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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

Thanks dear
I must say u all will be shocked with turn of event
And haa geetangli is not the one who listen maan
And maanveer is not the one who bent in front of beauty

yaaa... tabhi to maza ayega ... love this socking surprise factor 😉😃

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ylaraib
awesome update
Uff. . .bulbul ab tu maan ko geet ka chehra
dikha du . . Bichara kabse taras raha he
Finaly geet Maan ki hui
Like their fighting with food
Waiting for next

Thanks larbia
Arre geetangli ka face dekhna koi aise baat thodi hai
Maanveer ko wait to karna hi pate gaa naa

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: maanshi

yaaa... tabhi to maza ayega ... love this socking surprise factor 😉😃

Jo hone wala hai vo ek reader nai bhi gusse nahi kiya

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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

Jo hone wala hai vo ek reader nai bhi gusse nahi kiya

because u r the best n smarter then us

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: maanshi

because u r the best n smarter then us

Arre behna chane ki jhaad per mat chado abhi tu I have to learn a lot which I am doing every day to read talented writers

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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

Arre behna chane ki jhaad per mat chado abhi tu I have to learn a lot which I am doing every day to read talented writers

no i m seriously saying
mai bhi bahot sari story read karati hu maaneet ki ... aur bhi ache writers hai par tum bhi bahot achi ho ... shikhata to insan zindagi ke last pal tak raheta hai
aur meri nazar mai tum ache writers mai se ek ho

aur story ki baat to

here is so many option r open

first it's just their journey started ... not reached ... kuch bhi adventurist ho sakata hai

n after reaching maan's place ... so many things r their to welcome geet
maan's mom, his rani's spc. pat rani etc... etc...

n not to forget maan himself ... hahaha

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: maanshi

no i m seriously saying
mai bhi bahot sari story read karati hu maaneet ki ... aur bhi ache writers hai par tum bhi bahot achi ho ... shikhata to insan zindagi ke last pal tak raheta hai
aur meri nazar mai tum ache writers mai se ek ho

aur story ki baat to

here is so many option r open

first it's just their journey started ... not reached ... kuch bhi adventurist ho sakata hai

n after reaching maan's place ... so many things r their to welcome geet
maan's mom, his rani's spc. pat rani etc... etc...

n not to forget maan himself ... hahaha

I am glad that I made a place in ur good writer list
Yaa so many scene are here and I love to read mathyology
So its help me here a lot ...

I never ev er thought that I will right ye tu bas ek din waqt hai naa uski mansi ka scene write karne ka mann kiya .
Uspe first time mai hi itne acche likes mile
That now I had 7 ongoing work and many are completed

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

finally maneet married and games fab and now bidai to donewaiting for maan to see geet face

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

very sad yaar...bidai.maanveer is very patient with geet yaar..she have a very loving family...amazing update..cant wait for next update..interesting..pls cont soon..