The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ambibamby

Just read the entire story in one go. Awesome work dear! Do update soon. Still waiting for maans reaction


Welcome to the story. Will wait for reactions from my readers to the story line and characters, including you😃. That is the only satisfaction in doing so much work, so please let me know how you are liking or disliking it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
NOTE


Hi everyone! I forgot to mention that I will be on vacation for the coming week. Will be returning next Sunday. Hope those who have not read it yet will have a chance to catch up by then.😃

Avi
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh!! happy vacation!! enjoy :)
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will miss u
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Posted: 12 years ago
enjoooy Aviii 😃😃 have loooads of fun😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
will be waiting...!! enjoy yourself...!!
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thats fine
take your time
see ya after your holiday
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Will catch up tonight hopefully
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Enjoy your vacation 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

TEASER

Naintara let out the breath she was holding. He was moving on with Pari! While it pierced her heart it meant that he would be safe and out of Suraj's way. It also meant that she was free this evening, he would not be back at the apartment tonight. She had a secret mission that she wanted to complete. Knowing that he was out of harm's way, she would be able to easily slip out of town and be back before anyone noticed. Making up her mind, she crossed her fingers that he would leave early so she could get her mission completed.

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"Dev Khurana here", he answered the phone. It was the detective agency whom he had hired to keep an eye on Naintara. The private detective following her had an emergency and would be gone for the night. They did not have a quick substitute but someone would be there quickly he was assured. He ignored the nagging feeling that the message gave him, too heartbroken to do more at this time.

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I look away from him as I say "Pyaar kya hota hai, I am not sure. Maine bharosa kiya hai. Vishwaas kiya hai. For me that is what love is. Someone who is always there for me, with me at every step and for me there would be no one but him ever."

"Bharosa. Vishwas. Did he make promises to you Geet? Bohut tareef ki hogi about you, your beauty right? What happened then? I have never seen him around. Why did he leave? If he has done anything wrong, I will...", before he can say anymore, I clarify. "He never made any promises. Tareef? No, he never said anything to me".

"Never said anything? No promises? Yet you still have faith in him. Kyun? Why are you still waiting for him? He has moved away and you are still here", Dev is confused by me.

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Tera Tujh ko Saunp teh Kya Laagat Hai Mor
Mera Mujh mein Kuchh Naaheen Jo Hovat So Tor

Tere Bin Mera Mann, Jaise Ban Mein Hiran, Jaise Pagali Pawan
Laagi Tum Se Mann Ki Lagan, Lagan Laagi Tum Se Mann Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Mann Ki Lagan, Lagan Laagi Tum Se Mann Ki Lagan

Tum ne mujhe dhoka kyun diya Geet? Kyun nahi aayi? Kyun meri sincerity ka mazaak udaya? I gave you unconditional love. Lekin ab aur nahi. Thanks to you Geet, the innocent Maan who waited for hours in the rain for just a sight of you is no more. The one who believes in people is no more. I am a new Maan now and I am happy like this. I don't need you or your lying eyes in my life anymore.

He dusted the snow off his hair and coat before opening the door to the townhouse. It was open like she said it would be. The sound of her ghungroos caught his ears and he smiled. She was practicing again. He stood near the entrance to the living room watching her elegant twirls. She saw him and stopped with a flourish.

"Maan, you are covered with snow. Let me get you a towel", Sameera ran towards the bathroom before he could protest.

I thought to leave you a glimpse of the coming chapters. Will be away till next Sunday. Do let me know how you liked the teasers.
Avi

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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