😳 Ehem... Hi
Bohot Kuch kehna hai but I don't know how much to write and where to begin... Just want to makesure that atleast I comment before this thread finishes too! Touch wood** happy that it is.
My Teacher is special in so many ways esp since its ur comeback to the forum ..
I was a late reader of ' In love with enemy' but I couldn't get the effect of ur writing off me for a very long time and when I first read 'My teacher' (u were on the way to write its chapter 2.).. And I instantly felt the same thrill to read ur work... Absolutely a working master piece!!
So here I begin with my thoughts on this beautiful ff..
This is one the few ffs where I'm totally Fida over Arjun usually its Geet hehee as in most ffs she plays the main victim of the plot ... Maybe its no different here as u have given both of them equal share of their own grief but the fact that Maan managed to become Arjun with the lil less of what life offered him gives me unexplainable attachement with his character ... So yeh Aaj ka Arjun Woh bachpan ke Maan ka abhiMaan hai ... He can proudly wear that name tag, unlike Maan Singh Khuraana a name default by birthright; the title Arjun Singh is symbolic to his self made self! that he has become ... Ofcourse with a guarding angel like Geet's father he surely would have reached the same heights even without the pain inflicted upon him from the Daanav grandfather !
But but having said that ..Geet is also beyond special... The image that fills my mind everytime i think of this Geet is the one Arjun had described of her mesmerizing beauty in the Poojaa... Breathtaking and yet a breath of fresh air at the same time...
.. Her impulsive way of baring her emotions to him and her unconscious submission to him as well as so comfortably giving him the right to touch as almost she would to the Ma(a)n of her life depicts exactly of how a bubbly- eager to marry her Maan-innocent Geet would behave at the tender age of 19yrs. Also, bearing in mind u have also shown the eroded side of her nature which has been instinctively influenced with the same arragonce and hot headed nature as her grandfather...Aaah cannot wait for the fresh blooming soft ( father like) nature of Geet to properly emerge under the guiding nature of her Maan( not Arjun I note**) .
And ufff coming to the plot of the story ... You Reet have weaved such an impactful love story with the right portion of all passion, glorious drama and philosophy that I am not surprised as to why I look forward to reading ur work so much and why i missed ur presence in this forum so much!!
Although from what I said above may make u realise as to how much I love 'my teacher' but my lack of commenting might say otherwise! Sorry ji ..no excuse tbh I should have taken time out ! But been away from home for nearly 3months and in between would read ur (And few other writer's hehee) updates but promised myself that I won't read further at chapter 18 so now that it has been a few weeks of me back at home I just realised i have 10 chapters to catch up with!!!! Happy and sad that I missed so much ! And scared that it maybe close to its end jus when im about to begin yet again...
So yet again sorry for the late comments, and a blank reserve at chapter 18 I think! And btw I do hope u read this comment since I'm not sure my two previous Pms have reached u... One was after in love with enemy and the second was when u began my teacher..
.. I do hope that even after my teacher u carry on contributing ur work of penship here since I and so many other readers love u for it so much ...
Right ...so I'm off to sleep since its sooo late but with a waada that I will comment again after catching up with all the reading !
Thank u Ji for reading my long novel of a comment with all its typos !
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