MG SS- STILL WAITING #2 PT26 PG131 new thread link in INDEX - Page 33

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Posted: 11 years ago
Diii,,

kaha ho?? aab toh update de do na...

i'm still waititng for STILL WAITING 😊😊




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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally geet is up...
Poor kids ... They have to suffer for elders mistakes...

Waiting for next part...to know why geet separated from kids...
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Posted: 11 years ago
aur intezar nahi hita diii... jaldi se update de do na :'(

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Posted: 11 years ago
okkk posting in parts wait for full
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 19 waiting
Present
🥱she was calm then only she heard her jaan's sobbing voice n peeped to look at them from maan neck n smile at them n then suddenly her smile fade n as reality stuck her n she with jerk came out with maan's hug n with teary eyes.
Geet looked at maan with longing n teary eyes her every nerve is saying her to cocoon herself in his arms, his warmth bt she cant, she hasn't forgotten her promise, soo she hide her face in her knees n silently crying...n in friction of sec she lost her consciousness n fell on maan, who hold her on tym otherwise she must have fallen from bed. Maan made her lie on bed n covered her n then looked at kids who are still sobbing. Maan called them in his arms n they came sobbing crying to him n hide themselves in him. Maan slowly cried them in his arm outside the room n signaled aniee n Arjun to look after geet
Babies were hungry soo he took them in canteen n bring them milk n some Fruits, but babies were not hearing his any word n adamant about there mumma. "mumma will wake up my bacha bt will she like that her mithi n ammy hadn't drink their milk n fruits say," maan said while making them seat in his lap n trying to feed them, kids looked at him then each other n silently took their choco milk n drank, maan took glass from both hand n started feeding them fruits n they had it silently while sitting in his lap only, after having some peices mithi asked "mumma also be na hungry, dadda u didnt feed mumma, thats y she is weak haan" maan looked at her princess who is so small to think this but thought he can say she is pure replica of geet in beauty, innocence, cutness, n nature tooo... Where as ammy is total replica of him, his attitude, style, body features but his nature is like his mumma n dadda to, tough n soft tooo, when he is sturboon then nobody can cansole him...
But maan never know that geet is also sturboon, but the pain of her life made her weak in front of all, the lack of love n care made her silent gal, the incidents which she gonne through her small age made her silent scared girl, who forgot her wish of life, her dreams, her likes n dislikes, started living on others conditions without asking question, becoz whenever she asked question on the place of ans she got humiliation, hatered, slaps, n all only, now she didnt ask question from her baba ji too, she is living for her kids only their happiness only, but somewhere in her heart there is still waiting for her love, her life, her husband, the only man she worship from the day of marriage, waiting for his one look, his one sweet word made her day, his one smile which she got in her life, she is still cheersing that moments when he touched her, took care of her...,...
Past
It was mid of her 6 month of pregnacy, her health is gud but not too, thanks to dadi dadu, their love n care, made her gain some weight now, but she is alfooing herself everyday form others, maan's silence for her killing her everyday but now she didnt complain to her baba ji too, now she understand its only her life, to be alone. She only answer to the questions asked to her, otherwise will be silent always keeping the two teddies in her hand always like her life. Whenever she will be alone or sad, she used to write her dairy, talk to her mumma n nani pic, tell them about babies moments in her tummy, their kicks which she feel n wanted to share with maan, but he dont have tym for her.
It was spl. Day in Khurana mansion as aniee gave birth to a lil bundel of joy, n all were busy in welcoming the lil. Aniee in the mansion, geet as usual standing hiding herself in pillar n looking at the decorations n everybody who were restlessly waiting for aniee n baby, geet too want to see baby as she hasn't seen her, there was some tym she went in her room, n looked at her wardobe n took out her jwellery box, she searched full box n got a beautiful payal in it, it was her payal when she was 1 year old her mumma gifted her almost 12 sets of payal she took out one of best payal, which has some daimonds in it n beautiful design, she smiled n thought to gift it as she cant buy new things na, she was scared if she will ask for money then again maan will say n insult her, which she didnt like n making him angry, soo she packed it in a beautiful wrapper, which maan was using in night for packing gifts for baby. She wrote beautifully to small cute beautiful baby from her geet mami.
She heard horn voice n came out her room only to peep at baby but all were surrounding her n dng her arti n all she thought she cant see like that soo smiled weekly n went in aniee old room which is on their floor n kept the gift on bed n went in her room, hurridely as she heard all are coming there, she hide herself in curtains in corridor n try to peep at baby face bt she cant, baby was in maan's arm n he was smiling n saying something to baby, she smiled seeing maan smiling n went in her room as she cant stand for long her legs n back started paining. She sat on her bed but her eyes were struck at door, with lil. Hope annie n arjun will come with baby to her bt they didnt she was disappointed bt consoled saying might be they are tired. She went n sat in balcony n looked at stars for hours, when she saw maan coming in room with wide smile n he took his lappy n started working with big smile on his face, she was drooling her husband, she has never seen him soo much happy than today
Her drooling session broke by a knock on the door, servant came with her food n gave her in balcony only (now too she didnt go downstairs after that day, she said to dadi dng up n down make her tired, so dadi didnt forced her as she know how weak she is plus carrying twins) she had her dinner silently looking at maan n his smile. She wanted to eat ice-cream today but cant tell anyone remb. Back memories she kept quite n came in room, took her medicines without making any sound, now days she stopped wearing payal n lots of bangles too, becoz maan get irritate with it. She lye on bed n covered her n tried to sleep while consoling her moods n heart. She was restless in bed, tossing left to ri8 in her side unable to sleep, she woke n sat on bed while putting her hand on her back, she tried to massage her back but the body pain is not allowing her to do soo, she was twisting her every part in pain, her foot was swalloen, her big bump was not allowing her to touch her legs n massage it. She looked at maan who was engross in his work. She woke up from bed n went to washroom grabbing her another dress, maan looked at her than at watch n knotted his eye brows to her becoz it was 12 in night. She lowered her head n said meekly "m not feeling gud, so gng to take warm water bath as my body is paining" maan glared her, n she understand he didnt want that she should take bath now.
She kept her dress again in wardrobe n came to bed n again kept her hand on back n tried to massage it. She wokeup n went in balcony to get fresh air, she looked at sky, lyk searching something in it. After 20 mins her legs give up, it started paining soo much, she came back in room n lyed on bed n tried to catch some sleep, now days its her routine to wake till late night as her body pain is unbreable nowdays for her. She took balm n sat on bed n looking at balm then at maan.
precap- maan helping geet n will geet able to see baby gal
sorry for late update bt held up with assignments n collage will update in free tym only. Thanks for soo many likes n comment
Edited by geetsmile - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
3rd too..but res 4 comments..
geet crying in maans hug
but she backed out
remembering her promise
she fainted..poor girl
maan taking care of kids..
his princess thinks so much in this tender age

past is very painful
geet couldnt c the baby
n night she is having pain..
Edited by valli22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
babies bring there mumma again
but geet cant forgive maan
maan ne jo kuch bhi whatevrr reason there is but he can told geet but he remain quite
maan knw geet never forgive him .
chalo kamse kam he taking care of babies very well😕😕.
6 month of pregnancy no one is care for geet xpect dadi nd dadu😭😭😭.
ani is busy with her baby now 😕😕😕.
but geet never forget anything.she gifted a nice payel to baby 😛😛.
maan is happy today for her sis what about geet
Edited by sumaiyariya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi im new in GF actually i was a silent reader
i Liked ur ss so much so could not control me to comment on this
Too good loved it but heart wrenching also...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow loved it maan taking care of kids but ek bat ki confusoin hai jab maan ne geet se sadhi bacho ke liye ki thi to phir bachae geet ke pas keshe ayea waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
humko bada wala comment do pura padh ke aap

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