The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -jaanleva-

I-Star became Ms Kapoor for Dev but even then he can't get her out of his mind...


Naintara playing with the children was so touching and then the memories of her past, she believes she's not worthy of any happiness any more but I'm certain that if Dev was aware, he'd move heaven and earth to bring a smile to her face.

I hope Naintara doesn't misinterpret his momentary lapse of confusion, anyone can see what a gentleman he is and how he goes out of his way to maintain a distance and respect her.

Waiting for the next chapter, thanks for updating Avi 🤗

NT has trust issues and her being mad at him is justified. She finds a man kissing her and touching her in bed, she is going to kick first and ask later...😆 Her character is the one that is going to grow over the updates so hope I can do that well.
Thanks Fozia...🤗 It is so good to have you back...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

It was accidental. He was dreaming as usual about her..😆😆
I am having fun writing his slaps...😆
Thanks Purvi...🤗
Next part is Maaneet..😃


phew !! glad that it was a dream 😊 i dnt want him to get slapped...😳

this tym i read n commented very fast na, ab mujhse katti nahi hogi na?

maaneet wala part keliyeee waitingsss😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
this one and the next song are my fav...

loved the updt..
so finally pata chala dev babu kaise se sapne dekhte hai.. the slap broke his dreams..

i loved how u described their first meeting.

nice update Avi..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update ;) dev n his dreams 😉 😉 tara is as usual tryin to be strict n formal
bt i guess she too cnt hide it :)
Dev - tara n maaneet bth hv soo much difference in the way their life is progressin
Bt the intensity of love fr bth is soo deep <3
U write it sooo well...its like readin a novel where u jst dnt picturise the place n time bt emotions tooo ...

Dev tara story is somethg u cn relate too in real life :)
Maaneet r jst too dreamy <333
Bt i gt to say u made love dev tooo :) poles apart frm maan bt deep down they r jst d same <3
I loved dev n geet relation tooo :)
Thank you so much for the pm :)

Waiting for maaneet :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape


phew !! glad that it was a dream 😊 i dnt want him to get slapped...😳

this tym i read n commented very fast na, ab mujhse katti nahi hogi na?

maaneet wala part keliyeee waitingsss😃😃

His dream did lead to the kiss in real life and slap too. Sorry if I confused you...
Nahi Purvi... Itni good girl Purvi se kaise katti karoo? 😆
Me too want to write it... it is in my head but I have guests and more guests...Soon...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

this one and the next song are my fav...


loved the updt..
so finally pata chala dev babu kaise se sapne dekhte hai.. the slap broke his dreams..

i loved how u described their first meeting.

nice update Avi..

Thanks Mannu.. from an OS to an FF officially with the next part...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: optimism

Superb update ;) dev n his dreams 😉 😉 tara is as usual tryin to be strict n formal
bt i guess she too cnt hide it :)
Dev - tara n maaneet bth hv soo much difference in the way their life is progressin
Bt the intensity of love fr bth is soo deep <3
U write it sooo well...its like readin a novel where u jst dnt picturise the place n time bt emotions tooo ...

Dev tara story is somethg u cn relate too in real life :)
Maaneet r jst too dreamy <333
Bt i gt to say u made love dev tooo :) poles apart frm maan bt deep down they r jst d same <3
I loved dev n geet relation tooo :)
Thank you so much for the pm :)

Waiting for maaneet :)

Thanks dear. I love when you comment, I can see Mr. Bodyguard...😳😳
Yes they are very different from each other and it is fun to write them differently.
Thanks for the compliments. I am trying an FF for the first time so very nervous.
Glad you are liking it.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
avi cant resist ,strtd rding...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

avi cant resist ,strtd rding...😳

Oh I am so happy to hear it. Hope I don't disappoint too much...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
i like this dev-naintara duo... she is a spitfire... and he is a charmer... that ups the intensity quotient... i am looking forward to some dhamakedar moments and see how their love story develops..going to be on my watchlist😉

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