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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
congrats for new thread

nice teaser
what r u doing geet????
hope maan understand geet pov do something soon on it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
nice teaser:)

geet is hell bend on losing a gem...😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
when will u gonna update ???????plzzz update jaldi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
congrats for the new thread...

loved the teaser...

continue soon...

thnks for the Pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats on the new thread
and nice teaser
waiting for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36


HAQ...ek anokhi prem katha

chapter 20

Important note

Many readers is not bothering to comment well fine, I will see this some day after it will shift FF in my blog and give link only regular and loyal readers thanks and no need to comment just for sake and crush me, comment if your heart want to only and yes one word commenter no need for this as its hurt me more. and i will not say this every time as seriously i got enough comment and like, will only write from now on for myself and my regular reader no matter if they are 1 or 300 and already i am mission on cleaning and i delete many already, thanks to bear this note

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Geet comes out after getting ready with full determination to make nisha and maan one and gice them time to spend with each other, That why she took mitu also with her so maan doesn't again starts to play with her.

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Maan and Nisha are catching up with random stuff and updates in both of life, while coffee is also a good company with lots of gossips. Maan is not at all a talkative personality both with collage friend even god is also become child so he is only a mere business tycoon.

"Maan!!! Mitu ko lao naa mere pass atti nahi hai, I want to play with her" nisha said suddenly while enjoying coffee sip in this winter.

"Hmm!!! I am also missing my rabbit, wait let me take her here" maan said and placed his coffee cup on table and rush into their room than staircase and found mitu is peacefully throwing her hands and legs in air while lying in curdle.

But unknown to them one pair of eye is following maan and nisha talks first than maan anxiety for being near mitu. This is what she fear all the time, one day or another day mitu and she has to go away from his life that time this attraction and affection will be proof a stone in all of them way, she can make her understand to her heart but mitu, already she is habitual of maan lap and smell, more closeness will only lead complications.


Geet with fast steps reached toward mitu curdle and before maan take his life in his hand, geet took her. Maan frowned with this wired behavior, geet understood she has to define her action now, first she stammered than spoke up "vo she is hungry naa soo".

Maan smiled and left from there to give mother daughter their privacy. He cant even imagine geet intentions behind all this dreadful act.

When geet saw maan retraining figure, tears gathered up in her almond eye, she is feeling sinner in herself. Sinner of this little soul who is watching maan with big doe shape eye in the anticipation that he will take her and throw her in air and catch her, sinner of a father soul who just left without knowing that she is intentionally making them apart. But sometime treatment pained so much but its necessary also to heal wounds or remove a defective part from your life.

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Later at the time of lunch, geet didn't come even once to serve anyone, today she took charge to make 'Roties' while meera and annie serve even nisha also helped them. Still mitu curdle is near geet which is quite unusual as she left mitu with him daily, what happened today.

"Maybe I am thinking too much. I also knew mitu is moody child" maan smiled sadly as he is already missing mitu from morning, from last 10 days, she laid near him and with her burr tried to catch his attention but today room is looking very much lonely.

Geet is observing his expression from kitchen and room partition, and again guilt made her hands heavy with the burned of this sin. She sadly saw toward mitu, again she is snatching family from her, hope she forgive her one day when she come to know about all this.

Maan after washing hands with jug come to mitu curdle and she shirked in happiness to see him. She is also missing his lap but geet pats made her calm now and then but before maan took his bundle of joy in his arms, geet come and took her.

"vo maan jii let me change her than I will come in room" geet didn't meeting her eye with maan as she know he will caught her at same moment.

Maan face color again drains but he again thought this is co incident, and geet is mother, she knew very well when mitu need what. But still he wants to hug mitu one time only to ensure his thumping heart. He also lost many times his happiness but this time he didn't want to part away from his own small family. He starts to felt like a family man nowadays. He even called in Delhi office and ordered them to invest 10 million at name of mitu as he wants a secure future for his cutie pie.

A fatherly feeling making him a totally changed man, he starts to take care of himself also so mitu will be secure whole life with him.

But geet is unknown to the fact that maan and mitu are not a different personality now, both are piece of puzzle and for to complete their life they need each other.

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In evening finally mitu starts crying after saw maan who is not taking her again to heard her maan cut the call but again geet took her and starts to made her calm but nothing is working she is bending toward maan.

"Geet!!! Give her to me" maan said calmly pushed back his all irritation.

"No maan jii!!! I will manage, you continue your work" geet again tried to talk with mitu.

"Geet!!! Say me clearly, from morning are you trying to do something" maan whispered but still not able to altered those word still, he can't even think his innocent geet cant do something like this but still doubt is starts to poke him so it's better to clear this before this doubt turned in venom.

Geet startled with this sudden question and say lie in front of maan X-ray gaze is next to impossible, maan is business tycoon he deal daily with this type of liars and caught them also.

"Geet!!! Just say I am wrong" maan whispered again, his heart is fearing, to hear most hurtful words.

But her silence told maan everything, is not a kid to not understand what is geet trying to do?

"How could you did this to me geet" maan said all devastated and in broken voice.

Geet iis just kept sobbing like hell, she didn't know what to say even without saying any word maan understood her very well and she know her reason also going to hurt him.

"Stop it damn it!!! Stop crying and tell me reason" maan shouted with his all might and mitu starts cried more loudly with so much sound.

Dadi and other come in hall to see, what is the matter? Why maan is shouting and on whom? And shocked to see geet standing there with head down and a crying mitu is wriggling in her arms, dadi can feel that mitu is restless.

"Stop it you both of you, see mitu how red her face turned" dadi shouted on both of them and took mitu but she again cried more loudly, she is bending toward maan, all restless but still maan is not able to gathered himself to take her in his arm, when geet just made him stranger in one second. His eyes are moist today and geet can read them but he hide it behind his anger.

Two pair of eye is enjoying this pleasant view so much, one is sasha and other is shuhani bua. They want to take advantage of situation like good vamps.

"Geet!!! Answer me right now" maan said and hold her tightly with shoulders.

Dadi and other is little scared to see maan like that while geet is shivering even nisha is shocked, that what happened? Sometime ago maan is looking like a love sick puppy now??

"Geettt"

"Haa I did that!!! Because I want to go with my daughter very far away from you, I didn't deserve you, you deserve a pure and modern up to date life partner not me, who is mother already, how can you expected from me that I will spoil your life, we both are happy maan jii, we didn't need sympathy, we are ok, you go and marry your love, don't worry about us, I did this mitu is too attached you and you also, this only lead hurdles in both of your life than how can I do this? I am not selfish maan jii, let us free, we both are not mean for each other, we are never" geet finished her confession with lots of hiccups and sobs, her choking voice is also not helping her.

"And who are you to decide whom I love and whom not ? Waise the great geet khurana nai ye tu bata diya shayad ladki bhi dundi hu mere liye batao naa geet" maan voice is full of sarcasm and pain which is reflecting by his red eye.

"Bolooo"

"Nisha jii" geet whispered and her words left whole hall in silence.

"Nisha come forward, are you mad geet? I am just married one month ago and me and my husband come to Delhi to take Dadi blessing when I found you all are here, I come here as my husband stopped for some work and maybe today or tomorrow he will be here and you are planning my second marriage, what happened to you, if you got a wrong impression from me than I am really sorry from bottom of my heart, but geet you did very wrong today" new information made geet numb and maan eyes are glaring her with cold stares.

Other also sighed to think, all is well at least every thing is clear.

Geet sobs are filling whole hall but maan didn't show any misery, mitu is watching maan with longing eye even maan wants to cursed her in his arm, but now he knew he is no one than how he take mitu, what if geet again show him his place.

Maan just left from their without any single word, which made dadi worried.

"Now see!! Didn't I said to you all, she is a bad omen but you all, now today she broke even maan also, maa I am telling you throw her out from your life if you want every one safe and happy" shuhani bua took out her venom again to see maan hurt eye, she got soften some days ago but again her hatred come out.

"I knew it!!! This girl never deserves mk" sasha also said but only shut by dadi.

"Just shut up!!! Sasha this is family matter ok and geet is your owner wife so if I saw again you insult her than that will be your last day with kc" dadi said in full of savitri khurana mode.

"and shuhani, this is my son and daughter in law matter so stay out of it, I am very much capable to take decision, don't give your opinion without asking next time" dadi glared are exact copy of maan.

Shuhani left from there after felt insulted in front of all.

"geet!!! Come into my room right now and wipe tears, galti ki hai tu samna bhi karo" dadi said firmly.

Precap: maan is not even giving glance mitu and geet and turned so much cold.

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Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
atlast maan learned da truth
kyu geet mitu ko usse dur rakh rahe he
nisha is already married😲
maan is so hurt 😭
also feel sad 4 geet
bt in dono bich me mere mitu pis rahe he
ab geet ko maan ka gussa seh na parega
hope wo or mitu maan ka gussa melt kr de jaldi
update soon

Edited by AmElOdI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Geet hurt Maan with her utmost stupidity.. bechari her POV was right but isme she forgot what Maan wanted.. 😭... Loved the way Daadi roasted that creep bua and **** sasha.. both unworthy specimens deserve worse than this. Precap bit scary.. but that's expected.. Poor Maan when Geet thinks its his sympathy then she has to face the consequences too.. oh my poor Mitu will suffer in this most missing her dadda..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
finally everyone learned d truth dear
me so happy
poor maan dear...
precap is too sorrow dear
poor mitu dear
want mk bt geet nt giving
and geet turned cold also
what ll happen dear
hope maan first erase all her insecurties dear
that will be gud
give one more udpate of this plsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update...eventhough i feel sad for geet but she deserves the silent treatment from maan...how could she think of keeping mitu away from maan when they both have become each other's life...that was too bad of her.
Loved dadi in khurana mode...do continue soon.

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