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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful story I finished all in four days
Every pt is written beautifully but maaneet moments
fabulous superb
Now Arpitha blaming Maan she concern about her mom
but she not thinking about her mom y she now in this age
need of partner.
And Anikita is also thinging about her life
but parshant have seen Maan conditions so he
is thinks on right track
Y can't Arpitha see who is MSK and wat he is doing
begging her Annie dev was totally in shock to see
him in this condition
wen Geet will get her conscious her first word will be Maan
wat will arpita reaction on that and Dr also say she will recover
fast in present of Maan like wen Maan was in hospital
I really want that track Maan taking care of Geet in hospital and in house
Plz ud soon and izhaar also
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Wonderful story I finished all in four days

Every pt is written beautifully but maaneet moments
fabulous superb
Now Arpitha blaming Maan she concern about her mom
but she not thinking about her mom y she now in this age
need of partner.
And Anikita is also thinging about her life
but parshant have seen Maan conditions so he
is thinks on right track
Y can't Arpitha see who is MSK and wat he is doing
begging her Annie dev was totally in shock to see
him in this condition
wen Geet will get her conscious her first word will be Maan
wat will arpita reaction on that and Dr also say she will recover
fast in present of Maan like wen Maan was in hospital
I really want that track Maan taking care of Geet in hospital and in house
Plz ud soon and izhaar also


really really felt very happy seeing ur long commt ,. and it dipict that how much u liked my story ,.. ur continuous effort to finish it bas in four days ,. really i am very happy ,.. u know yaar ,.this sort of responses really fills me with a new jeel to write more and more ,.. and u liked the maneet scenes nery much ,. really my hard work paid very much ,.. do commt like this always ,.. shurely i will try my best to reach to ur expectations ,. thank . u once again
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Posted: 11 years ago
ofcourse yaar...

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam


[DIV]u r well come dear ,.. agar mujheisi hi commts milnewaali tho ,...[/DIV]

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Posted: 11 years ago
MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd- 11/part-138/pg.no.83/17/7/2014




Part:-138

After 2 days,...

Abhi tak geet hosh me nahi ayi. Maan staid there itself all worn out all the 2 days. He denied to go home to take rest,.. na khana ..na peena ,. na sona sab chode kar hospital ki warande me bait gaya,.. hoping geet will get her conciousness.
The police arrested Naintara. On police treatment she confessed her crimes and now she is in remand. Dev put his every effort to send her to jail making sure that she never comes out. He took every care to put her chapter a close.

Arpitha came to hospital,. seeing Maan she got irritated she asked Prasant:- ye abhi tak yaha kya karrahe? kyu nahi jaarahe? aur kya baki hai dekhneka?
Prasant got irritated by arpithas behaviour he snapped on her,.. Bas,.. bas Arpitha bahut kuch hua ,.. ab thum ek aur shabd nahi bologi samjhe thum? thumhe dikhayi nahi deraha hai inki haalat?do din ,.. do din se wo waha baitgaye , ,.. khana ,..peena sab chodeke ,.. dekho kaise bikharthe hue hai ,.. kitna toot gaye ,.. ye thume dikhayi nahi derahe?kitna pathar bangayi thumhara dil? dekho wo kitna tadap rahe maa keliye kitna pareshaan horahe hai. sab kuch dekh kar bhi thum isa kaisa baath karsakthe ho arpitha?
mai nahi chahtha hu ki thum wo donoki beech aake unhe dur kare,.. wo ji nahi sakthe Arpitha,. ek dusereke bina nahi rahsakthe wo ,.. thumhe ye baath accept karni hogi,. jitna jaldi ye baath thum accept karogi utna hi achha hai,.. agar thum such me maa ki bhalayi aur unki khushi chahiye tho,.. maa sirf sir ke saath khush rahsakthi hai aur kisike saath nahi.
Arpitha stunned by his words,:- ye aap kyu isa bolrahe ho?aap jaathe hona ye sab unki waje se hua hai,..
Prasant:- unki wajese nahi hua ye sab iski jimmedaari kisi aur hai ,.. aur such kaho tho thumbhi uss N.T se kuch kam nahi ho?
Arpitha:- kya,. ? kya kaha aap ne ? mai ,.. mai ,..
Prasant:- haa Arpitha ,.. n.t. tried to kill maa phisically ,.. but u r killing maan sir both mentally and emotionally,..
Arpitha all stunned by prasants words ,.. not able to digest wat he is saying,.. aap kya bolrahe,.. meri samajme nahi arahe...
Prasant :- sochlo arpitha ,. thik se sochlo ,. ye thum bhi apni aankhone dekha ki maa bhi sir se pyaar karthi hai ,.. dono ek dusere keliye apni jaan chadathe hai ,.. agar maa ko kuch hua tho, aur isi tarah thum ne sir ko maa ke pass jaane se ruka tho thik wahi hoga is ki anzaam,.. apni dimaag se nahi dill lagake socho tabhi maalum hogi thumhe .,... he went away leaving behind flabergasted Aarpitha.

Aakash want to talk to Prasant ,. so he called him to canteen and when they r taking coffee,..
Aakash:- bro ,.. mujhe aap se kuch baath karna hai,..
Prasant:- umm,...
Aakash:- hesitatingly,... wo ,. wo ,.. kya ye such hai bro ,.. jo ,. wo ,.. bhabhi kahrahithi ki,... ki,... maa aur maan sir ke beech,...
Prasant looked at him sharply like wat u r up to now?
Aaksh gulped his saliva seeing his angry looks, trembling to complete,.. wo ,.. wo ,.log kya sochega bro? kya kya baath karega? aur humara izzat,...prasant snapped at him like shouting,...
Prasant:- waha ek jaan jaarahi hai,.. aur thumhe logonki padi hai? ye khya horaha hai thum sab ko? kal tak tho thumhe maa per itni respect hai ,.. itni izzat dethi hai unhe ,..per aaj kya hua ? thik .hai . Aakash mujhe ek baath bata ,.. kya thum Aankitha se pyaar karthe ho?
Aakash :- haa bro mai ankitha se bahut pyaar kartha hu .
Prasant:- matlab thum ankitha se pyaar karke hi unse shaadi karli haina?
Aakash:- haa bro ,.. he didnt get why he s asking this ?
Prasant :- tho ye batado ,.. agar maa ne kuch saalon pehle,.. mera matlab,... hum dono ki shaadi se pehle hi kisi aur se duseri shaadi karlia tho,.. kya thum ankitha se shaadi nahi karoge? Ankitha keliye thumhari pyaar kam hojayegi? bolo?
Aakash:- nahi bo ,. isa nahi hai mai usse bahut pyaar kartha tha aur humesha kartha hu,..
Prasant:- tho phir ab kyu is baath se thum itna pareshaan kyu horaha hai? Pehle thum ye acchhi tarah se jaan lo ki ,.. ma,. humare liye , is family keliye aur unki bachhe keliye jo bhi karna hai ,. wo karliya,. wo apni puri jimmedaari achhi tarah se nibhayi,.. ab ye unki jindagi ki sawaal hai ,.. unhe pura haq hai ki ,.. ye decide karneka ki.. unhe kya achha lagtha hai aurkya bura ,.. kiski saath jina hai ,. aur kya chahthi hai wo khud decide karlegi ,.. isme humari koi haq nahi hai dakhal andaaj karneki,.. samjhe thum?
agar hum unhe khush nahi desake tho ,.. unhe rukne ka haq bhi hume nahi hai ,..
He pulled Aakash to look at him,.. dekho ,waha maa zindagi aur mouth ke beech ladkhadarahi hai,.. ye koi wakth hai ye sab baat karneka?I never expect this fr. u Aakash,.. itni swaarthi kaisa banrahe ho thum log ,. waha arpitha aur yaha thum? he shooked his head in disgust ,...chi,...he left leaving a baffled Aakash behind.

After some time ,.. drs came out after checking geet. No hope at all shaking their heads in disappointment by the response fr. geet.
All looked at him with lot of hopes.
Dr:- shooking his head, humari haath me jobhi hai wo humne karliya,.. aage sab uperwaalon ki haath me hai,.. kuch der me unhe hosh nahi ayi tho,.. he noded his head to no,. fearing to complete knowing Maans reaction and went in dipping their heads.
Arpitha and Ankitha broke down in tears in loud cryings.
Maan lost his lost hope. He leaned on the wall by the myraid of emotions playing across his face ,.. defeated,.. despair helplessness,. agony ,. and fury on self,.. loosing every thing ,.. his sences ,.his hold on self,. his strength,. everything,. He began to walk aimlesly,.. dont know to where,. like a dead person,.. dragging himself like a zombie who lost every thing,...when his eyes fell on the idol of the Lord Krishna kept at the entrance of the hospital. He dragged himself to that moorthy,.. dont know why,.. The man who can rule his empire with his single look,.. who can control the world by his power,.. who never ever gone to any temple in his whole life,.. never fold his hands before any idol,.. never believed in almighty now ,.. folding his hands before the lord. ,.. bending before the almighty,. begging for his life. He slumped at the foot of the moorthy folding his hands with his flooding eyes,.. dont know how to pray ,. dont know how to chant , dont know how to ask for anything ,. dont know how to worship god,.. He tried to mumble something,.. but the voice didnt come out,.. just only one thing," meri geet ko mujhe waapas dedo bhagwaan" meri geet ko mujhe waapas dedo"sirf ekhi baath unki mami man me bhagwaan se puchrahe with all his folded hands and flooding eyes.
Annie Dev and Arjun who r coming to the hospital looked this and stunned[ stunned is a small word but i didnt get any better , if any one have better option then tell me i am ready to accept it to get a better feel]seeing him bending before the god and folding his hands,.. the scene which they never witnessed till now, never even in their dreams also expected this fr. him.
Annie bursted in to tears seeing her brothers condition. She ran to him holding him calling him to bring him back,..
Annie:- BHAI,..she cried loudly in fear of loosing him:" isi tarah tootgaye tho dar lagtha hai ki mai aap ko khodungi bhai,...she looked at Arjun who is also worrying ,.. he throwed his hairs back in disgust and for his helplessness.
Dev ran inside to enquire wat happened and find all in bursting in tears.He began to pace fr, maan to geet became restless hopeless,. dont know how to console r whom to console.
Here in i.c.u ,.. the nurse is attending geet fallowing drs suggestions,.. when she observed a small movement in the eye lids of geet.,. which gradually increased,..now moving rapidly like she is seeing some bad dream,.. trying hard to get wake up herself fr. the sleep. Nurse smiled happily seeing that and she tried to wake her up calling her ,.. mam ,.. mam,... when geet shot open her eyes,.. seeing nurse holding,.. slowly trying to gather wat is all around.
She tried to loose the hold f nurse and trying to go away fr. her mumbling,. chodo mujhe,.. mujhe maan ke pass jana hai,. chodo mujhe,.. assuming that as if the nurse is taking her away fr, Maan forcebly to some where . thinking that the nurse is trying to separate her fr. maan,.. and thats it ,.. she began to shout MAAN ,.. MAAN,..,. now raising her voice aur loud ,. Maan,.. Maan,.. bachao mujhe ,.. koi mujhe thumse dur karrahe maan,.Maan kaha ho aap? and now she got down the bed breaking all tubes and wires and saline everything,.. want to run to him. Nurse is not able to stop her and hold her. She shouted for help,.. DR,..DR,..

All who r out side i.c.u. got alerted and ran in to the i.c.u.Drs also rushed to her. There the scene before them made all flabergasted,... Geet is all out of bed and want to go out trying to loose herself fr. the nurses grip.
Drs immeadiately reacted to this ,. they also shocked by this ,.. the pateint whoes all hopes have beeing left,.. is now got her conciousness ,.. not only that she is ready to go out,.. how could she get that much strength,. after that dreadfull accident.
A big blast to all especially Arpitha and Ankitha and rest of the family,.. their mother got her conciousness ye tho khushi ki baath ,. she isfine strong and sound before their eyes ,.. which is a pleasant one ,.but the real blast is her first word fr. when she came to concious is "MAAN"and not theirs ,.. she called Maan but not them,.. a real real blast which they cant digest.All looked at eachother.
Drs trying to calm down her making her lay down on the bed as it svery dangerous to her health to get excited and strained this much,. they are telling her assuring her that they will inform but nothing is entering in to her ears.only telling ,. mujhe maan ke pass jaanahai ,. thum log mujhe kaka leka jaarahe ho? maan kaha hai ?mujhe maan chahiye,.. maan chahiye,.
Drs looked at the family members saying jaldi Mr. Khurana ko bulayiye,.. urgent,. nahi tho ye phirse coma me jaasakthi hai itna stress lena achhi nahi hai is haalat me,. please do it fast,

. and thats it Prasant ran out in search of Maan. He began to shout Maan sir ,.. Maan sir ,.. maa ko hosh agayi ,.. wo aap ko bularahi hai,.. kaha ho aap? like that he raomed in the hospital to find him.
Maan still at the foot of lord when a shout heard to him,.. Maa ko hosh agayi ,. wo aap ko bularahe,.. it knocked him and he stood there at once and began to run towards i.c.u. like rocket
thrown in to the space.

link for part-139:- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668596&PID=111294724&#p111294724

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Main first aa gayi!!!!
Update padhne ke baad comment dungi...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Dear...new here..

wonderful update dear..


u r one of a very good writer in GF...



this is my 1st comment here...!!!!!!!!!!


its truly a wonderful concept and lovely story...!!!!!!!!!!


geet is in hospital...maaneet pain is mind numbing and heart wrenching!!!!!!!!!!


Prasant's answers were too good!!!!!!!!!




awww maan prayed to god was so adorable dear!


geet gained concious !!!!!!!!!!!


hope maaneet problems sought out and be one always!!!!!!!!!!


B***h Naintara...she must rot in hell!!!!!!!!!!!!


do cont soon dear...!!!!!!!!!!


thanx alot 4 the pm dear!!!!!!!!!!!!






Uma...



Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Main first aa gayi!!!!

Update padhne ke baad comment dungi...


ab mujhe kaha phasa diya ,. koi aur bhi isa hi kahrahe ki wo first hai ,.. kisko pehle thank u boldu?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet ko hosh agaya🥳👏
Nex part b jaldi dedo... Please😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet is lucky to have prashant as damad..jo bete se kam nahi hai..
finally ab sab ko akal aayegi k geet or maan ek dusre k liye kya hai..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: umamaaneet


Dear...new here..

wonderful update dear..


u r one of a very good writer in GF...



this is my 1st comment here...!!!!!!!!!!


its truly a wonderful concept and lovely story...!!!!!!!!!!


geet is in hospital...maaneet pain is mind numbing and heart wrenching!!!!!!!!!!


Prasant's answers were too good!!!!!!!!!




awww maan prayed to god was so adorable dear!


geet gained concious !!!!!!!!!!!


hope maaneet problems sought out and be one always!!!!!!!!!!


B***h Naintara...she must rot in hell!!!!!!!!!!!!


do cont soon dear...!!!!!!!!!!


thanx alot 4 the pm dear!!!!!!!!!!!!






Uma...




and u touched me yaar with ur first commt itself ,.. sooo beautiful,. cant say my thanks in words ,.. pleasure is mine as i got a good reader like u ,.. surely try to please u in my next updates
by the way try my second ff ,.. Izhaar ,. pyaar ka ,.. also and do give ur precious commts on that thread also thak.u. dear ,..

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