The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 88

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Yes I know I'm second... But I willingly gave my place to someone special. How generous of me 😳😉

TRUE..😆
Running: Indeed a run from a lot many things, be it due to own defenses crumbling, own desires bringing out all the passion suppressed, or the need so huge and painful that its borne and running becomes the only option in a way to preserve own self and your love from the bindings of past shackles. 👏 Very well put together by you.

The update started with a bang from both D-N perspectives. There were some kind of stats mentioned there that you used intelligently to show how both are trying hard to fight a lost battle of awareness, attraction and love. 👏👏

She projects and wants self to believe that she indeed has no complains in life for now. But how ironic she herself proves it to be by stating that 28days 12hours time period between her longing and carving for him. Whereas Dev is fighting his own ego and wound of rejection so hard yet succumbs to ti all when he states in positive the 99.99% with it being the most negative as there is the minuscule but very potent and strong 0.01% still there that is certainly driving him nuts and will cause all his defenses to crumble.
That is all it takes. A chink in the armor he has built. I always get a good laugh when some couples who are friends talk like this, That its fine if the other person is gone... blah blah. When it happens they are so messed up..😆
The lift again forms a connecting link between these two distressed souls. 😳 That craving, emptiness, need for hsi exclusive and passionate care and love and cherished moments of his proposal to her was so well depicted by showing how without him she feels so enclosed and suffocated in that lift. Last time the lift was the one that brought them face-face with their own prejudices and ego but this time the lift brought them face-face with another aspect of themselves that being longing and craving and high alert senses about the awareness of the other's presence. Last time she felt his presence to be that of a pervert but this time she craved for his presence, last time she slapped him because she felt he was staring at her but this time she was staring and having her own fill of all his features. 😳👏👏
He had accidentally touched her in the lift, now she was yearning for the attention. It is true that basking in being loved by someone is the topmost feeling in life where as there is nothing worse than that attention being taken away.
And then that accidental touch and almost embrace 😳 😳😳 it was the catalyst for their own defenses to crumble later in that conference room scene. 👏
She wanted to use that to stay away. The fact that he could walk away from her, hurt her ego as a woman.
I liked how you showed Naina's own change of perspectives and viewing of situations. A girl who before was safeguarding her self from feeling attached to anyone not even her roomie now wants to feel Dev's presence or even a glimpse towards her. She who didn't care of others opinion but just stuck to her own work and discipline was relating his absence in lief to how everyone else who were supposed to be working in her team also left her to do it all alone. he has become more than what she asked for in her life that now all her views are so tuned to what would be when he was the axis. she now even wants those small joys in life and beauty around her that is visible to her when she craves actually for him. Her appreciation for life and wanting those joys shows that somewhere Dev has surely managed to make a crack in her shell unknowingly but has left an impact for sure. 👏👏
Somewhere deep she trusts him despite his carefree ways but she is afraid to trust.
Dev too has come a long way from his initial care free days. A total contrast to his earlier image. He who was a credit chor and dependent on K tag is now acknowledging and admitting Naina's influence on him to be a good and string responsible leader and also that her disciplinarian nature has helped him grow a lot professionally. I loved this subtle change you showed very meaningfully. 👏👏 He who didn't bother about someone else was now craving for a wish from her like a kid craving for his sweet.
Was that all he was craving? Would the wish being given by her have been enough? Dev and NT are going to be explosive when it happens for them; he has waited for her for so long...
Loved that symbolism of her being trapped in between wall and him...and then realizing the feel of both heaven and hell with his presence and absence... with the connecting line... "sometimes there is only one person on earth for whom you live, the one person who can make life or shatter it" 😳👏

All her fight crumbles when he tells her to wish for his death and she takes that one step towards him that breaks his bounds on his own passion.
No one who loves can hear those words right? Esp. not on his birthday. She opened a chink in her armor too by giving him that reaction.
But yet she feels she needs to run away from him as she fears her past will harm him and maybe she will be indeed the cause of his harm if she remains with him. Still unknowingly she does make him a part of her sorrows and fears by running away as he still follows her not letting her escape as knight to his princess. 😉

Oh ho a new entry Suraj...?? lets see what he brings in their lives now. 😃

Waiting for the next 😊



Thanks Onir for being here...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Awesome Part 😃
Loved it thoroughly 😉
Pics bht achey laging dono 😆😆

Glad you liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

OMG...I am speechless...

the ending just floored me so much that i forgot all what i read before...
well i thought starting was brilliant and ending was like ...speechless
ok, so Tara misses him like hell...and yearns for him but doesn't want him...dev is fooling himself with statistics and that was evident form what happened in the conference room...it was very poignant specially the moment when he badmouths for himself and she puts her finger stopping him...
ending was dhamakedaad...so her fiance found her and caged her frightining with the lighter which must have burnt her couple of times...Dev was punched and he is abberated...
i want Maaneet but i also want dev tara...u have made me mad by stopping here...i am biting my nails...will Dev understand her fear...will he be able to save her in his drunk state...will he misunderstand...God no...it is like a mystery movie
please please next update kaldi se...and this time Dev Tara na...pls...

Oye Ritzy! Maaneet wale mujhe chod denge...😆😆
Glad you are liking the dhamaka here...
One more twist coming for Maaneet... Chota sa hai... let's see if you will like that too..😃
Thanks for the support...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Glad you liked it...
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Loved it 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Twist for Maaneet 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Last time toh bola tha...
new girl will come in Geet's place in the staff library...😊
HP mein young school teacher aa raha hai..😊
Bhool gayi...Shocked
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Last time toh bola tha...
new girl will come in Geet's place in the staff library...😊
HP mein young school teacher aa raha hai..😊
Bhool gayi...😲



Awww 😭
Mera Maan 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chalo Going For Sehri 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
nt is eangaged...yeh kaunsa twist hai...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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