KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#2,NEXT THREAD ADDED

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Wow.. that was so looong part... At one sec.. Maan was like that how on the earth she is my mate..? N other sec he is like.. She is my special mate.. Geet again tried to run away.. Though they have nothing against each other as of now.. both r not ready to accept changes in their life may be.. still there is tiff btwn them.. may be they r like..we r mate so bound to be with each other.. But Geet is in slight denial mode.. she wants her life her people back maybe.. means she wants to live in humans..Maan has take his real wolf avatar.. to catch Geet when she ran away.. Last part.. hayee..😳 Maan is so much imagining things... 😉
Jaldi se next update do..

Edited by CutieTeju - 11 years ago

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 11 years ago

#262

wow.. awesome part loved it..

I hope he does it with her will too..

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lovepoo

@lovepoo

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

omg such a long update dear
loved it
loved romance,jealous geet pervert but passionate maan..
eagrly waiting for next update to see cotton vs maan

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

part 12
awesome...
Geet still tried to escape...
wow Maan came her in front of her in his wolf form...
and she recognized him too...
interesting...
cont soon dear...

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shubhi_s

@shubhi_s

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

finally the wait is over

loved the update

nice

geet again tried to escape

maan once again caught her

payback

maaneet finally reached maan's house

looking forard to read once again soon

pls update soon

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

its beautiful update.. Maan is in so much hurry to reach home.. wow.. he asked her directly abt bed 😆😳😉 hahaah.. both's communications r superb.. loved it

egarly waiting for next update...

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minelove24

@minelove24

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#267

awsme and very big update..geet jelous ha..bt she wont accept..maan's home opps den is so big and beautiful..maan markd her by his mark..that was raw bt he is warewolf..she is his possession

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

I thought u forgot about this FF

That's why no updates from so long

Phewww but at last u updated

Loved it

It was awesome

Geet never heard the phrase curiosity killed the cat tabhi she always get curious n get herself stuck in some place

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pearl_warrior

@pearl_warrior

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

What can I say? An awesome update yet again. Awesome is a small word to describe about your work.😊 It's really a privilege to read your work..And to say that we are the first ones ever to read this spectacular piece.. I know that there's a lot of research involved. Many of us here don't understand that.😔. It's difficult to put together a plot which is very different from the normal way of life. And for that, hats off to you. 👏

I can always imagine myself in your stories...As a bystander watching the scene happening..And I love that.. It's like reading a movie..😊I must have mentioned this before.(though my comments are rare.Sorry for that :( )

I love the 'His Wolf' parts. I just love to read the sentiments of the wolf.. That's a really excellent way of keeping us aware about Maan's character as a whole.👏

As usual, the story is beyond my expectations. Maan has shown his real self to Geet.. But Geet's yet to react.. Waiting for that.. 😊