MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-1 1/part-156/epilog /pg.156/23/9/2015 - Page 68

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Posted: 10 years ago
good one Anu! So geet is the MD of the travel company nice. Thanks you for the PM. Sorry for the late comment. I,m in my last 2 weeks of the semester.. so busy with assignments, homeworks and exams!
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Posted: 10 years ago

miss u ,.. too misty,..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update...Geet dance😎...maan's proposal was superb... and engagement 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
ekbar mein maan ko sab kuch mil gaye...

superb n lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Tera mera saath rahe...
Tera mera saath rahe
Dhoop ho, chaya ho, din ho ki raat rahe
Tera mera saath rahe

Dard ki shaam ho, ya sukh ka savera ho
Sab gavara hai mujhe, saath bas tera ho
Jeete ji, mar ke bhi, haath mein haath rahe
Tera mera saath rahe

Koi vaada na kare, kabhi khaye na kasam
Jab kahe bas yeh kahe, milke bichadenge na hum
Pyar ki, preet ki, yuh hi barsaat rahe
Tera mera saath rahe

Beech hum dono ke, koi deevar na ho
Tu kabhi mere khuda, mujhse bejaar na ho
Sabke hothon pe apni hi baat rahe
Tera mera saath rahe
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sory for late comment ... No new updates ... Kaya huaa ?
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-11 /part-149/pg.122/5/2/2015




Hai guys me back . After a long gap , patanahi mai thoda blank hogayi hu ,..kuch likhneki man nahi hua abhitak ,.. per thanks to some of u as u remember me and push me to persue,.. thank. u all,...and here i am ,.. i tried my level best ,.. i know all of u eagerly waiting for maneets grand wedding ,.. ,..i dnt think it necessary ,.. so i kept it in simple way ,.. hope u understand ,..and sorry if i disappoint u,...

Part:-149

Sameera completely knocked out by the series of the shocks and surprises given by Maan. First his dance with Geet, his open claim her as his,... and his bold proposal before all which more like an engagment and lastly a strong blow ,...introducing Geet as M.D. of the Trsm com. Her condition became more pathetic. Maan completely washed out her hopes and expectations in the drain. She burned in defeat and jeolousy,..the sympathetic looks of all made her more hell frustrated.,.. wo kuch karna chahthi thi ,.. kuch aur hogaya ,.. Maan turned everything in his favour,.. All thanks to her,..
Maan walked Geet passing by Sameera not sparing a single look,.. a clear cut indication ,.. that she is nothing to him ,. The happy glees of the family and others thrown her in demise.
They came out of the venew,.. Kaka bring the car came out and wished Geet,.."congratulations choti mam"
Geet looked stunned by him,..addessing her as'mam" she looked at Maan accusingly ,. like this is all because of u,..kaka humesha unhe beti bulathe hai,.. and now 'mam"
Geet:- Kaka aap mujhe mam math bulayiye ,.. mai aapki beti huna,..?
Kaka nodded his head smiling ,. he know her modesty ,.. opening the door ,.. Maan and Geet sat inside it the drive started in silence.
Maan s.t.:- lagtha hai misty rut gayi ,.. ab manana padega,..
Kaka:- bahut kharara jawaab diya aap ne chote babu uss sameera ko ,..
Maan: she deserves it kaka,..
Kaka: ab tho ,..saare hurdles dur hogaya chote babu ,.. ab sirf ek hi baaki hai ,.. aapki shaadi,.. hum sab bahut utavla horaha hai wo din dekhnekeliye,..jaldi kariye,.. Maan looked at Geet who blushed like hell hearing shaadi ,..but still in silence ,.. haa,.. kaka,. bahut jald wo bhi hojayega,..he looked at her more teasingly taking her hand in his and pressing it indicating her how much he eagerly waiting to own her.
Maneet entered in to their room,.. Geet sat on the bed still thinking to ask him.
Maan sat near her ,..he know he has to clarify her.
Geet:-Maan ,. aap ne isa kyu kiya? aap jaanthe hona ,? mai ye job nahi karna chahthi thi ,.. aur mai school ko chode nahi sakthi ,..
Maan:- geet thumhe job karneko koun bolrahe? ye comp. tho ab humari hai ,.. mere saath saath thum bhi humari saari business ki maalkin ho,..Ab mai akela kitna samalpaunga ,..?isme kya galathi hai ki mai thumse thoda madat maangliya tho,...aur thumhe school chodene ka bhi jarurat nahi hai ,.. thum apni free time me ye comp. dekhsakthi ho ,. Geet ye decition mai isliye liya ki mujhe se jyaada thum kabil ho ,... thum jyaada justice karsakthe ho ,.. mujhe thumhari kaabiliyat per pura bharosa hai ,.. kya mai itna nahi karsaktha hu?,.. kya mujhe pehle hi puchna padtha ha? mujhe haq nahi hai ki mai thumhareliye kuch decide karsaku?
Geet stopped him by keeping her hand on his mouth,..nahi Maan aap kuch bhi decide karsakthe ho mereliye, ,.. kuch bhi ,..she shifted to his chest keeping her cheeks on him,.. mai thoda gabaragayi thi ,..
' she cannot deny him,.. never ,.. no matter wat,.. khaas karke aaj ka din,.. aaj unhone pura duniake saamne,.. unhe apnaya ,.. elaan kiya hai ki wo unki honewaali patni hai ,.. pura izzat aur samman dediya apni pyaar ko,.. ek gurur ke saath,.. saara bandhan aur bandhishe thode ke apnaliya,..jina sikhaya mujhe ,.. mere zindagi rang se bharaya ,.. khushiyonse bharaya ,.. ab ye zindagi unki hai ,.. kitna khushi di ,.. mai kaise samalpaungi itna khushiyaa,. darlagraha hai ,.."
Maan :- Geet kya sochrahi ho? abhi bhi naaraaz ho?
Geet:- looked at him ,.. as a fearing deer ,.. " darr lagtha hai Maan,... darr lagtha hai ki ye sab ,.. koi sapna tha ,.. aur karwat badlu tho sapna chalejaayegi ,.. she cupped his face,.. haa,.. Maan mai kabhi sapnome hi nahi sochatha ki .. mujhe phir se zindagi milegi ,.. pyaar milegi ,.. aap milega ,.. aap ,.. aap ki pyaar ,.. shaadi ,. aapki sath zindagi ,. ye sab abhi bhi mujhe ek sapna jaisa lagraha,.. darr lagraha hai maan ,.. kayi aankhe kholotho sapna tut jaegi ,..isliye mai humesha aapki baahonme rahna chahthi hu ,.. taaki mai apne aap ko yakeen dilasaku ki ye sapna nahi hai hakikat hai,.. humesha humesha keliye aap ki bahonme,.. ek pal keliye bhi aap se dur nahi jaasakthi Maan,...itna khushiyaa mai kaise mere dill me samalpau? she leaned on him taking his lips in to a soul searing kiss, which made him all lost in her love and passion, driving him to the ecstacy of emotions and desires that rushing in all his body.
She kissed him as if there is no tomorrow,.. while Maan kept surrendering himself to her all drowning in her passion giving her every promises and assurences that he never,.. ever leave her,.. trying to sooth her every fears bounding her in his citadel of his strong arms.
Dishu sat there keepng her chin on her both palms like she in deep thinking,..
Rahul came to her running,..Hai dishu,.. thumhe maalum hai kal mere bade mamu aur geet mam ki shaadi hai ,..
Dishu:- umm,..
Rahul :- thumhe kya hogaya ? thum khush nahi ho?
Dishu :- nahi rahul bhaiyya ,.. ye shaadi kya hotha hai mujhe maalum nahi hai
Rahul:- arree,.. thumhe nai maalum ? kabhi tv pe dekha nahi?
Dishu:- nahi maine dekha per mujhe ye nhi pata shaadi kyu karthe hai?
Rahul:- arre,.. pagal shaadi nahi kare tho mama papa ek saath kaise rahsakthe hai ,..?
Dishu:- matlab,.. mama papa humare saath rahna hai tho unhe shaadi karna chahiye?
Rahul nodded to 'yes' still not certain and cofused ,.. dont know how to explain wat is shaadi?,.he too dont know ,.. wat marriage means ,.. why ?etc,.. etc,.. [ bachha hai yaar ,. abhi bhi ,..]
thumhari , aur mere mama ,papa bhi shaadi ki,..
Dishu:- haa,.. per mai tho mama ,papa ki shaadi nahi dekhi ,.. ek bhi photo mai bhi mai nahi thi ,.. pata nahi mai kaha thi uss wakth,..
Rahul:- mai bhi nahi thi jab humari mama papa shaadi horaha tab,..
Dishu:- thum kahagaye tab?
Rahu:- ptch,.. pata nahi ,..
Kaka ,. who stood behind there and listening their innocent conversation and their frown on their faces that they r not present on their parents wedding ,.. laughed .
He came to them took them in to his laps and ,.." kyunki thum do sorahe the,.. thum dono bahut chote hona ,.. chote bahhe jaldi sojathe hai ,,. isliye thum dono apni mama papa ki shaadi me nahi the,..samjhe?,. per ab tho thum badi hogaye ,.. tho ab thumhari badi mamu aur Geet mam ki shaadi me khub enjoy karna o.k.. He kissed them both , clearing their mind fr. the doubt and avoiding unnecessary confusion and ambiguity in their small minds.

And the wedding cerimony started on a simple way on Geets insist. She wanted to keep it on a low profile,.. shaadi in temple with all reeti riwaaz and rituals ke saath.
Maneet wanted to perform all rituals but on simple way,..as they know the sanctity, serinity ,devinity and mahatva behind each ritual.
Sadionse purani reeti ,riwaazjo shaadi ko aur pavitre banathi hai ,.. humari purvaz ne sadionse pehle hi shaadi ko itna pavitre banadi ki ,.. shaadi keval do insaan ko nahi jodethe ,.. balki do aatmako, apni ,..puri man se ,.. tanse ,.. aatma se ,. shraddhase ,. budhhise ,..jodethe hai ,.. jaisa ki "Manasaa,..Waachaa,.. Karmanaa. Naathicharaami""Arthecha,..Karmechaa,..Mokhshecha,..Naathicharaami,..
ye do slok me hi shaadi ka pura arth nibidikrut hai ,.. wo waade wachan jo log dorathe ismehi shaadi ki pura sence samayagaya hai ,.. "ek mard aur ek aurat ,.. humesha ek dusere keliye apni ,.. manse ,tanse ,aatma se ,..samarpith hotha hai ,..ye reei , rituals undonoko aur kareeb laathe hai ,.. ek atoota bandhan banjaanekeliye ,
Isliye aaj puri Dunia humara Indian culture ko bahut izzat dethe hai ,.. humari taraf dekhthe hai ,.. humari culture aur custums ko maanthe hai ,.. humari kutumb vyavastha ko apnaneki koshish karrahe ,.. Wo niyam aur vidhi vidhan humari shaadi shuda zindagi ko pavitre babarahe ,..wo mahatve aaj tak logon ko ekdusere ke sath band karrahe ,. ek atoota bandhan banarahe,..
Geet ko unki pehli shaadi kuch nahi diye ,.. per wo shaadi per viswaas nahi khoya ,.. wo ye saari rasme ,.. riwaaj se apni manse ,.. tanse ,. aatma se ,. har ek mantre uski asli sence ke saath apni puri soul involvement ke saath apni aapko Maan ko samarpith hona chahthi hai ,.. wo saare waade ,.. kasme jo phere ke wakth ek dusereke saath lethe hai ,.. ekdusere ko dethe hai ,.. wo sab nibhana chahthi hai,..
Maan bhi yahi chahtha hai ,..wo Geet ko apni" Arthangini "banana chahtha hai ,..sachhi maine me ,.. pura ankith honachahtha hai Geet ko ,.. wo dono ek banna chahtha hai ,.. wo dono ,.. Maan aur Geet nahi hai ,.. wo "MANEET" hai '.EKHI AATMA."
Dev aur Annie r very much disappointed by ths simple wedding ,.. they wanted a grand one but Maan connvinced them ,..
Dev:-thik hai bhabi ,.. shaadi th aapki marji se hogi ,.. lekin baad me ek badiyasa reception honichahiye ,.. ab mana matijiye ,..
Geet:-per,..
Dev:- ohh,. common bhabhi ,. shaadi ke baad aap Mrs. MSK hai ,.. aur Mrs.MSK. ko kisi se darna nahi ,.. aap ko dunia ko phase karna hai bhabhi ,..
Annie:- haa bhabhi ab tho puri dunia ko pata chala ki aap MSK ki honewaali patni hai ,..phir kya pblm hai?
Prasant@Ar[itha:- haa ,..maa,.. aap papa ke baare me bhi sochiye ,...
Ab tho sab ko patachala ki Geet se baat kaise manwaana ,.. Maan keliye tho wo kuch bhi karsakthe hai ,..
She looked at Maan and nodded her head to "yes"
And the wedding over,... Maan and Geet ,..Maneet bangaya,..
Maan rigistered their marriage immeadiately calling rigistror to home.
Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
maan really helping geet in making her strong and she proved to
lady MSk
is here
dishu and Rahul ki talks r so cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update. So sweet geet wanting to be in his arms always so she feels it is all real. Love kaka. Cute talks by dishu amd rahul
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Posted: 10 years ago
After a long time dear...but a nice one as maaneet got married😉... the way u write how much maan loves geet is always known but in this geet has expressed herself to maan how much she loves him. Loved the cute convobtwn the kids. Happy now that maaneet r married... very nice update...😊

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