~sati~ maaneet THREAD 9 last pt pg95 jul19 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
still she is discovering more of him
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Posted: 12 years ago
maans stance is soo painful
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update...
luved it...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful portray of geet's emotions

loved it completely
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Posted: 12 years ago
the whole ff is made sooo much impact on me but last update especially more

so after a longgg time I wrote few words from geet side


Itne saalo se itni mein bekhabar thi

(I was so lost from many years)

Naa jane apne hi khialo mein ghum thi

(I was lost in my own world)

Jab yeh nanhi jaan(dev) meri zindgi mein aayee

(since dev has born)

Kisi ke mere paas hone se bekhabar thi mein

(I never felt presence of anybody else around me)

Woh hamesha mera saaya bana raha har modh pe

(he was beside with me like my shadow)

Uske harr modh pe hone ke ahsaas se bekhabar thi mein

(i was unaware of his presence around me)

Ab mere hi ansh(dev) ne mujhe yeh ahsaas dilaya

(now dev has made me realize)

To samajh mein aayaa ke ek bhram mein thi mein

(then i came to know that i was living in fantasy)

Naa jane kitni baar maine use(maan) dukh pahunchia

(I don't know how many times I hurt him)

Kyunki us ki tadap, uske dard se bekhabar thi mein

(because i was unaware of his craving his longing)

Ab samajh mein nahin aata kya karoo, kasie karoo

(now i don't know what to do and how to do)

Ke woh samajh jayee uske (maan) bager kuch bhi nahin mein

(so he understands that i am nothing without him)


Edited by jasraj123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet or uska remorse ... uff painful ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
mee too
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Posted: 12 years ago
jaldi update dena ... maan hi geet ko is sab se nikal sakta hai ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 57
her guilt is eating her up now
she didnot try 2 understand him
his needs
n take care of him
she did not know what is his likes dislikes about his health
the 4 yrs of her colourless life
he fulfilled her every wishes n dreams taking care of her without expecting her to reciprocate his love..

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 58
geet trying 2 make parathas
n burning it
spilling milk on him his taunt hurts her
when he came back changing n gave her a kiss
she was all blushy
dev is more understanding
he said simply
she loves him more than maan
taking care of him is her life
n maan for geet..
geet is getting clear now..
how much she had missed ..
she always saw the mask on his face
not the pain behind it..
feeling very bad for maan
he showers his love on her
but she never saw it..
its been long way that they have passed with one sided love..
now she must compensate it..
dev leaving to hostel..
this time she must use for him only

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