The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 95

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jannat89

sorry dear I can't like the update as it shows some error

now come to the update
it was awesome loved it
thanx 4 the PM
update soon😳

No problem dear.
Thanks for the comment. I am glad you are liking the story.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


Detailed, fine. Lekin detailed about specific things, not fine. So I'll keep doing specific public good. 😆

Tsk tsk tsk...
aise half hearted public good ka kya fayda...
jo bhi karo dil se karo...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Top right corner...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited my comment on Pg 143
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update...
thnks for the Pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


Bestest hoon na toh ab sahi saabit karungi zarur! 😳
I wonder if Avi thinks the same ke main unn words ke baad comment karungi ya nahin. 😃

Mujhe pataa tha 😳 🤗
Avi ka me kya bolu abhi 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


Detailed, fine. Lekin detailed about specific things, not fine. So I'll keep doon specific public good. 😆

Specifically specific detailing ki jayegi shayad 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Though I like the song Singh is king but when I read this update the only song that played in mind was

Kyun koi paas hain
door hain kyun koi...jaane na koi yahan pe
Aa raha paas ya door main jaa raha
jaanu na main hoon kahan pe
Yeh Dooriyaan...

Had to add a happy part in there too to show Dev's success. He has everything but still he can't stay without her. Plus ever since I wrote this character I wanted this song for him... I like yeh dooriyan too..

NT happy and satisfied with her busy professional life but still something is missing...which actually reminds of her exactly 28 days and 12 hours back this emptiness was what she had opted for herself!

She accepts to herself all the small moments and his gestures which touched her heart. She missed Dev Khurana!
NT having her fill gazing at him, her cravings of so many days finally met light😊

'like a desperate fan looks at a star'

This line actually reminded me of my one encounter in the lift gaping at my favorite star😳

Details please...


Dev Singh Khurana the charmer who makes girls hearts go aflutter but has lost his heart to his I-Star😊
Trying hard and succeeded 99.9% in getting over the rejection and her thoughts but still not trusting his traitor heart and not taking even0.01% chance he chose to run away from her😕

But destiny has its own means to bring about the obvious😳

Dev's twin celebration one for the successful deal and his birthday
NT looking over from the conference room and Dev all aware of her silent gaze😛

Dev finally comes up to NT to thank her as she has rightfully been the driving force behind his success
as it is said 'behind every successful man there is a woman!'
He was looking for a reason to go to her, he was drunk and not in full hosh. I think the only time he could let go is if he is not in his full mind like when asleep or when drunk.
The last moment was so special
even Dev's birthday became memorable for him when for a few seconds his Tara dropped down her grounds and he could see some emotions in her otherwise cold eyes😳
She could not bear the word of his death.. her instinctive response.
Tara's fiance😲 Dev coming face to face with her past and so are we along with in for the missing pieces of her past
Yup here comes some of her past.. Let's see what Dev makes of it.
Thanks for such a lovely update
It perfectly brought out both their POV's and their struggle to move on
the push and pull of their feelings
their heart humming its own love tune and their minds failing to put up with this internal fight😳

Sorry for being late
Love u
🤗

No sorries Heytal.
I am glad you liked it.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Meri dare hai tujhe...
ho sake tho chup rehna...
let's see...😆😆

Ye kay hai... kaun kise chup hone ko bol raha hai 😆😆 Dono ke liye impossible hai atleast on IF 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Haan!
agla update tab hoga jab tu khud mangegi...😲

Mayyo abhi ke abhi maang le mujh se intezaar nahi ho raha. Please 😳

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