Geet loved Maan deeply & Maan too loved Geet seeing him last night.














Naina smiled seeing Geet's face which had a glow hearing Maan gonna come back to support her.She was so happy..as if she got a biggest power.She saw her movements silently when she was preparing his dishes to take that to his lunch.Geet knew that he's gonna starve if the lunch wont be delicious.She knew that he even get angry if he wont get perfect & delicious lunch.Naina saw Geet's love in that too & admired her.She never thought how Geet came in his life & settled permanently.Geet even changed Maan's behaviour but also made him soft & gentle to others too.Or else he was famous for egoist,hot tempered guy.Naina saw Geet thoroughly when she heard the horn of Maan's car.Geet's eyes widened with excitement & then Naina got to know that her world revolves around him only.













Maan entered wearing his usual white office attire looking more hot & mouthwatering.Geet immediately ran to him & threw herself on him while he cradled her on his hard frame kissing her forehead.Naina observed Maaneet..their bonding...his love which always showed in his eyes...while her cute blush seeing his naughty eyes.It was a treat to Naina's eyes seeing their love for each other.She saw how Geet made him sit on dining table & served breakfast for him.She even told him to take lunch for office as it is his favourite.How he glowed seeing his favourite dishes and that too prepared by Geet.He kissed Geet's knuckles in appreciation & love & also with gratitude.She blossomed once again in his love blushing profusely.He kissing her forehead chuckling seeing her cute blush.She was looking more yummier than Maan with that cute blush & it was a treat for Naina's eyes.Naina's eyes welled up seeing their bond..their love..two broken children giving strength to each other in their bad times & loving each other in happy times.It was so blissful view to see Maaneet's love which Naina was witnessing.Naina's lips crept into a broad smile & remembered Veer's words abt Maaneet.














Naina turned & wiped her tears & said to herself,"Karan,i wont let u destroy this happy family!I'll teach her whatever i know..everything..which can destroy...every small thing which i know abt u!I wont let u destroy Geet.Geet will destroy u and am sure she will...u will be destroyed from her only.U will see ur downfall from her.Get ready to face Mrs.Geet Maan Singh Khurana!"On that time Geet came & said smiling,"Naina,what r u doing here?Have breakfast with us!"Naina stroked her cheek lovingly & nodded to her & walked with her.Maan had finished breakfast already & was ready to go office.He saw Naina & gave a curt nod while she returned it & said,"Maan...from today onwards Geet's therapy gonna start..so i need ur help in this very much.U need to be with her helping her.Can u adjust ur timings?"Maan nodded & said,"Sure Naina..anything for my Geet!Will clear my schedule & come back tomorrow.Till then u need to manage urself!"Naina said,"No problem!"
















Geet said to Maan,"Come for dinner here Maan,am gonna prepare ur favourites only!"Naina smiled while he chuckled to her,"So u r holding me near u with those dishes!"She blushed while he laughed heartily.Geet knew that she was preparing this just to make him stay here too but Maan caught her plans but loved the way she always tried to hold him back Maan pecked her forehead & said,"Laters baby!"And he walked past her with top speed.




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Geet had closed her eyes & had sat folding her legs in Padmaasana posture.Naina said slowly,"Now drain all ur thoughts..every sorrow & happiness..make ur mind blank!"Geet tries to do that but she was reminded of the kidnap & the almost rape by Vikram & she sweats & opens her eyes.Naina said angrily,"Dont u have any guts to control it?Fear is an enigma Geet..if u want to overcome it then u need to face it...& when people get to know that fear is the key to scare weak people like u then u r dead..they make u as living dead body!"Geet said angrily,"Am not weak!"Naina said glaring at Geet,"Then prove it...control ur mind..face the fear..live the pain u felt in past..then only u can overcome the pain & fear!Be strong Geet & then see no one is gonna defeat u!"
















Geet closes her eyes with attitude but she cudnt attempt to face her past.The more she tried to face it..the more she got weaker.Naina was abt to provoke when Geet said,"I need a break Naina!"Naina saw her almond eyes shrewdly & then nodded & said,"Will make tea for u!"Naina walked towards the kitchen when Geet turned & saw around her.She saw the place where Maan had did love making with her making her sore.Geet walked & saw the couch where he once had grabbed her & had did love making till she was sore.She blushed & Naina said holding the tea,"U feeling good Geet?"Geet nodded while Naina continued,"U know why u r here?"Geet nodded & spoke...




Precap-Teaser

Angad held Maan's legs & said,"Am sorry Maan..i was blind with rage & Karan poured oil to my fire.He murdered Anjali & accused u as culprit.Now i got to know abt this!"He gave the diary,CD & camera to Maan & said,"I have got evidence to arrest Karan Maan!"Maan took it & immediately gave it to Veer calling him.Veer entered KM to get Angad in sight.He was abt to blast at him when Maan said,"Take a look at this evidence Veer before u blast at Angad!"Veer saw the evidence & was shocked & asked,"Anjali loved u Maan?"Maan nodded yes to him & said,"And i dint know abt that..if i knew then i would never make Anjali as the victim of Karan.Though i wouldnt love her..i would save her life!"Veer kept his comforting hand on his shoulder while Angad got to know to see Maan's true colors.He felt disgusted to destroy Maan's life...


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Part 52 -

Reposting it here i commented in blog too 😆😆
my blog username is angelmaahii 😆😆

ufff!!! smoking hot update it was 😉😳

it was so passionate but well written loved it so very much...👏
Loved Geet;s determination to become strong and face the world..
now be ready to see THE GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA 😳

chotu sa tha..i want a long one...

finally Maan is free from burden of hiding things from his lady love his wify!!!

umm waiting to read more wanna see how Maan will stay away from geet and how Geet will stay away from Maan 😉😛😆
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Geet closes her eyes with attitude but she cudnt attempt to face her past.The more she tried to face it..the more she got weaker.Naina was abt to provoke when Geet said,"I need a break Naina!"Naina saw her almond eyes shrewdly & then nodded & said,"Will make tea for u!"Naina walked towards the kitchen when Geet turned & saw around her.She saw the place where Maan had did love making with her making her sore.Geet walked & saw the couch where he once had grabbed her & had did love making till she was sore.She blushed & Naina said holding the tea,"U feeling good Geet?"Geet nodded while Naina continued,"U know why u r here?"Geet nodded & spoke...

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PART 55




Here both Maan and Veer stood silent feeling uncomfortable and the reason of their uncomfortableness stood in the very same room.Angad Khanna who stood holding all the proofs dint spoke for a second or two while Maan was breathing heavily keeping his right hand on the nearby wall.He held it more tightly making his muscles flex with every breath of Angad which he took there.Veer was no less as he was remembering how Geet had suffered due to him after losing her baby.Angad had a black eye & his lips & nose were bleeding giving the impression that someone had punched him!It was Maan who had punched him seeing Angad sitting in his office in KM.Veer had come to the office on that time and had held Maan strongly so that he wont mess anything around as he had seen punching Angad.



















Finally Angad broke the silence falling to Maan's feet.Angad held Maan's legs & said,"Am sorry Maan..i was blind with rage & Karan poured oil to my fire.He murdered Anjali & accused u as culprit.Now i got to know abt this!"He gave the diary,CD & camera to Maan & said,"I have got evidence to arrest Karan Maan!"Maan took it & immediately gave it to Veer calling him.Veer had entered his office to talk abt Angad when he got Angad in sight.He was abt to blast at him when Maan said,"Take a look at this evidence Veer before u blast at Angad!"When Veer entered on that time both Angad & Maan were fighting and Veer was abt to fight with Angad for Maan when Maan had punched Angad.Veer saw the evidence & was shocked & asked,"Anjali loved u Maan?"Maan nodded yes to him & said,"And i dint know abt that..if i knew then i would never make Anjali as the victim of Karan.Though i wouldnt love her..i would have save her life!We both would've saved her life!"Veer kept his comforting hand on his shoulder while Angad got to know to see Maan's true colors.He felt disgusted to destroy Maan's life...as he got to know how much Maan is humble.

















Veer decided to talk to his superior abt this along with the proofs while Angad went away not able to see them active to capture Karan.Angad dint know that his both friends are true friends.If he knew then he would never leave them.It was all becoz of Karan which made Angad to get separated and today he was repenting his every deed.Angad got inside his car and decided to confront Karan when he felt someone sitting inside beside him.He turned to get Karan who was smiling sinisterly.Angad was abt to punch him when he felt some pricky and saw his hand.Angad saw that he's been injected with some liquid from syringe and he pulled it from his skin.His face turned with anger and moved forward but in next second his eyes went dark and he fainted.In swift moment the car moved from KM silently.Maan dint see this as he was busy trying to get normal after Angad's incident.He knew that he dint act normally..he punched Angad out of anger..and all this happened in Geet's absence.















Geet always made Maan calm loving him in every possible way...erasing all his troubles and tensions from his mind...always cocooning him inside her arms and all this punching and losing control happened in absence of Geet.He knew that she's the one who can control him when he's in anger.In office also the staff always wished that Geet stay in office till they finish work as they knew that Maan's anger would go to top if he saw any carelessness in the work...if it is made mistakenly too.Maan wished he want to be with Geet but he dint wanted her to distract,but...



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"I cant Naina!"declared Geet finally when she was distracted of something from her meditation.She cant able to concentrate today.Naina searched her face and asked,"What's the reason of this restlessness Geet?"Geet saw her with amazement while Naina chuckled,"Dont forget am a psychiartist!"Geet looked away feeling embarassed.Naina went and made two cups of black coffee and came back to Geet and held a cup to her.Geet took it and took a sip.Relief flooded through her body as she was Caffeinated.Caffeine was acting as her sedative to kill pain.Geet said at once softly,"Am having headache!"Naina was shocked and asked,"What?Then why dint u tell me?Geet,this eye contact can make ur brain ache...this eye contact when u r trying to block hypnotism can addle ur brains...it can freeze the action of ur brain!How r u feeling now?"















Geet said,"I think Caffeine is curing my headache!"Naina searched her face once again and relief flooded through her body but she was a bit doubtful so she got up and said,"Will be back in an hour or two!"Geet was surprised and asked,"U r not gonna teach me further,am mean how to block hypnotism?"Naina took a deep breath and said,"Geet...i can say only two things!First...u need to concentrate!Second...u need to get strength from ur sufferings and that is gonna happen when u take that as positively..not blaming urself or fate or god...u need to master ur mind that whatever comes in ur life..u r gonna face it with full strength and positively..u wont try to give the strings of ur life to others to control it on their own accord...u need to become independent...u need to cross the pathway of darkness to reach the light!When u master this all...u will be the person who can control hypnotism!Geet..hypnotism means...not only the contact of the eye to eye where one person controls using eye to eye and dominate the weak person...some may have the power of hypnotising people by their speech...if it is right way then it is good..but if it is in wrong way..then we struck...that's what i want to say..if u wont determine...then my attempts will be wasted!"














Naina was abt to walk inside her room when she heard a soft whisper of Geet which was full of pain and disgust.Geet whispered painfully,"How can i determine Naina,when i get nightmares of it?I was nearly raped Naina by my own uncle and i lost my baby becoz of that...even today also i hear his maniacal laughter..his lustful eyes haunt me in my dreams...when he was abt to rape me!I begged for mercy..i even told him that am pregnant..but his venomous desire dint permit him to consider my condition!"Tears poured down from her almond eyes and her hand lingered on her stomach."Maan's flesh!"Some pearls fell on the ground too.Naina asked curiously,"U always get nightmares?"Naina nodded no to her and spoke,"I dont get it always as i will be with Maan always!But when am alone...then when i sleep alone then i get nightmares!"More pearls fell one the ground.Naina cudnt see her state and immediately cocooned her inside her embrace.Her eyes were moist too while Geet clung to her like life.Naina knew what will be mother's love as she was the mother too...Veer had two children too but he had kept it secret due to his profession.Even Maan dint knew abt their marriage...but got to know when Maan insisted Veer to marry a girl.














Naina closed her eyes and gave a friendly warmth while Geet cried silently.After sometime both felt someone around them when they both opened their eyes to see Maan standing there looking devastated but slightly drunk.Geet saw his blood red eyes and his position where he was trying to stand in difficulty.Geet walked towards him when he said ever so cutely pouting,"Why r u crying?I have took an vow to wipe off ur precious pearls when i was marrying u!"Geet saw him affectionately but she smelt alcohol and immediately glared him,"U have been drinking!"Maan pouted,"Shlight...!"He was looking more adorable in his cute pout and the drunkard tone.Geet smiled at him and slowly kissed his cheek and dragged him inside their room.















Naina silently went inside her room and switched on the MP3 player and turned on the full volume.Here Geet pushed him on the bed and stood folding her hands and glaring at him,"How many times i have to tell u to not to pour that scum?"Maan even so cutely got up and pulled her between his legs and hugged her stomach rubbing his nose.She softly moaned but try to free herself and asked,"Now why it was poured down ur throat..tell me!"Maan looked up and his sculpted lips widened with killer smile and said every so cutely,"I lub u for that..ash u alwaysh know me!"She glared at him while he shamelessly unzipped his pant zip and said with full dominance,"I want to feel u jaan!"She widened her eyes and in swift moment she was pulled to the bed and she was rolled and she was under him.













His droopy blood red eyes were piercing her with lustful desires.Geet melted seeing his gaze but try to control the situation,"Maan u r drunk..better to sleep rather than do this!"Maan said very painfully,"U wont get angry on me?"Geet asked getting scared of his painful tone,"For what?"Maan whispered in her ears painfully,"I punched him,that'sh why!"Geet was abt to ask who when she felt his hardness enter inside her feminine parts.She moaned feeling his hardness and hugged him with surrender.Maan thrusted his steely erection till she was sore and after that he slept on her only burying his face inside her soft neck.She was biting her lips feeling his uneven powerful thrusts as she was feeling the pain due to that thrusts.After sometime she felt him snoring happily and she kissed his forehead and slowly adjusted him on her correctly.He tightened his hold around her waist and slept like that only.





Precap-Naina saw her with shock as she had completely threw her hypnotism power.She hugged her and danced with joy.


PART 56




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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanvinangia

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Reposting it here i commented in blog too 😆😆
my blog username is angelmaahii 😆😆

ufff!!! smoking hot update it was 😉😳

it was so passionate but well written loved it so very much...👏
Loved Geet;s determination to become strong and face the world..
now be ready to see THE GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA 😳

chotu sa tha..i want a long one...

finally Maan is free from burden of hiding things from his lady love his wify!!!

umm waiting to read more wanna see how Maan will stay away from geet and how Geet will stay away from Maan 😉😛😆





Will surely give dear...dont worry gonna give back to back ud's of this FF tomorrow & day after tomorrow!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanvinangia

Part 51 -

Sorry for being so late lateeef
Lovely update...👏

atlast!! Maan told Geet about Karan's ill intensions..

it was so sad to know what Veer beared in his childhood...still he is so nyc person!!
Kamina karan took advandate of anjali's unconcious state..😡😡

he took wrong advantage of his knowledge abt making a persong half concious..😡😡
hope nothing will go wrong!!😕😕
waiting for next update sooon 😊







Yes dear some people will be like that only using their knowledge in wrong way😡
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ress for part 54 feedbck 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
ress for part 55 feedbck😆🤣
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Sooo hottt passionate & lovely update dear...
Loved it a lottt...
Maaneet's romance r as always outstanding...
Interesting precap...
Desperately waiting for next chapter...
Update soon plsss

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