MG~ SS~The Mist ... UPDATED Pt11/Pg130/21st Oct ... .. .. .. ..... . - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hii babie
I came across this story and read it's first two parts.
. It's really nice
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so sameera ran away from marriage and barat is here
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Posted: 11 years ago

The Mist

For banner credit goes to my dear Laksmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.






Part - 3




All were sitting there shattered ,,, Kamal was pacing to N fro in tension ,, he understood why Yash Uncle called Guddu. In this disaster only Guddu could save them , but his heart was sinking and paining thinking about its outcomes.

Every passing second was killing everyone ,, praying god to save them from this disaster and their last hope was Guddu.


Few min passed like hell and then Guddu entered with puzzled face followed by Preeti and Sunny in her arms. Kamal rushed to them and all looked at them. Dadima never met Guddu , but she heard this name many times from Yash and Nidhi. Yash stood up from sofa and went to her,, he held her hand and made her sit near him on sofa.


YSK: Guddu beta ab tum hi hum dono families ki izzat ko bacha sakti ho,, please ,, mai jo kahu usse dhyaan se sunna aur samjhna .


She looked at all confused ,, she was not getting any head and tail of d matter ,, All were looking very tense and depressed ,, she looked at Mahinder who was sitting near Dadima's feet with hanging head. Kya hua hai sabko? Ye sab itne pareshaan ku hai? Bahar guests ke sath na hoker yahan iss room mei ku baithe hei? There were lots of questions in her mind.


YSK: Guddu, Sameera bhaag gai hai.


What!!!!


Haan ,, wo bhaag gai hai ,,


Ye kaise ho sakta hei? Uski marriage hai abhi, sab wait ker rahe hei .


YSK: Ye sach hai ,, wo bhaag chuki hai ,, aur bahar sab dulhan ka wait ker rahe hai,, abhi tak to kisi ko kuch pata nahi lekin ab aur der nahi ki ja sakti hai. Aur kya tum ye chahogi ki tumhare Yash uncle yahan se khali hath jayen? Bina shadi hue,, bahar kya bole hum jaker sabse? iss insult aur humiliation se to mar jana accha ,, mujhse ye bardast nahi hoga. The respect of two families r on stake and you have to save that.


Mai ?? mai kaise?


YSK: ye Shadi ab tum karogi. Sameera ki jagah per tum dulhan banker bahar aaogi. All looked at her with hopes and she looked at them shocked,, Mai ,, Dulhan ,, Shaadi ,, she looked at her father who was numbed and motionless, then Bui and Kamal ,, who nodded their head in yes with teary eyes. They knew it's very hard for her to accept this ,, but they were helpless.


YSK: Time nahi hai beta ,, jyada soch matt ,, aur koi rasta nahi hai ,, ya to tum dulhan banker bahar aao ,, ya dono Khandano ki badnami .. Jo mai sahan nahi kar sakta. I'll die.


Dadima: Yash ye kya bol rahe ho?


YSK: haan maa , mujhse sahan nahi hoga ,, accha hua Nidhi ye din dekhne ko nahi hai.


All sighed with pain .


Rajji: Guddu, beta sochne ka time nahi hai ,, jo sochna hai baad mei sochna ,, agar ye baat bahar nikal gai to fir sab khatam hai.


Geet: jab sochna nahi hei ,, bas karna hi hei ,, to yahi sahi ,, Aap sab ne to kuch soch ker hi decision liya hoga na, to theek hi hoga ,, Baat agar do families ki izzat aur zindgi ki hai to mai ye Shadi kerungi ,, kun ki agar ab mai na kahati hu to sara dosh mere sar per hoga. Mujhe blame kiya jayega ki mai iss disaster ko rok sakti thi magar mai selfish ho gai ,, bas apne bare mei socha do families ki respect ke bare mei nahi.


Mai ye Sahadi ker rahi hu .. her voice was very cold and stern.


YSK cupped her face and packed on her forehead saying Thanku beta.


Dadima came near her she was seeing her first time ,, she placed her hand on her head and thanked her.


Dadima: beta jaldi se ready hoker bahar aa jao time nahi hai ab jyada. Dadima narrated Preeti to get her ready and covered her half face ,, aage hum sambhal lenge. Mahinder utho aur bahar jaker guests ko dekhiye ,, Yash aur Kamal tum bhi ,, kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye. Hum jo jewellery aur kapde sath laye hei leker aatey hai . All went out half heartedly leaving a cold N blank Geet behind having a fear of Maan's reaction in their heart.


Preeti came near her to dress her up she took out a small make-up kit from her hand bag and started to give a bridal look to Geet. After few min her face was totally changed coz of make-up ,, Dadima came there with Annie and Dev having bags in their hands ,, Dev and Annie's face expressions saying that they came across d fact ,, they were looking very tense ,, Dev left from there without looking at Geet ,, . Annie and Dadima helped Geet to put on d jewellery and bangles etc. In 15min a breath taking new Bride was ready to go out,, Geet was looking very beautiful, but no one is there to admire this beauty,, even Geet too didn't gave a look to her in d mirror ,, she was doing everything mechanically . All finished their work quietly even avoiding eye contact. Dadima covered her half face with vail ,, only her lips and big pearled nose ring were visible. They stepped out from d room to go at d jaimala stage.


Now this bad Misty weather turned into a blessing for both the families. Most of the guests didn't want to lose warmth of bonfire in this chilled weather and they decided to stay there with the hot beverages. The visibility was poor ,, very few friends and relatives were present there near the stage ,, all were shivering and cursing d weather. They were not paying any heed for ceremony and wanted to finish it ASAP so that they could go back to warmth canopies or to back their homes.


All family members were surrounded there and called groom to come there.


Percap - Dulhe Raja ki entry ...





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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so guddu is geet and yash convinced her for the marriage but geets straight forward reason for agreeing the marriage is true ab yeh dekhna hai ki dulhe raja ka reaction kya hoga
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
babie aaj subah se yeh net ne saare kachue ke peeche hai 😡😡😡😡😡ek kadam lene keliye isko 10min lerahi hai😡😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet use majburi me shadi krni pd rai hai pr fir bhi use hi sunaya jaega!! nice part..

i knew it!!!😛

geet is guddu!!!!!!😳
Edited by Appy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh poor geet because of sameera geet bali ka bhakri bangayi



what will be the maan reaction after seeing his bride...oh no he gonna blame her for everything or he will undersand her sacrifise...
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor guddu.. woh is situation ki shikar ho gayee... But scared for Maan's reaction.. how he will react..? Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab di
OMG geet turns out to be guddu here I thought it was Maan . though I want geet and Maan
To be together but not in such conditions where our Maan is already in love with that Sam ( bhagodi)
And is coming to the Mandap in assumption of Sam being there,YSK is literally forcing her to marry Maan becoz of the * khandani izzat* but what about geet ,what future will the innocent soul have ahead,relations cannot start on a block of lie
Waiting for Maans entry
Love aanya😃
Edited by aanya84 - 11 years ago

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