~sati~ maaneet THREAD 9 last pt pg95 jul19

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

oh god now geet realised maan's pain and now she is facing the same longing and pain

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

i cant describe how wonderfully you wrote this chapter di ...
its beyond my imaginations, beyond my words!!!

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Every time i get overwhelmed by the way you portray the painful emotions, u come with one more update that leaves me stunned...

18 years went in trance... and in a day, everything went upside down... She is so into recollecting what she did in the last 18 years... that every single thing hits her hard with such intensity that she is completely shattered...

that milk wala part... his just one action hurt her so much... his one denial .. but all these years, he went through was ignorance...

And slowly when she brushes through the memories of past, she just visualizes things that remained hazy to her till date...

Dev - Geet part.. it was so meaningful.. It was the truth... Maan loved her to death... and took care of her... and she loved and cared for Dev too much... not that she wanted to ignore Maan or didnt love him, but she was so much into the motherhood, that she didnt realize that she was ignorant towards her husband..

And this part:
From Devs point of view his parents r wonderful couple. They sweetly compliment each other. Geet takes complete care of Dev & Maan takes complete care of Geet. Kind of a complete circle. Just that his dad seems very strong & independent man. Manages his things by himself.

And in this whole thing, the thing that went unnoticed was, Maan too needed the care and love... He was very independent and strong and self made, but by heart he yearned for the love and care!! He has been the one who was on the side of taking care from his young age.. first dev, then geet... and then Devansh... The painful fact of his life which he masked by a smile!!

And with each realization, i felt the pain of geet... but again when she just realizes the things, i felt more of maan's pain.. But one thing i admire about this man... his love was so deep and true that he smiled over the pain of ignorance for 18 years... its not easy to be in pain and mask it with a smile... And now i cant wait to see the love of Geet that he deserves rightly...

Neither maan was perfect, nor is Geet... but what makes the characters amazing is their realization and trying to correct them...

Edited by Shruthe - 12 years ago

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Amazing update loved the way you put down their pain ..I loved the devansh wording for their parents as couple

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Aaksha

@princess.rocks

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

superb.. so dam awesome... loved it yaar :D :D

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anjalisen85

@anjalisen85

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

superb part👏👏

atlast geet understands maans pain😉

Edited by anjalisen85 - 12 years ago

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

this was one of the best updates dii
really speechless right now
i ahve so many things running in my mind but cant even express...
her realizing his lonliness, the pain she felt... his pain that she realized after years
those pictures told her what she had missed to notice so many things in these years...small small things about the person who loved her dearly like anything... and then the realization...
after years she is feeling..like u mentioned-- lust
but probably this is the first time she is feeling like this... for someone...
i had completely stopped breathing while reading this... beautiful one diii
am a little nervous abt the next updt though😆
pls update super soon

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lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

superb update dear
u hv depicted wht geet feeling now in a beautiful way
she is nw understanding wht was missing in her life these years
hope she make sincere efforts make maan feeel that she too loves him

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Great update dear...

so she is now missing all those moments all those moments..

Maan's reaction was natural.. anyone who is in such rush time would feel 10 times more irritated and shout but Maan controlled and he soon realized he shouted on her and thus can back with swet peck..

1st time she blushed that way with his peck..

her cherishing those pictures now.. cherishing him actually on those memories...

now she could see how he had always been waiting for her return while she was always lost in her own world of happiness...

waiting for her to actually stretch her hand to him.. he has always waited for her but now takes for granted that she is far away from him and he just don't expect her even trying to reach him.