Maaneet SS: Love, Story so far on pg 141/Aug 30 - Page 57

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Part-8


Present

Her chain of thoughts were badly interrupted with a rough loud voice and when she turned around she saw a furious Maan holding the car door waiting for her to come out and when she didn't started yelling and throwing daggers at her

GEET

GEET

It was then that she came out of her daze and quickly made her way out looking around her.

Maan who was already annoyed for her tagging along was fuming seeing her ignorance. It seems she is enjoying in her own blissful world leaving him guilty, though his heart says different.

Though angry on himself, he inhales a deep breath and turns around to call her, but his voice get struck in his throat seeing the beauty clad in baby pink simple designer suit with hair and dupatta flowing due to wind making her look like an angel whose innocence is oozing out in her face and eyes twinkling seeing the serene greenery around and those naturally pinkish lips forming a beautiful smile which he loves a lot, but the same smile which he has been depriving her off and thus came to the real world and masking his emotions called out to her again, a bit louder this time

GEET

Ji...ji

If you are satisfied enjoying the surroundings and have your permission, can we move ahead says Maan tauntingly, but the response he got made him more mad yet couldn't say anything too seeing her so excited

Nahi Maanji...mera matlab hai kya hum thodi der aur yahan reh sakte hai...its so beautiful out here, the waterfalls are just amazing...apko pata hai I have not seen any falls before, have always read it in books or seen some pics or scenes in movies or online videos, but seeing it in real and being so close to it is just awesome...its just WOW saying so she moves a bit closer to the water and unknowingly pulling her love, Maan, along her...it seems like he just does not want to say no to her today

Maan sat near to the waterfall for some time making his eyes content with the view of Geet moving and jumping around like a kid, sometimes being under the water playing and sometimes just exploring the place around filled with flowers along the shore or just observing the waves. He never felt as peaceful as he was feeling seeing Geet and her antics.

After staying there for some time, he called out to her and reminded her about the time and again found her lost...

Maan: Not again...yeh ladki ko ab kya hua...Chale Geet

Geet: Nahi...seeing his frown quickly clears her problems...mera matlab hai hum kaise andar jayenge, mein toh puri tarah se bheegayi aur yahan change karne ke liye koi jagah bhi nahi hai says with a pout

Maan: Are you really dumb or acting like one Geet

Geet (with irritation for being called dumb): Aap kehna kya chahte hai

Maan: Tumhe pata hai hum kahan jaa rahe hai

Geet (though confused answers): Of course Maan to the restaurant...par aap yeh sawaal kyun kar rahe hai, isn't it obvious when we are standing just in front of it or say walking towards it aur aas-paas koi aur building bhi nahi hai...apko itna pata nahi hai ki aap kahan chal rahe ho, pata nahi aap apni company kaise chalate ho...I can't believe u r worse than a dumbo says shaking her head dramatically

Maan: KYA...how dare you to call me a dumbo...just unbelievable saying he walks out from there as he cannot control himself one more minute before yelling at her, which he certainly does not want to do, not in front of so many people who are more than interested to know about him, the MSK, as seeing him with a girl so far away from the city is not something to be missed and here his wife is not even aware of it...wife, yeh tu kya bol raha hai Maan, sach mein yeh ladki mujhe pagal kardegi

Geet lagta hai tune kuch zyada hi keh diya...woh thode se acche se kya baat karne lage tu toh apni masti mein lag gayi...waise woh sach hi keh rahe thee you are really dumb and not him and quickly runs to where he was to not escalate his anger and before she could reach him he gestures her towards washroom solving her problem.

Then they had a very quiet, uneventful and a super fast lunch and continued with their journey, which was no less than before where one is enjoying the weather, silence and the drive and the other reminiscing the sad moments or unbelievable facts which the silence is fueling it.

The thoughts which Geet pushed back enjoying her surroundings in the noon with Maan around her and not to forget his weird behavior with her, though a cherishing one (ab Maan itna sweet banega toh weird hoga na Geet ke liye😆) came back like a strong wave and hit her thoughts

Past

Geet was really worried for Maan after listening to everyone and was praying for it to not to be true and was just a misunderstanding. She cannot see him in pain and breaking down. She knows how it feels when your love is not reciprocated, but Maan having to go through not only that but the betrayal of his beloved and even the fact that she never loved him and was playing with his feeling insensitively was making her scared too as she remembered his anger, aloofness and blank face while he left for his tour, though she isn't sure of what exactly made all bitter towards Sam and whether Maan knows about it all.

Even after everything, one part of her heart was not ready to agree about Sam's deeds...No, Sam cannot do like that. She really loves him and anyone can know it when they just look at them when they are together, the way they are comfortable with each other and both being so calm and understanding too...and Geet was blabbering on and on unknown to the fact that everyone can hear her thoughts.

All were amused by her talks and of course surprised that she knows about Maan-Sam's so-called love thing as they have hardly seen her around and some not even that and finally Raghav spoke bringing Geet out of her thoughts.

Raghav: Geet yahi sach hai...most of the college is a witness of it aur toh aur khud Maan bhi wahi tha

Geet being shocked knowing it is very less to say...as now it is a confirmation for all her thoughts of Maan knowing it all and in pain. Now she even doubts that if he had any tour for real or not and she thinking that he is all alone to face and deal with the happenings was almost to tears and left from the canteen excusing herself to not to cry out in front of them, which made her buddies confused and her brother a bit worried too.

A couple of more days passed with Geet being worried sick for Maan, especially not knowing his whereabouts and finding still real hard to digest the true colors of Sam. It is that night when she got a call that left her all the more tensed up not knowing how to deal with the situation anymore.


Precap

A new phase or say a new start of Maneet's life😃


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Edited by Cherishh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yepieee me frist hayeee
Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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@ Sweeto & Partner...have posted the update, will edit it with colors and all now...till then u keep reading...hope u guys don't get bored though😛

Gonna post another update 2morrow again😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
change the status frist then baag jaa charmer
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle


Yep damki to nautanki wali charmrer lolzz 😛😆


not fair Sparkly😔😆😆...tu rukh mere partner ko bhi dhamki jaldi milegi😡😉


Well guess what ur the only one for me who is giving big comment looking others comments I felt like there is nothing to comment


awww don't b sad sparkly...u r really a good writer and I am sure everyone enjoys reading...just give it a time..exams and stuff leaving less response maybe...so now u cheer up, I want my sparkly to sparkly always🤗


You all ways makes me feel special with ur long comment ur my savior re 😳

You know last time I am sad because of less response after watching ur comments started typing even 😉



so sweet of u dear...but my late commenting is set back I feel and I worry what u might be feeling for it...its just that something or the other crops up and I can't do it and end up reading thru mobile and am pretty bad at typing thru phones

But I am happy that u understand and like my comments in the first place whenever I do...as I feel at times I am pouring out too much into my comments that it makes nonsense at the end😛


I should learn how to give comment from u even charmer

😆..don't ever do that as u won't understand what u r doing and get confused am I commenting appropriately and the writer will understand at the end of it like me😛


What I feel is..whether it is small or big, it needs to convey ur feeling as to what u felt when u read thats all it matters😳


A secret though of my big comments😉...I comment simultaneously while reading so I think whatever I feel the moment I read it I write it off and thus it leads to big comments and this habit doesn't allow me to give comments shorter and more clearer😛


see here I said don't learn from me and telling u what to do😆😆..and ended up with big explanation again😛😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle

change the status frist then baag jaa charmer


😆😆...oh yes
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Posted: 11 years ago


Heyy charmer that much big explanation lolzz I can see u r thinking hard to type that lolzz

Wow typing comment while reading through good one well that was good habit only na lage raho

Don't feel bad for late comments I am not feeling sad for that chillax ok

Yep GF became inactive and I came to writing world when GF don't have readers well I am still here as I love writing

As long as readrs like you are here I will write charmer why u love this sparkle so much re

I am feeling blessed for that

Sparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 1

Ohh how shattered geet's life is she is dreaming about her new life but with one words he crushed that I hate maan re

You had clearly described about geet's feelings there I must appreciate it much

Ohh poor girl thinking it end up as dream but it's the bitter relity maan left her alone uff

Want to beat him black and blue



Sparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago
will give remaiming comments soon charmer
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Posted: 11 years ago
read th ewhole ss in one go ...wonderful update.

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