new MG ff Life of geet part 35,36 ,37, 38on page 106,109,114 - Page 4

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IshitaIrani thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
sorry for late reply
geet ko goons ne tease kiya
maan u did a brilliant jon
bas*******dev slap her
i will kim him
nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
part 3
loved the update
geet ko kitna mara uss kamine dev ne😡hope ki i can also beat him double😉
geet ko abhi bhi yash ki fikar hai when she is in pain so sweet of u geet😛😭
maan was behaving like a kid asking for a toy😆he loves his family alot
cont soon
why is dev waiting for geet😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome lovely poem dear geet maan lost in their mahi-mahi
maan glad to see her again
maan impressed with her😉
pinky know the torture geet face but cant help her😭
maan itna curious to know about geet😆😉
maan kya baat haI U R ASKING HER TO FIGHT
good
update soon😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Part 5 Bathe kuch unkahi si

Every word of maan and dev biting take toll on geet she again fill some weakness a darkness come front of her eyes she want to hold chair but she cant but maan catch her in time in his strong arm in that condition also both fill some type of peace.first maan come out of his thought and say

Are you alright geet


Geet nodded then it struck him that from yesterday she not eat her food with anger and frustration she closed his eyes he give some water to geet and took her to the hospital canteen which is on ground flower without any word geet also followed him She herself surprise with her behavior because she could not mixed with any person specially male but she ignore and thought that he is Yash sir son so I developed trust on him and followed him again


Both of come in canteen and order for them maan sak for her choice but geet cut him and say anything he like , maan fill sadness in her answer ,like that she not interested in anything in life he is very disturbed with this thought why geet eyes full of sadness and painful aloofness He wanted to see a small smile on her face he promise I bring smile on this beautiful face of your geet but next moment he shock with his own thought how he say like this about a married women .he bend his head and gain some control on his thoughts there next table they watch a couple with small kid and this brought smile on geet face oh maan very happy with her and for conversation with geet he ask her oh baby so geet do you have any baby ,girl or boy With this qus geet lost colure of her face and her eyes fill with tears she put her hand on her mouth with duppata and run from there


Maan is very shock with geet reaction and he ask himself that what wrong with geet what I wrong with this question but he not awer that without any intention he hurt geet badly very badly and this put geet in her shell again He quit disturbed with geet reaction but at list he is happy that at list she eat in canteen and paying bill he went to yash room again

In all this geet couldn't see that two furies eyes watching her with anger and he is non other then Dev who come hear for friend Dev greeted his teeth and closed his hand and murmured geet today you called troubled for you and went to house he have his own bike so he reach there before geet and waiting for her.


Hear in front of yash room adi try to consoled pinky who cry for geet he said that pinky don't cry we have to give courage to geet and we find some way for geet that she came out of this mess and maan lesion there talk and very quires about geet problem again he painful face come front of him.

Geet crying very badly in her travel maan question tore her heart that she couldn't become mother in her life she really like babies but it is dream for a dream which could not make true in her life she lost her all hope in her life Mout nahi ati easily jee rahi thi wo. Maan brought some good change in her thinking but his question of maan put her back in her same old condition

precap geet not coming in office as well as in hospital

Maan become a angry MSK

Dev punishment for geet

Edited by Mahimaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
link was not opening re

the one u sended in pm

check it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
hey buddy
part 4
they met but maan with unberable shock
geet eyes bothering him much maan do some thing plz
adi pinky knows everything then y cont they help her
well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
part 5
maan trying to not get over but sure he is flat for her
and more over geet is maried is the thing bothering much
geet was acepting him and folowing his orders
i like story flow much
this time i want geet fight back with dev dont make him hiting her again plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
part 4-5
pinkey loved geet...
loved the update
ab ye dev kya karne wala hai!!!!
n y maan is in MSK mood!!
me waiting for next
like is not working...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
beautiful part dear
maan hurted hr unintentionaly
wht is dev upto now😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Part 6 New zakham injury on mind and soul

Tuta tuta ek parinda aise phuta ke phir judna paaya

Luta luta kisne usko aise luta ke phir udna paaya

Girta hua woh aasma se aake gira zaameen par

Khwabon mein aur baaton mein

After two day maan visit office for some important mitting and have some hope that he can meet geet also because reaction of geet give tension to maan and he want to souls this geet misery why her eyes have that painful and helpless sadness in her eyes that eyes which took away his peace from him he himself fill guilty that his simple question hurt her so badly His mind say that why you have interest in her but his heart could not able to stop him from her thoughts, maan thought that ye ladki muje sach main pagal ker degi in thought of geet he finally reach to office

He enter in office with his full of attitude of Msk with his bodyguard when he pass adi cabin he heard name of geet from pinkys mouth again pinky is crying maan stop his track and lesion conversation bet pinky and adi

Adi ' pinky try to understand without geet help we can not took any action or decision against her husband

Pinky- I understand sir but you could not my fear I know geet is in some big trouble because from last two days she not coming in office as well as in hospital and it is impossible that geet can not come to watch yash sir or not inquiry about him on phone in last two day she not even call me once or taking any call from me. so today morning I call her neighbors who is friend of my father they tell me that from last two days they could not see geet

After hearing this maan couldn't control to stop himself to visit geet house already he have so many bad thoughts in his mind about geet now this discussion could not stop him from visit to her place he know her address because on there first meting he drop geet to her house he imminently rich to his car and start car within half hour he rich geet house His heart again and again tell his something is very bad happened with geet With fearful thought he press doorbell but he don't get any response so he try to push door but it locked Maan know it is wrong way to enter other house but he could not himself he went to back side of house to see there have any other entrance to house and he saw a slightly open window he enter in house with help of that window

He heard a crying voice from one room so with scary heart and mind he rich near that room and give knock on room door but he don't get any response he push door of room but that room is full of dark he search for switch of lights and push it was room with minimum furniture it have wooden bed without any sleeping mattress and a cupboard (almari ) with attach bathroom and crying voice coming from that almari side

he lightly call geet "geet are you there" and he got scary response

Please don't come hear please don't come hear he know it is geet voice he say don't fear geet i am maan I want to help you I am yash sir son geet

But again geet say with cry please don't come hear please now maan loose his pationas and ask what is problem geet I want to help you geet, and I am coming to near you

But geet shout with fearful voice don't come near maan sir I don't have any cloths on my body please maan sir and she cry out loudly maan freeze on his place he lost his power of thinking can he heard right what is geet saying after few second he got control on his mind he closed his eyes and fist of hand with anger, frustration and helplessness He know it is not right time for any anger reaction or question first he want to help geet so he ask her where is your cloths

Maan question give some courage to geet and she tell him where is her cloths ,maan imminently went to that room and brought geet cloths with him and put it on bed and went out from that room after some time geet come out from that room and maan got shock of his life with state of geet she have new injury on her face which turn in black ,her red eyes mark on her hand of rope like someone tied her hand and last a total blankness on her face that face and eyes don't have any emotions a total blank face he softly say geet are you ok

And geet replied yes ,maan sir I want to make complaint against Dev that coldness of geet face some wear brake maan in inside his heart

Precap

Maans pov

Geet s pov

Edited by Mahimaan - 12 years ago

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