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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Maan fida over Geet! Admiring her! He still has to see her face! Well written! update soon

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

the king is dying to see his bride but is not getting a chance

what will be his reaction on seeing her beauty

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Very interesting to see the thotful and caring side of Maan.As she heard Geet cry too much,he sent lalita to her.
And then when Maan himself come inside d tonga cum paalki,he jst cudnt stop gaping at Geet.Lovely.

But still a long way to go.

Gr8 part.

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

wonderful one dear...

thnks for the Pm...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

waah kya baat hai
she sure is making him mad with desire
but of course he wont touch her till she lets him
and he is right on one account that to woo her shall be fun
and the games you guys are gonna play even better
waise sorry to say raj mata of delhi agar koi hai jo maan ko apne prem ke moh se apna karr sakke woh hain geetanjali
parr yeh bat toh aap log ko abhi toh pata nahin chalegi
well of course not after all they havent seen her
or seen him with her as of yet
but one things like you pointed out that she has caused a lot of jealousy among his wives
after all he gave up full kingdom for her
toh kuch baat hogi naa inmein
aaji dekhiye ga jab yeh aayengi kya hain inn mein ki binn dekhe hi maharaj inn parr lattu ho gaye
so his wait to see her is at least over
but thats just the beginning of it all
haiyye this is shaping up just the way i thought it would shape up
and there is still lots to happen cool
cheers for pm

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fantesy

@fantesy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

awesome update..maan was so concerned for geet he also send lalita 2 her !! oh he was so aroused bt geets hans stopped his view n he wz nt able to see her face ..loved it

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Rumana Begum

@Chahhat4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

CHAPTER 11

Superb update dear...

Loved it a lottt...

OMG!!!!! Maan didn't get angry on Geet... That's really a shocking moment...

Now finally they r husband-wife...

Hayyeee little bit vermillion fell on Geet's nose... Definitely Maan will love Geet sooo muchhh...

Awww I love Maaneet's silent-fight on dinner...

Last part was too emotional...

What written on the latter that Maan directly leave from palace...

Well hope for the best...

Thanxxx for the Update & PM also...

Edited by Chahhat4eva - 12 years ago

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Mitu

@Mituag

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Teaser

"Ager hume nai aise apki jagrat avastha mai kiya hota tu apne apni talwar humari gareden par rakh dii hoti.. *(If I did this in your consciousness than till now you had kept your sword on my neck)* but you are wife geetangli and i had all rights on you now" he whispered everything in Geetangli ear with in slow very slow voice.

What maanveer did? 😡 😡

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Rumana Begum

@Chahhat4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

CHAPTER 12

Hayyeee Maan was Fida on Geet...

Ohhooo so Maan was sooo eager to get Geet not only coz of daring or her beauty but also her innocence that attracted him much...

Awww Maan was drooling Geet whole night...

I love Maan's thought that if he touched his wife than this will be their wish only...

Feel sorry for Maan's other queens...

My sixth-sense telling Samaya will create problems in Geet's life...

Hmmm hope Maan will stand for Geet always...

Hayyeee finally Maan will see Geet face in next chapter...

Mind blowing update dear...

Loved it sooo muchhh...

Thanxxx a lottt for the update PM dear...

And really very sorry for late comment...

Very very excited for next chapter...

Update soon dear

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Rumana Begum

@Chahhat4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A
Teaser

"Ager hume nai aise apki jagrat avastha mai kiya hota tu apne apni talwar humari gareden par rakh dii hoti.. *(If I did this in your consciousness than till now you had kept your sword on my neck)* but you are wife geetangli and i had all rights on you now" he whispered everything in Geetangli ear with in slow very slow voice.

What maanveer did?

Hayyyeee outstanding teaser dear...👏⭐️👏

What Maan did that if Geet was in her consciousness then she will murder him...😲😲😲

After reading this teaser can't wait...😛😃😉

If I know how to do black magic then will surely do magic on U & tell u to update next chapter now...😉🤣🤣

And fortunately or unfortunately I don't know M of any magic...😔😳

Ahhh desperately waiting for the update dear...

Update soon plsss 😊😃😆