The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 46

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome awesome awesome update dear :-D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: leksh

😔
3 din ho gaye...ab tak update nahi mila...

ek phool dega tho update milega kya????😔😔😔😔

So cute...😃
Haven't been able to write, sorry
updates are usually 10 pgs or more in Word so it will take time..😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

Awesome awesome awesome update dear :-D

Thanks Sona😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

beautiful part...at last maan's wish fulfilled and mayank helped him with a special personalise box for 2 with geet...akhir me maan jeet gaya...and he sucessfully diverted her mind from salman to maan and she lost in him forgetting her surroundings...

why after hurting megha he wnat to give rose..? now he feels he should not hurt her on her birthday...par usne ek baar bhi kabir ki taraf nahi dekha...seems kabir now have hard way to pacify her

Glad you liked it Madhuri.
Kabir cares for her but he has ho hope in life and he does not want to drag her down with him as he has nothing to offer her no home, no money. He wants a better life for her, probably the most unselfish form of love there is.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey ! am here !! you know how many times read Happy Eid as Happy End ...and got scared...! was really busy these three days to give reply ...kids had holidays !...and ...about update...what a dreamy part ! both songs and the situation...maan got to his heart fill !! geet forgot who salman is in the end...maan scored full !! have to thank mayank and megha for the dreamy date...hope their dhaba dinner bhi accha ho...!! and megha and kabir...long way to go ...!! though he came sacrificing his meal ...ignoring maan's warning ...with a rose for her...couldnot give...nor could make her happy...felt really bad !! may be in future he will gain some self confidence and make a move...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

hey ! am here !! you know how many times read Happy Eid as Happy End ...and got scared...! was really busy these three days to give reply ...kids had holidays !...and ...about update...what a dreamy part ! both songs and the situation...maan got to his heart fill !! geet forgot who salman is in the end...maan scored full !! have to thank mayank and megha for the dreamy date...hope their dhaba dinner bhi accha ho...!! and megha and kabir...long way to go ...!! though he came sacrificing his meal ...ignoring maan's warning ...with a rose for her...could not give...nor could make her happy...felt really bad !! may be in future he will gain some self confidence and make a move...!!

Happy End😆😆 I wish😆😆
Thanks Kavya!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Gosh, I love this scene so much...😳😳
My fav song from the show..

I know... that's why I posted it 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Haath ki position pe gaur kiya jaaye... 😳😳
Thanks Onir... you don't need to compensate or feel bad... I know you are busy right now..😃
...🤗Angel

Haath ki position 😆

🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated comment on page 51 (Finally 😆 *Phew* )
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

:)


So sorry for such a late comment

Coming to the update... indeed wishes did come true ... for one couple it brought intimacy and romance while for other it brought pain and granting of so felt distance... but yet there was one thing common both shared a dimension of love - pleasure as well as pain. 👏

I liked the start itself... the gradual comfort and silent understanding between M-G while they exchanged a warm and silent wish of greeting even in a crowd showed how far they've come from the ones who were though aware of each other but always craved to have that conversation. 😳

The "khan" gang is a tough competition for Maan ... none sparing him a respite... Koi na koi tapak hi jata hai... 🤣 But loved the jokes and gig Maan-Adi had on Salman by the kabootar talk and the towel dance 😆

Tere mast mast do nain is one of my favorite songs and I loved the inclusion here and your version of it in the story... made this song all the more cherished for me ❤️

Kabir-Megha ... poor souls. i don't know about Megha's feelings for him as of now for sure, but yes I can bet a bit on her awareness and her ache with his distancing. Megha wanting to be close to him and offer the only one thing she possess that she can give him freely ... her friendship; While Kabir with his insecurities and the kicks life has made him endure wants to keep distance in fear of hurt and sympathy which he doesn't deserve and also wants to protect both her and himself form something which is inevitable and something that has already deep within him for her. Both have the same connection here of being almost an orphan... I think that's why connects with hi m while he's blinded by his pain and failures and misunderstood her to be a Khurana - someone out of his league. I loved that line "The rose twists in my hand, the thorn pinching me deeply drawing blood." Spoke of their pain in love and so beautifully worded for the situation. 👏👏

Maan bhai is in protective mode here for his dear sister 😉

Geet has started lowering her guard and at least started admitting her true feelings to self for now (Though he too is able to read them through her acts and unspoken words.. ) 😳 The feeling of "Us" she associates for him being with her. 😳👏

Arey waah private movie screening for them ... puri kayanat ne unko milane ki saazish ki hai (Through Avi) 😉

Mayank and his Mrs... tell me how many love stories are going to be blended in... (Not that I mind.. its like a bonus for me 😳) Because of them some cozy and intimate moments for our silent couple 😉

I loved the whole scoreboard and restlessness and comfort it kept providing Maan 😆 Bechara kya kya dhyan mein rakhe Jab Geet itne kareeb hai 😆 But loved how it ended with him loving the movie too as well as the songs as it brought them much closer ... ❤️ With her silent confession of feeling and knowing no Salman but only Maan in her whole existence. 👏

His black blending with the surrounding yet him wanting her sole attention on him 👏👏

The whole movie with their associated intimacy was 👏😳 Her shyness, his bold steps forward for them yet careful for her... and perceptive, her holding onto him showing her comfort and trust on him while him dreaming of their togetherness... 😳😳😳 ❤️ 👏

His fantasies of her being in his kurta sometime in life... but somehow I don't want to name it fantasy but some dreams of true love (Such beautiful love you have shown between them 👏)

Laughed for his dabaang style with sunglasses tucked behind... and them sharing that laughter.. 😳

Waiting for the dhaba date 😳😉

Continue soon... 😊

🤗



Thanks Onir🤗

Kabir and Megha have a weird relationship as of now. More challenges for them to come.


I was not planning a dhaba date in the original storyboard, it was going to be a flash back only..

for always being here for me🤗

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