Mg-Barbie series-A THRASHED BARRBIE#2|||| Note page 136||||| 30 may - Page 82

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

Chapter 1-8

Hii

I am sorry for pestering you. I know you will be irritating and giving me lot of profanities but I will bear with that after a lot of thinking I hve made up my mind that I will read your all stories which are on if and wil comment on it... sorry for disturbing... but can't help yaar your stories are like freshness and I can't stop myself...

Now your concept I really liked the girl in teens who didn't get her parents love it's really painful to see your parents fight and I can't imagine myself separated from my parents so how could I exceprghat geet will not feel painful... parents presence is always needed but geet's parents never consider her their child and doesn't have emotion and decided to have divorce and both are rude and selfish...

Geet went to randeeps house where too geets father scolded instead of saying caring words after punarvivah of Rashmi I cried on this ff as I m very emotional specially when ammy told abhi's illness I literalky cried I find it very cute the way he told will you Molly me... I am stuck crying I hoped you would have added his part but alas it's a story there is a point where some little character come only to steal a part and leave... really glad geet got some courage from him...

I liked the way you introduce maan's point of view and his character is different this is the thig I attracted from yours very ff has different MSK not typical same yeah in anger you have kept same and his impulsive nature too but I can have it as some point everyone is impulsive...

I liked the way geet defies maan's logic of greedy and selfish it was cute seeing geet explaining histology and maan teasing is really cute and he is somewhat mature too...

About Sameera's character literally she is obbssesd and scared for geet as she is innocent and really feel bad for rasal and maan maan lost his love but jab maan geet ka hai toh koi aur kab tak rahega... then comes college life geet was surrounding by the loafers but Vicky came and told geet to punch this is good as Vicky will mak geet strong and they will have sweet bnd I liked to know anie also have a sweet bond with her too...

About leap plzz show more of clg Ltd too really want to know but consider your plot first otherwise I am happy with it...

With regards

Originally posted by: -Mitu-

If u talking about recent dls comment than this is for some one else 😆

I didn't do pms from last 6 months but still people blame me ... waise this story has 3 books ... one book is here ... only one part left ... other 2 will be in blog