MG FF : THE DIVINE FLOWER~~ PART 18 :pg128: sept 30th - Page 40

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Posted: 12 years ago
great update
but ab ye naya confusion kya hai
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...glad to see meera n geet friends...eager to read more...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
poor geet...eagerly waiting to know what happened between maaneet
precap...scary
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Hii

For the first time in history I'm updatin on the same date as promised 😳 😆

Thnx a lottt for your wonderful support. 🤗

PART 11

Maan was at the gym of his penthouse. He was working out thinking about all that had happened between Hoshiarpur and New York.

Maan : aj se me apney maqsat ko anjaam dene ja rha hu. Geet tum us har ladki ke liye sabak ban jaogi jo pyar ke naam par dhong dikhati he.

He got ready for the office.

Geet on the other hand got ready with a determined mind. Now she is ready to face the wrath of Maan Singh Khurana. The other day he took her by surprise but today she was mentally prepared. She arranged everything in Ramona's desk according to the routine. Then Ramona came and called her to the cabin.

Ramona : yeah Geet since you were not there yesterday I have asked Sasha to pick some designer skirts according to the Indian fashionistas.

Geet : I have already ordered some Valentino skirts!!

Ramona : oh! I thought Sasha would do this job better because umm she is much xperienced than you in these kind of attires.

Geet : should Icancel the orders?

Ramona : uhh..no no let Maan decide which one to go with.

Geet : aren't you going to have a look at them?

Ramona : ofcourse I will but I would give MK the upper hand coz he knows the Indian market better. Ok go get me the proof of Markers design. Is he working at all or just hanging around in Pageant?

Geet : yeah, I'm leaving.

Ramona : honey you have 20 minutes before MK arrives.

Geet rushed to Marker's office and got the designs. On her way back she saw that the lift was about to close and got in hastily. She didn't see properly and collided with something hard dropping her file down. She could feel a strong hand winding around her waist through the thin material of her white cotton shirt. She opened her eyes to find Maan staring back at her. Her breathing increased as his face was inches away from her bossom. His masculine fragrence was driving her insane. She clutched her right hand which was already holding the fabric of his shirt tightly. Maan and Geet straightened themselves but Maan's hand was still on her waist. Geet looked at him as if asking him to take his hand off her. Maan smirked and kept his hand there. Geet tried to release the grip but he wouldn't leave.

Geet : ye kya kar rhe ho ap?

Maan : kya hua? Mere chuney se tumhari pavitrata bhang ho gayi?

Geet stopped her struggle. She couldn't look into his eyes and watch her Maan accusing her.

Maan continued his taunt, "Oh! Me to bhul gaya pavitrata to uski bhang hoti he jiske paas wo he. Tum to.."

Geet pleaded, "Maaan..!" She closed her eyes and continued, "sir please.."

Maan : Cmon Geet, aisa to nhi he ki me tumhe pehli baar chu raha hu?


Geet now staring at him,"what do you want Maan SIR..? If I shout now, as soon as we get out of this lift...

Just then the lift shook and the power went off. Geet clutched Maan's arms in an iron grip. Maan let his hand go from her waist and kept it on her hand consoling her as a reflex action.

Geet : Maan sir ye lift rukh kyu gayi? Aur light kyu gayi? Mujhe bohat darr lag rha he..yeha to light aisey jaati bhi nhi he. Aur isey bhi abhi jaana tha jab me lift me hu..

Maan kept his forefinger on her lips, "chup bilkul chup! Samjhi tum?"

Geet nodded innocently.

Maan : Geet no need to panic. This is only a lift aur waise bhi tumhe nhi lagta you are too old to be scared like that?

Geet : old? I'm lygophobic aur ye bachpan se he

Maan : I know that!

Geet : to phir puch kyu rhe ho ap? Ap kuch karte kyu hi?

Maan : tum chup rahogi to me kuch karunga na!

He fumbled through his pocket while one hand still over Geet's hand and found his phone. He switched on the LED app in the phone and there was some light in the lift.

Now it's a general human psychology that their behaviors change according to surroundings. This is mainly because the brain thinks differently under different circumstances. That's why they say, seeing things in a different light. Coming back to Maaneet,


In the lift as the small light glowed it was like a moon-lit night. They were standing so close holding each other that their heartbeats were racing. Maan looked at Geet and found her curls blocking the view of her perfect angelic face in a most tempting way. His eyes moved down from her face and found that her neckline was seductively exposing her chest with the collar button of her shirt open and her now pounding heart. He had seen in broad daylight that she was dressed to kill in that black pencil skirt that ended right below her knees and a simple cotton shirt but when she is standing so near to him all he could think was the different ways in which he wanted to touch her and arouse her. Geet saw from the corner of her eye that Maan was staring at her. She could do nothing but blush under his gaze. His hands involuntarily moved to move back her curls and devour her beauty to fullest. Geet closed her eyes as she felt his fingers caressing her earlobes while he tucked the curls behind her ear. He moved closer and closer to her and was about to kiss on her nape when lights came back and they moved apart. They couldn't face each other and there was complete silence.

Maan cleared his throat, "So how did you get this job?"

Geet (a bit surprised) : umm..Actually Ramona's husband is a friend of Arjun. He talked to him and I go this job..not only that Ramona won't give or take any favours you know!

Maan again got back to his self as he heard the word "Arjun" , "Arjun?"

Geet : yeah..what? He is my friend and I needed help!

Maan : Well as far as I know, your friend Mira also lives in the US. Why didn't you go to her for some help? Of course, you won't. Tumhe apney ashiqo se phursat miley tab na!

Before Maan could see the pain in her face, the lift reached the 23rd floor. They both entered together. Ramona came to receive Maan.

Ramona : Can you believe we just had some power outage for the last fifteen minutes? Sorry for the inconvenience MK.

Maan : thats fine. Can we see the samples?

Ramona : oh yeah, they are at my office. Geet, call Sasha and be there now!

Geet rushed to inform Sasha. Both of them carried two cloth-hanger trolleys. Sasha walked in with the one that had elegant but dull-colored skirts like antique white, ash grey and blond. Geet on the other hand had a trolley that carried vibrant colors of skirt like electric green, acqua and deep pink.

Ramona : MK, we have two wide range of Valentino skirts . Whats your pick?

Maan was least interested in the skirts. All he wanted was Geet to suffer. So he chose Sasha's trolley. Even Ramona was surprised.

Ramona : do you mind telling us why those?

Maan: actually people back there, especially the urban population is our target customers. The bright skirts..they are available in the local brands also. By the time the magazine will be released it would be November or December and when people look for a Valentino at that time they would go for these shades and not the bright ones. They might be good for some summer/spring edition

Ramona : I'm impressed!

Maan : Excuse me?

Ramona : MK, these are exactly the words that Geet told me this morning when she showed me those skirts.

Maan's face was worth watching the moment she said this. He felt betrayed and Geet tried hard to control her smile.

Maan : Geet told you?

Ramona : Yeah, Geet picked those shades

Maan(pointing to the bright ones) : and those?

Ramona : Sasha. Oh.by the way Sasha just put those back to the store.

Sasha : ofcourse mam

Ramona: well MK thats so nice of you to give us the input. We will have to work on the stills and photography department and yeah it's my pleasure to inform you that Marker sent me a proof of his designs.

Maan : the show-stopper piece of our first issue?

Ramona : we need to discuss on it

Maan and Ramona carried on their discussion. Geet came out with a smile while Sasha was burning with fury. Geet got busy with her work. She rushed to the studio to handover the samples to the concerned group.

Tasha came to console a devastated Sasha.

Tasha : Sasha..umm mera matlab he mam, you don't have to worry MK ne us Geet ke samples hi to select kiye. Trolley apke haath me thi to may be you.. know

Sasha : so what? Credit to wo Ms. Hoshiarpur hi le gayi na? But I won't let her impress MK anymore.

Tasha : impress karke bhi kya faida? I heard that he is married!

Sasha : so what? Ye influential personalities ka style statement he ki wo apney girl-firend ke liye first wife ko divorce de! And MK doesn't have any kids. So he is still a nice catch for anyone.

Tasha : yes you are right. All the best Sas..i mean mam

Maan came out of Ramona's cabin. Sasha approached him with a provocative smile. Maan felt irritated.

Sasha : MK, I was thinking if we could have lunch together?

Maan was about to snap when he saw Geet coming towards their direction. He faked a smile almost making Sasha faint and replied, "ofcourse Sasha! and please call me Maan "

Geet noticed Maan's sweety talks and listened intently to them but she was not looking at them.

Sasha : Which place Maan?

Maan : any place of your choice!

Maan stared at Geet and kept his hand aorund Sasha's waist and left with her. The moment she was out of sight Maan took his hand and stayed a feet away from Sasha.

Geet felt like she would puke any moment. Her face was flushing red.


Geet (imitating) : "which place Maan?" "any place of your choice" ye Maan bhi na! mera khayal to nhi ayega pata he, lekin apney barey me to sochtey! Shadi shuda he wo ab! Isi liye me unsey dur bhaag rhi hu aur wo he ki..chi chi babaji! Aur wo Sasha kutti kamini...kaisi besharam he wo..ghor kalyug he Geet ghor kalyug. Tu chup chap apna kaam kar, chal!


Maan was walking towards the parking lot with Sasha when something came to his mind.

Maan: umm Sasha aj Friday he?

Sasha : yes Maan!

Maan : oh my God! How could I forget? I have an important date..I mean meeting..You do one thing. Just wait here. I will send my assisstant Adi. He will take you to some restaurant and you can have your lunch. I gotta go..

Sasha stomped her feet as Maan flew away in his car. Maan came running to the park where he saw an angry Ami who was ready to snap any moment.

Maan held his ears for an apology. Ami looked away.

Maan : hey Miya.. itna gussa?

Ami : ha nhi to..Meri mumma ne mujhe bohat daata pata he jab unhe pata chala ki mene apkey sath kaha khaya. Phir bhi mene apsey milne ki zidd ki aur ap to mujhe bhul hi gaye..

Maan pulled her cheeks trying to pacify her, " ohhoo meri princess, hum apko kaise bhul sakte he? I was busy thoda kaam tha!"

Ami : ap bhi mumma ke tarah busy ho?

Maan : hmm ab kya he na Miya bade ho jatey he to office jatey he aur office matlab busy

Ami : lekin me abhi bhi apsey katti

Maan : arey wo kyu?

Ami : ap to super-firend ho.. ap bhi super-dad ki tarah late ho jaogey!

Maan : kyu apkey super-dad bhi office jatey he?

Ami : pata nhi. Wo to itney late hotey he ki mene unhe kabhi nhi dekha!

Maan looked at her shocked. Lisa was surprised too. For the first time, Ami told the truth about her dad to someone.

Maan felt a lump in his throat as he asked, "apney super-dad ko kabhi nhi dekha?"

Ami : nhi. Mumma kehti he ki ek din wo zarur mujhse milney ayenge lekin wo to atey hi nhi latee latee lateee...

Maan smiled sadly, "lekin aj ke baad apkey super-firend kabhi late nhi hongey"

Ami : promise?

Maan : promise!

Ami : pakka wala?

Maan : pakka wala promise!

Ami hugged Maan.

Ami : chalo ab lunch karte he. Mumma ne hum dono ke liye lunch pack kiya he.

Maan : Acha? Apki mumma ne mujhe daata bhi aur mere liye lunch bhi pack kiya?

Ami : ha kyu ki unhe pata he ki ap mere super-friend ho, is liye me apko mil sakti hu lekin sirf Liny ke sath!

Maan shook his head seeing her innocence.

Maan : apki mumma to bohat achi he

Ami : the best! Ab unka the best khana khao ap.

Maan : kya layi ho ap?

Ami : Rajma chawal

Maan and Ami made a face together.

Ami whispered in Maan's ears, "ek secret batau?"

Maan : what?

Ami : mummy ka rajma chawal bohat tasy hota he.

Maan(whispers) : to phir kha lete he na

They both ate the lunch together. As Maan took the first bite, (self-thot) "ye to..Geet ke haath ka swad he. Cmon Maan ! Aj kal tu itna sochta he uskey barey me ki humesha usi ka khayal he tere dimag me."

After the lunch,

Maan : Ab apko desert nhi khana?

Ami nodded excited.

Maan : wats your favourite?

Ami : Chocolate mousse!

Maan : Thats my favourite too..

Ami : tabhi to ap super friend ho!

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PRECAP : Maan and Geet working together 😳 😲

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Edited by madhubala123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme part...
Ami is sooo cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply amazing.loved it
a completely lovable part😳
Edited by yappingduck - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply amazing.loved it
a completely lovable part😳

thnk u reva 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
just love it dear
ossum
oh god mk want humilate her
bt he selected same thing wht geet liked
gud
w8 fr nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago
maanu n his maqsad
bt i think maanu apne maqsad se bhatak rha hai
see he is always lot in her n their beautiful memories
the lift scene was cute
n lv geet's smartness
how smartly she made manu choose her design
she knwos maaanu will nner selfdet which r in her hands woowww
n wo chudail; sasha knowing he is married still chipak rhi hai chipkali kfi ki
n maanu aiwe hi ussse panga le rha hai
btlv the way he took her for lunch n parking ai aate hi tye tye fish😆😆😆
maanu amy meet was so cute
amy she is so omfortable with him
n she told her dad secret thet she never saw him also
bt want to ask
y maaneet call her MIYA???
lvd it yar
waiting 4 more
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
maan doing all this but he cares for geet and still it seems he loves geet

continue soon

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