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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Me crying with geet she now has to leave her home 😭
So geet finally broke down infront for her bro 😭
It's so true sometimes we cannot share things with are parents fearing they will not understand or get hurt
I think this is where the siblings play their part 😆
Now waiting for maaneet marriage 😳
Maan is busy in making preparations and here geet is cribbing about him or should I say saying such kind ( opposite Lelo ) words about him😆
Waiting waiting and waiting 😃
Love aanya😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
U r updating yippee me dancing
Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 7
Awesome part
Geet crying and hr brother consoling her
Savitri is angry on maan
She is hating geet
All queens are shocked
Mehndi rasam is going to start
Waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update! Geet n her bro share a close bond. HE comforts her! Savitri is angry with Maan n hates Geet! Mehendi rasam is gng to start ! Well written, update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 6/7

awesome emotinal update...loved Geet n her bhahisa scene..
the way she broke down in his embrace very emotinal..lovely bonding
oh no savitri already geetanjali...

lalita n geet s bond s lovely..aww she is going with geet ..
geet tking her krishana ji n pets with her




Edited by Ru_21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



thank God id button green ho gaya...

waiting for update...


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Posted: 12 years ago


abhi main sone chali...ab kal subah read karungi...

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Posted: 12 years ago

READ TO UNDERSTAND STORY WITH DEPTH

NOTE AND INFORMATION


1. I AM NOT USING ANY particular surname IN THIS FF SO DON'T USE RAJPUT FOR GEET AS I WANT TO FREE MY MIND SO I IMAGINE A PLACE Rajbhumi and will call her 'viragana".

2. almost all king behavior is same their rituals their education and style but scene is always different as like padmni and jodha both are brave but they both are different their story is different.

3. here both are hindu so this ff is no near to jodha akber.

4. this is not a revenge story also.

5. there will most of the scene will belong to inside palace of maanveer as i didn't like war scene so much.

5. i know by mistake in banner i gave name as rajput but ignore it.

6. i know maan 20 wifes left u in big shock but if i am writing this period drama than this is a important part.

7. read with your own wish and comment also only if you like it but silent readers plz dont ask question from me and pm me or demand for updat as this is only my loyal reader right.








chapter 8


This is a purely imaginary Fiction, nothing is related to history even some place is also not exist on earth. someone have problem pm me than.



Important note

Many readers is not bothering to comment well fine, I will see this some day after it will shift FF in my blog and give link only regular and loyal readers thanks and no need to comment just for sake and crush me, comment if your heart want to only and yes one word commenter no need for this as its hurt me more. and i will not say this every time as seriously i got enough comment and like, will only write from now on for myself and my regular reader no matter if they are 1 or 300 thanks to bear this note





story has been moved to blog


Precap: one more ritual of Rajbhumi despite of other ritual, which will tell groom and bride thought for each other in fun only.

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Thanks to everyone for their like and comments

i must say i had gem reader for this FF and enjoying to writting it!!!




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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
nice mehendi retuals...geet bite him!!!!
awesome
Edited by goldenmoon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome well described mehndi ritual with both side maan & geet want to know what maan going to do with his geet as he gone completely amazing dear loved this historical one well written each and every word and scene

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