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Posted: 12 years ago

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The Mist

For banner credit goes to my dear Laksmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.





Part - 9



Geet came in reality with d buzzing of her phone , it was an unknown number,, she received d call with confused expressions ... Hello

YSK: Guddu where r u beta ? we r searching u in whole house. He was sounding hell worried .


They all were gathered for BF and he asked for Guddu,, Dadima sent a servant to call her in Maan's room but d room was empty ,, Maan left for camping informing Nakul and he was not receiving any calls in his anger,, servant came back and said that no one is there in d room. They searched her every where ,,garden ,lobby,pool area and roof ,, they didn't have her phone number also and in panic YSK called Mahinder and asked her number making excuses ,, he didn't want to increase his tension .


Geet: I' m in upstairs in a room , i m coming down, I'm sorry.


YSK: OK , we r waiting come fast.


Geet went down and found all in main hall hell worried ,, Dadima and Yash rushed to her.


Dadima: Tum kahan thi beta sab jagah dekha , tum room mei to nahi thi?


Geet: wo last mei ek room hei , mei usme thi.


YSK: last mei ? wo to spare room hei store type ,, tum wahan kya ker rahi thi?


Geet was in fix ,, kya jawab du inn sabko? Abhi kahana theek nahi.


Geet: wo esse hi sochte-sochte wahan chali gai ,,i'm sorry aap sab pareshan hue meri wajah se,, kya hua ? kuch baat hei to kahiye.


Dadima: Guddu beta waise to sab disturb hi ho gaya lekin kuch rituals to ker le family ki khushi ke liye,, Aaj tumhara first day hei iss ghar mei mandir mei pooja ke baad kitchen mei thoda meetha banane ki rasam puri ker do.


Geet nodded in yes half heartedly ,, na bhi to nahi ker sakti inhe. JI, theek hei.


Dadima and YSK took her to KM temple ,, a beautiful pooja room ,, Geet lit Diyaa and performed pooja as Dadima guided her,,, after that she gave arti to all. Dadi brought her in kitchen and said that there r some relatives in out- houses so made some Halwa for all and then they left for their home .


YSK: beta tum bana sakogi ? nahi to Nakul bana dega tum bas help ker dena ,, Maa nahi aata to usse force matt kero.


Geet: no , it's ok , mei ker lungi ,, mujhe aata hei. Bui aur Preeti bhabhi ke sath kerti hu.


Dadima: beta itni casual dress ku pahane hei ? Aap un dresses mei se 1-2 le lo sab new to hei. She was not feeling good to see her like that.


Geet: nahi wo mei nehi le sakti please, mere pass hei ek aur dress kitchen se finish hoker mei change ker lungi , aap tension matt lijiye.


She went in kitchen to cook and all sat there at dining room


Dadima: Dev beta , Maan ne phone uthaya, pata chala wo kahan hei?


Dev: nahi Dadima, nahi uthaya.


YSK: Maa fiker matt karo, Mei location pata kerwata hu ,, wo pahale bhi to jata raha hei camping.


After few mins Geet came there with Nakul and placed a big bowl of hot and well garnished Halwa on table. All gave a smile to her and she returned that with a faint smile .Dadima ordered Nakul to send BF and Halwa for guests in out-house ,, he nodded and went back.


YSK : Guddu beitho beta humare sath BF kero aao.


But Geet was reluctant to sit there ,, she was fearing to face Maan.


Geet: nahi aap sab kijiye ,, mei baad mei ker lungi ,, mei kitchen mei hu , mera yahan rehana theek nehi ,, she moved back to go , but YSK stopped her.


YSK: Maan ghar mei nahi hei beta ,, don't worry wo camping ke liye chala gaya aur 2-3 din se pahale nahi aayega.


Geet : Please uncle I 'm not feeling good , ur one son is away from family coz of me. She really felt bad after listening that piece of news of his departure. She thought that he went out to avoid her presence.


Dadima: We all r feeling bad beta , but we r helpless ,, tum guilty feel matt kero ,, Yash pata laga rahe hei ki wo kahan camping ke liye gaye hei.


Geet served them BF and sat in a chair ,, all took their BF and praised her for making d delicious halwa.


Dadima went in her room and came back with a jewellery box in her hand and gave that to Geet.


Dadima: Guddu mai tumhe Geet bulaungi , tum iss ghar ki badi bahu ho ab ,, baki sab jo chahe bulay,, theek hei ,,aur ye tumhare liye ,, ye shagun hota hei beta na nahi kerna ,, aur ye humari khandani jewellery mei se hei.


Geet took that box and opened that there was a beautiful Kundan set.


Annie : WOW!!! Dadima it's so beautiful.


Geet: ye to kaffi costly hei ,, mei kaise lu aur mei iska kya karoongi ,, aap apne pass hi rakh lijiye ,, mei ye sab nahi sambhal sakti ,, mei to college jati hu .

Dadima: abhi guests aatey honge ,, abhi ke liye pahan lo ,, humare liye, please.


Geet kept that with her half heartedly,, she didn't want to take anything from them ,, nothing is belong to her.


Dadima told her to get ready because guests would be her after some time to meet her.


Dadima: Annie beta u help her.


Annie: Ji Dadima , mei abhi aai and she run to her room and came back with a packet in her hand. Chalo.


Geet and Annie went upstairs and Annie was surprised when Geet moved to other side not in towards Maan's room.


Annie: tum kahan ja rahi ho , room iss side hei.


Geet: nahi Annie mera bag wahi hei and moved to store room. Annie went behind her confused.



Precap - Guddu's new den ...




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Part - 10



Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


mein first aayi!!

lovely part!!!!

maans family is so... dont have word to describe them... pooja tho couple dono ko karni hothi hain... and they know that maan wont come ... and they also know that geet wont refuse.. so they are just making her do all and tying in the shackles!!

maan left??? its really sad to see that he chose the easiest option one can avail when we r facing problems.. bhaag jaaao!!!


Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
babie lakshu neend aarahi hai takk gayi hoon ismay ype karthe karthe
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

babie lakshu neend aarahi hai takk gayi hoon ismay ype karthe karthe


😊 jyada type matt ker..
short mei likho..😆😆
Aaj jiju ki nt shift hei kya..??😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😊 jyada type matt ker..
short mei likho..😆😆
Aaj jiju ki nt shift hei kya..??😊



short main bhi hum samajh jaayenge
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



😊 <font color="#cc0066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">jyada type matt ker..</font>
<font color="#cc0066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">short mei likho..😆😆</font>
<font color="#cc0066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Aaj jiju ki nt shift hei kya..??😊</font>



poora night shift aur kal bhi hai
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



short main bhi hum samajh jaayenge


😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



poora night shift aur kal bhi hai


Lappy ko kya hua..??😲

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