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Posted: 12 years ago
hi mona sona babie laks nd priya.mona kya updtt dia hei,maan ne dream mein itna kush kia real mein kya krega..😉😆 geet bhi dream mein kush kar leti...yeh dumb kush nehi karti...😆 chalo chalo jaldi se type karo...me waiting...yeh mat kehna maine aaj ek updtt de dia...😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Haye so cute maaneet moments...
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
babie hw r u nd kiddo 2dy.hope vil meet u 2nyt.sona kaisee ho ,kabhi to milenge...😊priya bthdy kaisa reha...??laksu meri bsness wman kaisee ho ??yeh net kab theek hoga...??raat ko milte hei...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!! that was so beautiful..

do dil mil rahe hain..
magar chupke chupke..

waiting for the reaction of that beautiful kiss!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111




baarish ki wajah se thoda feverish ho rahi hai😭


ohh .. rest karo achhe se and jaldi thik ho jaao 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

mera mood bahut hi kharab hai... lappy ka charger teek karane ke liye deke aayi hoo... pata nahi kab milega... i really feel now that i shouldnt be such an addict that a single day is difficult to pass with out gf...

babie ...kaise hai... and hows kid?? take care

priya... hubbyji ka bday kaise gaya?

lily... how u??

mona ... missing u babe... chalo kal ka update padthi hoo ab...


lakshu tu na apne lappi pe nimbu mirchi latka de .. aajkal bhut nazar lagti hai isko 😛😛


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

babie hw r u nd kiddo 2dy.hope vil meet u 2nyt.sona kaisee ho ,kabhi to milenge...😊priya bthdy kaisa reha...??laksu meri bsness wman kaisee ho ??yeh net kab theek hoga...??raat ko milte hei...😊



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi mona sona babie laks nd priya.mona kya updtt dia hei,maan ne dream mein itna kush kia real mein kya krega..😉😆 geet bhi dream mein kush kar leti...yeh dumb kush nehi karti...😆 chalo chalo jaldi se type karo...me waiting...yeh mat kehna maine aaj ek updtt de dia...😡


haillaa tujhe kase pata mai kahne wali thi aaj nhi dungi 😛 abhi half hi type kiya hai 😆😆
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The Downpour... Part 47


Geet opened eyes abruptly making her mouth wide opened in shock and Maan startled in reflex. Both became statue for sometime with same expressions and no one could get words to utter on this unexpected situation. Slowly Geet expression started changing shock into surprise and then anger. She glared Maan with such intensity Maan lost mind came back running and he shouts out loud in surprise,

"Geet!! Are you real''

Geet was highly embarrassed with what happened and how should react, could not understand so she let remained mixed expression on her face.

Maan stood up instantly, he turned back, hid his face from her. He was hell embarrassed too with his act.

"What she would be thinking?''

Both were finding words to start, to say something. Maan squeezed eyes once to calm down and said,

"I'm sor..''


But then he stopped. No way, he was not sorry at all. Geet was her and he knew, he did nothing wrong to love his girl. But he knew he should have asked her once but that was not a sin. It was his love for her. He turned back, let his eyes meet her.

"How did you come here Geet'

Geet was so waiting for his apologize, suddenly been targeted with weird question and this, angered her more. "What he is asking!!! Dadima brought me here and he is showing as if doesn't know anything?'' she thought. "And he kissed me also and now instead of saying sorry, questioning me!!!''

She did not feel like to answer him back. Beforehand she was angry on him and now also he was taking her in grant, that she didn't like. Her face was expressing how much angry she was and now Maan got alarmed seriously.

"Wo Geet, I didn't know you was real.. I mean I thought you are not here and you were my dream' He said hesitatingly.


But his talk doesn't affect her but she was shocked.


"It means you dream me like this!!' She made complained face ''I hate you Maan!!!''


She runs from there and walked in her room, shut the door in anger and stood rested her back on door and then smiled shyly.


She was so blushing with the effect he had made her feel with his touch. She hid her face between palms and giggled. She came in front of mirror and looked at her face; it had turned in pinkish red. She remembered how it was difficult to hide her blush in front of him and so had to show her anger.


"But then what could I do. He always leaves me in this kind of awkward situation which I never have experienced before''


She came to door and opened it slightly, peeped out. Maan was yet at same place was looking toward her room only. She could see how upset he was, like was cursing himself for something and she knew, what it was. She felt bad for him. He waited there for sometime then left in his room with slow and broken steps.


"Babaji, ye maine kya kiya!!'' Geet felt like cursing herself, for her stupidity. "I haven't let him eat his dinner also, he will be hungry and what I did!!''


It passed almost half hour and they could not come back in their normal self. Both were restless to make each other upset and Geet was more worried that she could not complete Dadima request. Finally after thinking much, she came out of room and walked toward Maan room and slipped out a note from below of his door like she had done in office. She knocked on door once and runs back in her room.


Maan was laying on bed, thinking about Geet, when heard knock.

"Who's there?''

But no reply came back and then he saw a paper on floor. He narrowed eyes in question and then picked it up, read.

"Dadima had said me to give you dinner. I have kept everything on table, you should not starve in night'

Maan read her note and after long he found himself smiling. He knew she must be thinking for him. Even after her angriness, she did not have forgot worrying about him. He loved her concern. In return he also wrote a note and slipped in her room with same process.

"Geet, if Dadi had told you it means you should be there to serve me''

"Ye Maan bhi na!! He is not going to change ever!!'' She muttered under breath.

"I don't think I am needed there to serve you because I have already kept everything on table', She slipped paper in his room and came back.

"But I am not going to eat until you would be there'' Maan slipped in her room.

She took notepad and pen and walked up to his room and sat down on floor.

"Maan you can't force me things to do which I don't want, and ya, you don't need to go to my room because I'm here only, outside of your room because I don't want Dadima to see her grandson doing exercise in midnight'

Maan smiled reading her note and the feel of her being just a door across made him feel good. He understood that his Geet can never go away leaving him in any ups and down of life. He also sat on floor, rested back on door.

"Geet don't worry about Dadi because she takes sleeping pills and would not wake up till morning. And if you are saying that I force you to do the things then let me tell you that I never made you do things which you never would have dreamed of.

"Uhh.. I never dream like you Maan!!''

"And how would I know what you dream about me what not!!''

"I never dream like you, Chii chii Babaji.. you ' ... me in your dream'' She could not write the word 'Kiss'' so left place blank.


"Geet I can't understand your Fill in blank word, can you tell me what I did'' He smirked.


In their continues paper slipping game Geet didn't realised she was now sitting, resting back on door.


"That I can't tell, I am not shameless like you''


Maan smirked. Now he was again in teasing mood and wanted to see her then and there.


"Okay Geet if you can't tell me the word you didn't write, but now you would have to show me''


As before Geet could read the note Maan opened door at once and she fell back suddenly,

Geet!!''


But Maan caught her on correct time and she fall in his lap.

She looked up, his face was in front of her eyes and he was concerned.

"Geet are you alright!!!''

She nodded slowly. Finding him near she had forgot everything and slowly realized where she was!! She gasped; she was lying on floor, keeping head in his lap. Again she was landed in such unpredictable situation which never had imagined. Maan was admiring her beauty steadily. Neither Geet was hurrying up to change her position nor would Maan let her do it. And slowly she felt his face was coming nearer. She got scared, tried to get up and could not as his hands were holding her arms strongly.


"Maan let me go' She tried to speak out but words came out as mere murmur, which even had reached to his ears or not she was not sure. His face was still moving toward her. She was extremely nervous with his progress. She struggled but failed to be freed and in next moment she felt his face just above hers. If she would have moved her lashes even, it could have stroked his face. And then she heard his whisper,


"Geet, my dream had remained incomplete, I want to complete them now'


She looked him shocked. She was not ready for this moment, was extremely scared with his speedy proximity and finding no other choice, she closed eyes tight. She was anticipating for his next move when found herself in air. Immediately she opened eyes and found he was taking her downstairs carrying in arms. She stared him in surprise.


Maan made her sit on chair and sat beside. He prepared two plates for them and kept before her and gestured to eat. She was still staring him lovingly when he turned to her and touched her face with one hand.


"I know you also wouldn't have had yet anything'


He brought spoon near her mouth and gestured to eat. She smiled and had first bite from his hand. After they finished dinner in silence.


"Good night Geet' He said and walked to stairs.


"Good night Maan'



Geet replied back and started doing last bit of work when Maan came from back in hurry and gave strong kiss on her cheek and runs up with same speed, leaving Geet again shocked.



Precap : Maan was coming back from exercise when found Geet was not in her room!! "Where is she?'' He worried.


Part 2 UPDATED

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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago

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