SAATHIYA # 2 PART - 28 & 29 updated on 23/10/2013 (Page no 117)

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SAATHIYA REACHED TO ITS NEW THREAD.




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STORY SO FAR


Geet is a stubborn girl who get married with Business tycoon Maan Singh Khurana,but at her parents will. She denied accepting him as her husband and misbehaved with him and Dadima. Maan calmly handle the situation and got to know about her love intrest.


Maan loved her but decided to set her free,so he searched her lover and drop her there. Aayaan,who claimed to be her lover denied accepting her as she stayed with another man for almost 1 and a half month.


Geet trying to kill herself and in process of saving her life Maan got to know about her pregnancy. He decided to gave his name to her child and accept the baby as his own. When dadima came across this truth she get angry on both for hiding the truth but later she forgive both. Now their life going smoothly but...
Edited by richadhami - 12 years ago
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PART - 16

Geet behaving so unusual from the normal days. Maan assumed it as her mood swings during the pregnancy period and leave her with her questionaire as he was too angry on her for not coming with him. Geet too herself was in dilemma what to do. She bite her on finger and winced in pain. Maan scanning her and get more confused. He leave her and moved to washroom. In a few mins he set up himself for the party. As he trying to leave Geet hold his wrist and stops him.

'Maan pls wait',she requests and rush in washroom. Maan is not getting what she is upto until she come onu in a black shimmer saree. Maan turned stunned seeing her ready. Though she gain some weight these days,still her natural beauty make Maan's heart thump rythemicaly. Everytime he control his desires which burned him deep inside. Maan trying to move his gaze but fails to do so. Geet chuckled seeing him adoring her and broke his trance.

'chale?',her sweet voice in his ears chimmed and he come out his fantasies.

Maan is happy as she is now coming with him. She hold his arm and both moved for the party. Both reached to the venue and he enter holding her hands.

It was a huge party hall filled with many known faces to him. One b one he met his old pals and introduced them to his wife with proud,as no one have epitome of beauty as he had. His many friends teased him too. Geet looking all around and her doubt taking shape now.


Many girls drooling over her husband which is definately dont like by her. She clenched his arm more firmly to show her dominance over him. Maan couldnt get the reason but he enjoy her attentions.


Rahul,one of his old friend came and request him to play a guitar as party is getting very bored to them. Geet's eyes open wide hearing this she cant believe on that a perfect robot having some connection with music.


'dont tell us ki isne apko kabi guitar baja k nai sunaya',one of his friend asked shockingly and Geet stare him amusingly.

'bhabhi humara to band tha collage days me or Maan is our lead player. Kyu Maan tune btaya kyu nai?',Rahul asked him in confusion.

'chal aaj muka b hai',Avi,his another friend req him too.

'apko ye sab kaam b aate hai? I was thought you only good in studies',Geet whisper in his ears in amusement.

Hearing her whisper all burst in laugh,'kyu Maan kitna jhoot bola hai tune bhabhi se?',Karan teased him and Geet get more confused.

'sara din padai or Maan? No way. Infact he is the most devilish student of our collage. He loved to tease all the prof. Ap kabi humare kisi prof.se milna wo apko btayenge ki Maan kitna studious tha.'Rahul revealed and all burst in laugh.

Geet's head is spinning,as she cant believe on their words. Are they talking about the same person she get married to. Self controlled, managed, disclipined etc are the qualities of Maan not the one they are talking about.


She was lost in analysing when he excused and went to stage with his friends. All of them take their positions and other students were cheering in joy sply girls,who cursing Geet deep inside as she won their MSK. Geet scnn the excitment among all and get ready for his surprize.

Both glance for once before he started. He winked at Geet and she flushed furiously. Soon whole hall filled with music and joy. All were enjoying like in days of collage and danced with their respective partners. Maan shocked her completely when she saw him in rejoice moment. Is he is the same person? Her mind only ask again and again. Soon Maan threw his guitar aside and pulled her up to him. He made her dance with him and his friends whistles for them.


All stop when they get tired. Every person in a hall hooted in joy. Geet panting heavil but having a wide smile on her petals. Resting her palm on his chest she trying to stable herself. 'Maan apne to bahut chhupaya hai mujhse. Apka ye side bhi hai mujhe nai pata tha. But i am glad that i have changed my decision or else i would never know about this.',she confessed happily. 'main to samjhti thi k...',she trying to added but Maan cuts her in between.


'k main bahut hi boring type hu.right?',Maan complete her words and she nodded yes first without thinking. Then change and shook no no.'Geet waqt or halat k sath sabko badlna padta hai. Yaha friends k sath main waisa hu jaise koi b normal ladka hota hai. Lekin office or ghar k balane ko manage karne k liye khud ko balance krna zaruri hai agr waha maine dheel di to sab bikhar jayega.',he added.

Geet listen his each and every word carefully. Now she getting more curious to know her mystry man who was full of hidden secreats. with every passing day she found something new about him which always shocked her. Slowly slowly her she developed a new intrest of knowing him fully. What kind of a person he is with so much shades in him.



Maan leave her for few mins to bring drink for her. In his rejoice time he is still aware of her condition.
Edited by richadhami - 12 years ago
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PART - 17

INSPITE of being involved his old friends,he is very concious regarding her health. He make sure that she ate on time and feel comfortable all the time. Geet feeling pleasure to spend time there. Party is going on rocking,when a slim and sleek human figure entred in backless gown. Fair colour smooth skin,brown hairs, long lashes, plum lips,all making her an centre of attraction,coming from the mob and straight went to Maan. She hold his face and kissed on his stubbled cheek. Maan was in shock and Geet's face open wide. His all friends also turned stunned with her behaviour but they settled soon comparative to Geet.

'Geet bhabhi ye Lavanya hai',Rahul saw her red face and trying to broke her thoughts.Geet staring her furiously.

'Hi Maan how are you? I must say you look the same like before',She said huskily. Her eyes were lustfuly glued to him only.

Maan found some uneasyness and parted her from him.'hi Love...',he said then glance at Geet who is alredy fuming.'anya. Lavanya how are you looking after a long time.'his voice is fluffring badly.


'i was thought you forgot me.',she said gazing his face only and avoid Geet's presence completely.


'hi Love we are also there?',Karan intrupt to broke their convo as he noticed Geet's weltered eyes.

'hi how are you all guys?',Lavanya ans but not broking her gaze on Maan.


'we l are fine tum btao itne saal kaha thi?',Avi asked more.


'London me. Papa ka business jo sambhalna hai,jaise Maan kar raha hai.',she said resting her hand on Maan's shoulder.


'nice to see u settled Lavanya.',Maan said casually.


'talk only about business. Life ko set karna to abi baki hai,'she said,while glancing Geet furiously.


Geet is feeling hell irritatied the way she is clinging to Maan and showing her dominance over him.


'lets go to dance floor Maan. Kitne saal ho gaye.Pls',Maan first denied but she pleads in a husky voice and made him compell on the name of old days. Maan too felt as there is nothing wrong,so he went with her. Geet's every nerve is fluffring. Though they have nothing between them but today she felt as she is snatching,which belongs to her only. They danced with other couples,but Geet's eyes glued to them only.


'bhabhi Lavanya humari old collage friend hai. Maan k wo thoda zada close thi to bas isiliye. Baki aisa kuch nai hai',Karan trying to calm her.


But the view doesnt seems so pleasent to Geet. Lavanya holding him firmly closer to her. In their dance moves her almost every body part rubbed against Maan's body. The way she touched him and showing her charge over him,made Geet disperced. She felt uncomfortable. Geet trying her level best to avoid this but it getting more suffocated. Lavanya leave no space between them and Maan also flowing with the passion.



When it get out of her tolrance,Geet went to dance floor and clenched his arm firmly.'lets go back to KM Maan,i am not feeling well there.',Geet said while glaring Lavanya.


'Geet if you are not feeling well then why you came there i that condition',Lavanya asked rudely to which Maan glared her.'i mean is halat me rest karna chahiye,'seeing Maan's fire emmitting eyes she quickly coverup herself.


'Geet if you need rest then its completely fine. Lets go back. Waise bhi kafi late ho gaya hai.',Maan said softly and Geet sighed.

Maan met his all friends before he left the party. Lavanya again took a chance and gave good bye kiss to her. Geet's anger towered and she felt to slap her right now but she controlled.


Maan ordered and his car came on exit gate. He made her sit and both moved to KM. In whole route Maan trying to talk with her about her experience of meeting his friends,but she was very much lost in her own thought and ignore his all questions. Lavanya kissed him and he called her Love first. These two things swimmed in her mind continously. Maan approched her several times but hardly she ans any of them. Both's proxcimity and dance moves they share made her weltered. She sat quite in their whole route.
Edited by richadhami - 12 years ago
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NOTE

THESE DAYS I AM FACING YOUR AVOIDENCE REGARDING MY ALL FICS. THATS WHY I DECIDED TO DROP 'REVANGEFUL LOVE'


EVERYTIME I TRY TO GAVE DOUBLE UPDATES OF SAATHIYA. BUT ON MY LAST UPDATES I RECIEVE VERY LESS RESPONCE FROM YOUR SIDE.


GUYS PLEASE TELL ME CLEARLY IF YOU PPL ARE NOT INTRESTED IN READING MY FF,THEN I WILL STOP STRESSING MYSELF TO.


TODAY I AM GONNA GAVE LAST UPDATE OF 'SAATHIYA'. I ONLY CONTINUE THIS ONE ONLY I GET LIKES OF MY CHOICE.


THIS TIME IF I DONT GET 150+ LIKES ON MY UPDATES THEN I WILL ASSURED,YOU WILL NOT GET FURTHER UPDATES AND I WILL DEFINATELY SHUT DOWN SAATHIYA TOO LIKE I DO WITH REVANGEFUL LOVE.



NOW DECISION IS YOURS.
Edited by richadhami - 12 years ago
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new thread
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congrats for new thread👏
waiting for the update
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congrats dr for d new thread😃

nd thank u 4 d double ud

geet goes to party with maan 😊

maan nt undrstanding her behaviour

maan,s friend r cool bt lavanya is such a pain

geet is j seeing
lavanya with maan

both back to home

nw waitng 4 d next
Edited by MISHAGOYAL - 12 years ago

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