The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 88

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Finally started reading the pending parts... 😊

Part 38: indeed differences... both the couples are fighting battles and ache resulting form their own perceived differences they have somehow wanted or unknowingly built around them. Loved the title .. apt! 👏
Thanks 😃 Sometimes the title sets me up for what I have to write.
Suraj hua maddham and the dream she was dreaming was intimate and showed her desires 😳 liked the description for Maaneet here ❤️
I think it maybe something that's in her unconscious. The scene set up was completely from the movie. She just transposed herself and Maan in that. Just the same as the balcony scene became one from Veer Zara. She is attracted to him but she has not thought this far into it about him.
Geet is now aware of the status and monetary difference between Maan and hers and this is causing her to retreat. I loved how in spite of it all she treasured the moments with him at the dhaba as well as the ones on the return bike journey 😳 Maan is getting restless with her slight withdrawal again, its like all the progress made since such a long time has come to a standstill. He treasures moments with her and what I liked the most was how though he knows her dreams of settling with something simple as that of a teacher in village yet he is not backing out and is proud of being MSK that he wants her to realise that his status and money difference will not be something to pull them apart... I loved how he dispelled her fears and doubts on it and made her laugh again 👏
He is going to be the stronger among them right now. She is a simple girl who has not thought much outside her little box. Other peoples words are making her realize how different they are and her shy nature is going to cause her to retreat more and more. He has seen more of the world, interacted with more people so he knows how to deal with situations.
Megha and Kabir... interesting changes and a lot of push-pull. 😊 I always enjoy this push-pull in couples 😉
Alas, my plans for Megha and Kabir are getting axed by my chief critic who has promised to kill me if I do anything to Kabir..😕 My sister.. She is usually ahead with the story line I have given her and she is hyper protective...😲 Who knew Kabir would get popular..😆😆
Nakul 🤣 bechara Maan he will get no respite from him 😆 Baasi Purani ... seriously 🤣 Ek kafi nahi that that you want to add someone else too to trouble Maan... Kidnapping?? 😆

Interesting hai with someone else but I am not sure people will be in for it.. Involves a dur se dekha scenario.. Nakul ka khoya pyaar..😆

One more to read will comment soon on that... 😊


🤗Thanks Onir!
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

NOTE

Hi! I am reposting a story I had written under my previous id of had2bu. It only has 4 parts. I am going to post them one a day, so it will be a quick read😳. Some of you may have already read it. Do let me know if you like it.

Am having some trouble continuing this story at this time, as I have hurt my back again. I will post as soon as I am able to sit for a few hours on my laptop without pain. Thanks for your patience. 😃

For Dr. Khurana, With Love.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Had read it before. Real cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
have read it earlier but will read it again
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh dear take care
and take care time
recover first and then update
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooo finally am reading the part😃
glad to see NT having sooo much concern for Dev...a very different NT u have given us through ur story...had started hating the name NT soo much after watching her being a villain in almost all stories,...
glad that few of u have given her a positive character...
aha dadima saw it😃😃 ab toh she ll handle things hopefully😆 would love to have such a wonderful dadi...this scene reminded me a ghsp scene
pari looks like a pampered princess or i should say a spoiled brat to a certain extent...hate her for being so touchy touchy...
Dev is sooo 😃 lovvdd the pic dear...

loved whatever geet told Dev...loved the entire convo between them...
very hurting precap

eager to read more..😃


off to Dr khurana's thread😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

You sound like a school teacher..😆
Yes ma'am 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey get well soon n tk good care Avi...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

oh dear take care
and take care time
recover first and then update

Thanks Chavvi😊
Taking pain killers and bed rest... still IF addict cannot stay off..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Okay 😊 bohut boring chal raha hai. You are not missing much


y do you say such things... koi boring voring nahi hai...kuch bhi bolthe ho...😔

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