MG~ SS~The Mist ... UPDATED Pt11/Pg130/21st Oct ... .. .. .. ..... . - Page 33

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Lakshu,Priya,Mona,Lily,Sona and Akku..🤗

hi babie,,,,,😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Lakshu,Priya,Mona,Lily,Sona and Akku..🤗



hi babie raat ko aane ki koshish karoongi😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

The Mist

For banner credit goes to my dear Laksmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.





Part - 4


Maan came there on stage with his few friends ,, they were teasing him from behind and he was blushing, but in heart he was enjoying all this. He gave a look to d bride and find lil strange seeing her in half vail ,, he looked at Dadima confused. Dadi said that it is not good to see bride face before kuldevta pooja aur ye khandan ka tradition hai ,, Maan made a face over this.

YSK: please jaldi kero , thand bahot hei ,, Annie jaldi karo beta.


Annie understood d hint and she brought Geet near Maan and gave her a garland ,,she gave another to Maan and whisper in her ear to put that in Maan's neck. Geet lifted her hands and placed that in Maan's neck and then Maan in hers smiling at her . Photographer made them stand side by side very close to take pics and Maan got d chance,, he pressed Geet's hand secretly ,, Geet shivered with this unexpected gesture and tried to pull back her hand. Maan felt it lil odd ,, he looked at her but she was looking downward. Elders made them sit on d chair to blessed them ,, Maan came lil close and whisper in her ear .. Itna matt sharmao darling , mai hi hu ,, koi aur nahi. He was trying to touch her now and then ,, all these things were going very difficult for Geet to bear. She was trying to maintain a gap between them ,, for her he was Sameera's mangetar ,, she didn't gave a single look to him .


when all were busy talking to each other Maan naughtily caresses her lower back which shocked her hell,, she shuddered and flinched ,, Maan brought his face near her and whispered .. Sweetie humne ek - dusre ka sab kuch deka hua hei to ye kaisa darr hmm..? Char din pahale to bada chipak rahi thi,, he was in full teasing mod and taking full advantage. Geet was feeling very disgusted ,, wo kisi aur ka honewala pati tha aur ab usse iss tarah se touch ker raha hei ,, she wanted to run away from there,, She moved her body lil away from him , but he caught her hand and pressed that. He was looking here and there with a smile , but his hand was playing to tease her,, darling kahan tak bachogi ,, kuch ghanto ke baad tum mere hi pass aaogi aur esse hi chpkogi jaise hamesa chipakti thi. This was too much for Geet ,, she turned her face and looked at Dadima for help. Dadima came close to her and Maan removed his hand.


Dadima: Annie, Preeti ,, Dulhan ko le jao room mei yahan thand kaffi hai aur isne

Kuch bhi woollen nahi pahane hei.


Preeti took d chance and held Geet's hand to help her in walking and moved away ,, Maan was irritated with all this ,, First that Vail and now they took her away. All guests went from there and Yash and Dadima took a sigh of relief. Maan's friends went to take dinner saying ,,tu to uske sath khayega and Maan was now all alone with Dev and Annie ,, they were very quiet and feared about d reaction of Maan after knowing the truth. Dadima, Yash , Mahinder, Rajji and kamal decided to disclose the truth to Maan ,, they didn't want to hide it from him for long. YSK came close to Maan and held his hand in his,, he caresses back and looked at him with pained eyes.


YSK: Maan i very well knew that what is d meaning of love and marriage for a person ,, but this is life and it has its games which we never knew. Me and ur Mom loved each other but she left me ,, i faced her lose because i have u,Dev ,Annie and Maa with me ,, we supported each other in hard time ,, and i hope the same from u. Maan my family and its happiness is everything to me ,, So plzz listen to me very carefully and don't disappoint me.


Maan felt a restlessness and fear in him ,, why his father talking like this? What happened to him suddenly at these happy moments? He looked at him puzzled. All were looking at him with hurt expressions ,, Kya hua hei sabko? Esse ku dukhi hai? Daadima too sat near him with a hanging face. He looked at all dull faces ,, a fear engulfed him.


YSK: Maan , jo ladki abhi tumhare pass thi , jisse tumne jaimala pahanai wo Sameera nahi hai koi aur hei.


Maan got a shock ,, he didn't recollect what his Dad said ,, he was looking at him and trying to absorb his words,, jo ladki mere pass thi wo koi aur hai ,, Sameera nahi ,, ku? Sameera kahan hei? Uski aur meri abhi shaadi hei to wahi to hogi ,, koi aur ku? He was puzzled in his Q.


Maan: Dad what r u saying ? meri aur Sameera ki shadi hai to wo mere pass hogi koi aur ku? Aap kya kehana chahate hei ,, saaf -saaf kaho ,, mujh kuch samjh nahi aa raha hei.


YSK: Maan, to suno ... Sameera bhaag gai hai ,, uska kuch pata nahi hei ,, sab dhund liya ,, lekin kuch pata nahi .


Maan became numb with this ,,every word of his Dad slashing him in to pieces ,, ye nahi ho sakta ,, aap jhoot bol rahe hei ,, Sameera mujhe esse chodker nahi ja sakti Dad ,, aaj meri aur uski shadi hei.


YSK: ye jhoot nahi sach hei Maan ,, wo ghar se kaafi paise aur jewellery leker bhaagi hei ,, Brij aur uske friends ne pata lagaya aur unhone hi bataya ki wo Parlor ke bahar se texi mei baith ker kahin chali gai apni cousin ko wahi chodker. Kya wo bhi jhoot bol rahe hei?


Man's body became numb with this ,, nothing was going in his mind ,, this is unbelievable ,, wo mujhe pyaar karti hei ,, wo mujhe dhoka nahi de sakti ,, nahi mei ye kase manu?


Dadima: Maan , we knew beta it's very hard to believe for u, but this is d reality and u have to face it. We r in a very tough situation ,, the respect of two families r on stake ,, we can't move back beta ,, in this difficult time we elders decided to go ahead with this marriage with Mahinder's daughter. Maan we don't have any option . You have to do this beta for us , for u and for ur family.


YSK: maan abhi tak kisi ko kuch bhi pata nahi hei ,, essa kuch matt karna ki sab kuch mitti me mil jaye. Please beta i request u, please. Jo ho raha hei usse chupchap ho jane do ,, abhi kuch bhi react karne ka time nahi hei ,, bas kuch aur der tak apne ko sambhal lo ,, manoge na meri baat?


Maan nodded in yes ,, his mind was whirling with lots of thoughts ,, he was sitting there like a statue ,, blank mind,cold and shattered. There was only one word nailing his mind .. Betrayal .


Precap - marriage...



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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
fir se ist,,,,😛......
gud prt babie,,,maan ko sab kush pehle hi bta dia,,,,gud move,,i noe babie ur stry vil b different,,geet ka charectr bhi strong hoga ,,,,wonderful,,,,😳,
Edited by LILY111144 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.


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Posted: 11 years ago

JALDI UPDATE KARO...

JALDI UPDATE KARO...

JALDI UPDATE KARO...

JALDI UPDATE KARO...

JALDI UPDATE KARO...
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan ne tho kya speed may hai par geet tho darr ke maare kya haal ho rahi hai

chalo ab sab kuch maan ke saamne aagaya hai.


kya sach much maan aur sameera itne close thay😲😲😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
😃
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Awesome update di ,the mist is clearing a bit ,finally the most happening incident is here
The marriage ,Maan really loved that Sam but that witch ditched him at the end moment
Arghhh hate her,what did Maan meant with his words ,maaneet will marry now
Waiting for more and more
Love aanya😃
Edited by aanya84 - 11 years ago

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