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nostalgicmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Updt was awesome. i don't kno y am feeling like prem and geet were nt lovers,bt maan is so harsh smtimes.it really hurts to see him hurting himself.waiting for nxt part.

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

awesome update

still there are so many confusions

and with your about the ss, me got more confused

maan happy about geet being pregnant with his baby

but still maan behaviour confuses me

i think maan belives that geet still love prem, thats why he is behaving like this

will be waiting for the next part...

update soon!!!!!!!!

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maanlvsgeet

@maanlvsgeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

First off congrats on your new ff Shoba.

Just read both the chapter and it was awesome.

After reading part two I feel that Maan might be bipolar. One min he is angry on geet and next he is a loving husband, when will this maan learn not to be like that.

I feel that it isn't a triangle love but rather prem N geet played a prank on maan to open up his feel for geet. The reason I am saying this is because you are saying that they are married for 6 months and it will take at least geet a long time to recover.

based on most of story that I have read that you wrote, geet will go through an emotional ride before accepting her feeling or be physical toward maan. After reading part 2 I feel that geet only loved maan and not prem

But overall can't wait for the next part. Please update soon. May I please get access to your blog, I will pk you my Wordpress username and thanks in advance.

Edited by maanlvsgeet - 12 years ago

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.OneDirection.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Fantastic part..!

Maan's behaviour is confusing , he loves geet then why is so rude to her all the tym?!

Waiting for the mre of the part , where did prem go wat lead maaneet to marry and maan's behaviour ??!

And geet is pregnant and maan extremely happy!

Superb, update sn !

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jasraj123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

nice starting
as it very confusing now to understand that what really happen
they were sooo close friends and then both love geet😕😕😕😕

i am sure it will solve slowly slowly but for now It makes me to think hard what is going on😕

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

awesome part
what has happened in past I really want to know
geet preg with maans child
maan so happy
geet love maan or prem its really confusing

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maaneet5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

osumest superb

need to know the past

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harika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

di kitna bhi padhon kuch samajh nahi aata hai actual mein hua kya tha bt yaa all geet wanted was maan's aitbaar and she loved him only prem ne toh geet ka help kiya knowing that she wanted maan's confession!! samajh toh aaraha hai bt yeh samajh nahi aaya ki yeh prem ki baat!! as to what happened to him!!

i know you wont give a sad ending more than you i know it di 😆

jo mujhe acha nahi laga woh hai maan ka ego sabse bada hai woh thats too much mujhe yeh story destiny ki yaad dilati hai di 😭

His eyes looked upon his bleeding hand as the blood dripped but there was no pain in him as the pain tat he was making love to his wife who loved someone else was killing him

these lines made me feel like what i just cant say that out pata nahi kuch ajeeb laga bohut laga

but yaa yeh wali i can make out kuch haha geet was only maan's and she used prem for aitbaar from maan😭

In their marriage of six whole months she failed to say wat she had to and now she feared to lose the one whom she worshipped as she lost the other whom she confined her most kept secrets of her life.

mujhe GHSP ki yaad aagayi when geet blames maan that he choses to stay away from her physically waha he stays away and asks her kya yeh kaafi nahi hai ki she is MrsMSK and yaha

So you need me only for bed she said making him to stop in his track. His blood boiled hearing her insult his love. His whole body shook as he grabbed her by her hair in anger making her to yelp in pain isn't it enough for you ya phir Prem ki kami mehsoos hoti hain . Maan said gritting his teeth in anger as she looked at him with tears in her eyes should I ask god to send him back for you as your husband cannot satisfy you in bed he said pulling her closer holding her cheeks with one of his hand while the other tightened its hold on her hair.

meri jaan nikal gayi with this para😭

I wish you could ever read beyond my pain Maan, par nahi you will never be able to do it.. na kabhi Aitbaar tha nahi kabhi hoga mujhpar

she clearly told maan how much she loves him indirectly pehle bhi lekin he isnt ready to accept why would he?? his big fat ego😡😡

precap is hell scary di😭

next part kab milega di??

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago