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hi mona sona babie laks priya...Eid
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Eid mubaarak sabko 😃




The Downpour... Part 69



"Dadima!!!''

This was the first word Maan could utter in reflex when saw SD in front of his well widen eyes then his eyes fell on Adi who was smiling sneakily sitting beside SD. Maan could not get a step ahead in perplex.

The room filled with soft giggles within a minute. Dadi stood up from bed and came to him. She mouthed kiss to him and patted his cheek,

"What happened Maan Beta'' she chuckled.

"Maaji, I dint know my Geet is this much lucky'' Rano came and looked Maan dearly having small hidden tears drops inside her eyes. Maan was still stood rooted unable to understand how suddenly Dadi came here and why everyone was praising him. Though he had understood the reason but still, "how it could be possible!!

"Dadima you here?? And Adi you also?? ''

"Haa Maan, I had said Adi to come with me. Actually I wanted to handle this matter myself. I was worried for you both so decided to come and talk Rano and Mohindar. Anyway I would have to come later so I thought how it would be when I give you surprise coming here before you and Geet and fix everything!!''

"Fix??''

"Why are you looking me like this Maan. Now don't tell me that my MSK grandson didn't understand anything'' SD chuckled. Rano and Mohindar were looking this small family with surprised eyes. How they could be so simple, down to earth, it was beyond their imagination. They could not ask anything more from God for their daughter.

Maan had still many questions in mind. SD understood and she said him to sit patiently. Maan took his seat and SD started the incidents which had happened in his absence.

"Maan when I had talked Rano for the first time I could understand her and Mohindar panic and worry and without delay I kept your marriage proposal for Geet before them but they needed time to think. When I came to know Rano wanted Geet to come back my worry increased for you both and after your leave I again called Mohindar and make him agree for our meeting. I had thought that I could meet you here but you both got late and we got time to talk in alone and fix your marriage before you could reach here'

"Yea Maaji, though we knew that our Geet can't get better than Maan but still we had some doubt. We had fear that why would a family like you who could get the best girl of this world, wanted to marry a middle family girl like Geet but when you yourself came here for her, we could not keep ourselves away to accept this proposal'' Mohindar exclaimed feeling emotional. This was the best moment for them when their daughter marriage was being fixed.

Now Maan knew everything. He wanted to run and tell Geet everything keeping her in tightest hug and kiss her endless to share their happiness but he could only give a genuine smile in return and a blink of eyes to SD to say "Thank you'. SD nodded in reply.

"Maan where is Geet, we should give this news to her also. Poor girl must be crying in tension'' SD asked.

"She is in her room Maaji, wait I call her''

Maan wanted to tell her himself first and seemed SD read his wish, she stopped Rano saying, she needs water and tea. When Rano went in kitchen SD whispered in Maan ear, "Go and tell her''. And she followed Rano in kitchen.

Maan shocked looked her, how did she come to know!!, But could not waste a second. Adi trapped Mohindar in talk and getting chance Maan slipped from there and hastened toward Geet room.

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Geet was crying and praying before Babaji photo hanging on wall. Every minute was going like decades. Suddenly someone knocked on door. Instantly she wiped eyes with Dupatta.

"It must be Mama'' she thought and runs to unlock it.

"Maan!!!'' She shouted surprised.

"Was you crying?''

He walked in and locked door behind. He had planned to fake the news of their marriage and tease her but when saw her crying, his heart sunk. He held her and cupped her face, "why you were crying Geet, don't you have faith on your Maan''

She immediately wiped her eyes and shook head, "no it's not like that Maan. Actually I was praying and when tears started coming out could not know''

"But how did you forget that you don't have any right on them. These tears are mine and you don't have permission to waste my belongings without asking me'' he kissed her both eyes.

She smiled. "But Maan how did you come here did Papaji let you meet me and what did you talk them what did they say and'''

"Shh Jaan, relax!! Take breath first''

"Maan boliye na, I can't feel relaxed until you tell me everything''

He smiled and tugged her closer holding from waist. "Don't worry Geet everything is alright. They agreed''

"Sach!!!'' her eyes shined in disbelief.

Maan nodded smiling.

"Maan they agreed and you're telling me now!!!'' She hit on his shoulder in complain. "I'm very happy Maan!!'' she excitedly hugged him tight holding his waist. She was almost jumping like a kid. He tightened his hold around her back.

"Hmm me too''

"Maan aapko dar nahi laga??'' she looked him surprised. "What did you tell Papaji??''

Maan gulped saliva down in thought that he had to do nothing, everything Dadi did!!''

"Maan what are you thinking tell na what did you tell Papaji and Mama?? Did they scold you?''


"No Geet, don't you know me that nothing can make me feel fear. I directly told them that I love you and want to marry with you!!''

She was staring him like stupid. How can anyone even open his mouth before Papaji, was beyond her thought.

"Really Maan??'' .. She hugged him happily, "Maan really you're so brave!! I am so happy so much happy!!!''

She was not able to show her excitement, happiness in words, just wanted to give him everything which would give him even a smile in return. "Thank you Maan thank you so much for coming in my life!!'' She kissed him on his both cheeks one by one; she wanted to be in his arms for always!!

Maan took her in tight hug to show his happiness.

"Maan aap mujhse naraz toh nahi hai na?'' she asked keeping head over his heart.

Maan got chance to tease her again. He left her abruptly. "That I'm Geet. Do you have any idea how I felt when you said you want to marry me just because I'm rich!! I know it was prank but still it hurt me Geet'' he turned back and smirked.

She felt sorry. She knew even in sleep she should not have said harsh word like this when she knew very well how much he loved her. She came near and stood facing him. She held her ears pouting. Maan smiled secretly but turned his face side.

"Maan''' She was to say something when Rano knocked the door.

"Mama!'' she said and went to open door but Maan was worried, what Rano would think seeing him there. Rano entered and was to speak when she saw Maan. She had come to tell Geet about marriage but now no use of it. She saw Geet who was blushing continuously and understood that she already had known.

Geet who could not hide her happiness for more hugged Rano saying thanks for umpteenth times. Rano kissed her forehead and blessed her and left saying, Savitri Devi wants to see her.

"Dadima?'' Geet surprisingly said but till then Rano had left and she heeded to Maan.

"Maan Dadima is here? Did you know about her?''

"Haan Geet I knew and not only Dadi but Adi is also here''

"Then why didn't you tell me before. I should have met her what would she think!!' She complained and hastened to meet her before Maan could stop.


Precap : "Maan I know, you want me to pacify you na,, I promise I'll do everything what your wish is''

( "Tu Rootha toh mai ro dungi sanam.. Aaja meri, Baahoon me aa'' 😉)



Part 4 UPDATED

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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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mona super updttt You rock pic
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Eid
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not only maan but me also shoked to know dadi and adi have already reached at geet's place and fixed everything
Maan is not able to believe they are here and geet's parents agreed
He is very happy and wants to inform geet too and our sweet dadi helped him
Maan was planning to play a prank but controlled himself seeing a crying geet
Maan told that he told mohinder that he loves geet and wants to marry her and they agreed (liar) to geet and geet very happy with the news both hugs eachother
Rano came and informed geet about dadi and adi's presence and geet hurridly left
Maan took all credit of dadi's work not fair
Maan wants geet to manofy him ...
Loved the ud very much
Edited by mehak173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites



<font size="4">okee .. but why?? </font>

<font size="4">and thanks yaar itna effort se comment karne ke liye</font>


yaar koi nahi janta na ke me gf pe hu aur ff padti hu chori se aati hu so mobile par ...nd welcome dear ..
U write beautiful uds so lalach ata he comment karne ka ...
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi mona sona babie laks priya...Eid




Lily...😊
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dadi haina sab teek karne keliye. But i have no faith in u and asha gadbad karne keliye ready hothe ho

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Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi mona sona babie laks priya...Eid



wishing you same lily

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww it so pleasant surprise update loved it
EID mubarak

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