MG-SS-The Punishment~ New Thread Link On/Pg145/17Aug... - Page 2

nice ud
Nice start all r talli and police stopping them

nd congrats for getting promoted from reader to writter

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

congrats on ur new attempt babie



all the best babie for ur story... am sure u will do ur best ...



also wish this story will be a favorite among GFians...





nayi shuruaad ke liye kuch meeta ho jaaye...

ps: main abhi bhi tumse gussa hoo😡

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

prologue

i loved the words u used in the beginning of merdith... clash of ego... wow... egoisic maan is a treat to read... and when geet is takaar ki phir kya kehne... am sure u will rock babie...

part 1-A

loved the start... talli friends together ... stopped by the police... maan trying to use his influence ... eager for more... how ACP came to know about maan? y is he taking special interest in this case???

part 1B

waitinggg

ps: main abhi bhi gussa hoon😡

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

this is your gift

Nyc start babbie

Nyc concept ..

I hv only one request .. pls dont show maan making out with another girl .. i cant see him being like this being touched by another girl other than geet ..

waiting for forward