VIOLIN~RHYTHM OF ROMANCE # 4 love punishment page 62/ 8th january - Page 30

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VIOLIN RYTHYM OF ROMANCE









thanks to shruthe di for the banner







thanks to jadu aka maya rhea for the benner




@ all
Why geet is like this all question is same only just wait and watch to know
@ laks thanks for ur support gal it meant a lot to me. Because of you only I have typed this update

@ RJ thanks for being there me all ways

@ pridadarsini di, priya di,mandy 15, hanisha devi thanks for responding to me all ways
I know I am being cranky all ways thanks for waiting for me for boosting me all ways.

@ nadu baby here is update thanks baby

@ sampa will give translation when I use that song that is telugu song re




3 Winter romance



The morning brightened with sun light melting away snow which is looking like blanket on roads. No one dare to step out because of cold winter day without their protective shields. But it was indeed it is there life they are used of it. All are busy to get into their works to start there day. Roads were not fully busy but surrounded with hustle bustle. In all these one family is enjoying their morning in their own way.


They were none other than maan parent's radha and Krishna. Krishna maan's dad sat in there beautiful hall on floor along with Krishna who is busy in setting tambura strings. It is there daily routine to start there day after worshiping their favorite possessions. Krishna smiled slightly watching his soul mate glowing face. He cont believe how much she changed for outer world but for him she is same his Krishna.


Radha is taking her own good time to feel every string of tambura. It is giving her new zeal of happiness which she all ways craved for. She got her possession her life music after long time struggle. Watching her changing in expressions Krishna signed. It makes him feel guilty for his deeds which he committed in past. Only he knows how many times he cursed himself for snatching her smile but that is past. Nodding his head negatively smiling at radha with happy tears he started singing.






As the tuning beads started playing along with strings making every nerve of them flowing with new found happiness. The whole mansion echoed with their tune maan smiled slightly watching his love sleeping peacefully. Leaning on the locked door maan chuckled seeing geet attempts to hide her legs in warm blanket due to cold.







Geet is sleeping like lag after thinking up to late night her failed attempt to make maan get away from her. She wrapped two blankets around her whole body as she know when she woke up both will be lying on ground. Maan admired her sleeping beauty. Geet makes an irritated face as the maan'a parents started singing in high pitch from time to time after slight pauses. Maan nodded his head in disbelief for her antics.





"Ye kabhi nahi suderegi" murmured maan glancing at room which is looking like total mess. After brief second when his angel not ready to left the bed maan paddle up to her bed making sure door is locked properly. He cont take risk when his parents are at home. He has to do all this like thief is his own house. Maan laughed at his condition.




Grabbing her blanket forcefully maan splashed water on geet face harshly laughing out loud. Geet startled for this sudden attack. She is highly shocked seeing maan in her room. It was her routine radha will come to wake her up. Now a day's things between maan and her is not that much good. She didn't expect him to be there and his act. Grrr she just hates this man for all these. These days she is at peace but last day incident makes maan to be back his old self.


Maan laughed again as geet looking like ghost. Her hair is totally in big mess top of that khol is smudged around her eyes as geet tried to wipe water from her face.


"haaa" screamed geet on top of her lungs. But still maan didn't given up he is laughing continuously now he is on her bed rolling all over bed.


"mr.maan singh khurana just shut up and get up from my bed" shouted geet pointing finer at maan's face.








Maan controlled his laugh as his shreni is back now. But he cont wipe away the smirk that playing on his lips for his successive plan.


"Your bed? so silly geet. You are forgetting this is my house got it" retorted maan looking straight in to geet's eyes. He hated this sec for talking like that but this girl given only this choice to him. Geet made cry baby face for his audacity.






"Fine I will shift from here today only. I told you know no of times I don't need anything. You are stubborn forcefully brought me here" said geet with irritated tone. She is damn happy with her carefree life but maan again brought her here after her constant denial also. She is here only for her aunty and uncle specially her uncle as he wants to see her ones.


"Oh really then just try ones. You will see what is Mr.MSK then" warned maan with stern voice. He has to break her hard shell then he can do anything. He wants to listen her commanding voice saying his everything belongs to her only. He is ready to share his parents also but she is geetika Sharma best stubborn girl in the world.


Geet shivered with his high voice there is no point fighting with him baselessly. Then fine lets prove him what she can do thought geet with smirk.


Grabbing her back bag from side shelf started collecting her all things. Maan observed her every move but stayed silently. Geet completely ignored his presence. "hatto" said geet grabbing her duppata which is stuck under maan's hand.


Maan rolled his eyes placing whole duppata under his elbow leaned on the bed making geet irritate to the core. "Yes you can take that now" said maan grinning at geet continued with a wink"if you can".


Geet tried for five minutes but maan is not ready to leave her like that. Finally with his one pull geet landed on maan's body. Geet eyes popped open with this. Maan is still in his vest only he is looking soo fresh also. His taught muscles were looking so hard and his colane smell making her felt dizzy totally.







Geet shook her head hard to get away from this feel if not sure she will lose her control.


Maan is simply enjoying his effect on her. He very well aware of his effect of looks on girls specially this girl. He loves teasing her like hell. Her whole body is so cold due to this winter snowing.


"Oh my cute ghost" wishepered maan in geet ears sending shivers to her body. Maan placed his warm palm on her cold waist it was icy he must say. That electrified touch ohh geet totally lost her control now. It is not new for both of them. They were together from childhood but his way of making her feel special with his manly touch is the something she cont explain in words also.


There breathe mingled in air making the atmosphere swing in high temperature. One is fully affected by this cold weather other one fully warmed up with this closeness. Maan eyes twinkled with naughtiness as geet is fully lost in his passion. Maan tugged her very close plastering every inch of geet body to his manly body. Maan placed his lips on corner of geet lips testing her patience.


"Geet get it straight. How long how much you will try but you have to come back to me only" said maan as declaration. Geet looked away breaking her trance who is lost in his touch up to now. She knows what he meant but it won't happen in any way. Because she is not ready for anything.
"Now be a good girl come fast maa will be waiting for you now" said maan pecking geet on her forehead. Ohh his sweet gesture she is not worth for anything. She is ready to break his heart but he his love. She is afraid can she do that. It is fake or true?? These feelings will have any value?? There are many questions running in her mind. "Geet you are matured right then get your answer by your own" said maan rising on his toys giving her some space to think over all things.


It is not easy for her. After what happened he will help her to overcome everything. This is the conclusion maan made after thinking at night until his eyes given up to his sleep. That's why he is here after getting insults for his love he gone mad totally. But he cont give up now not at this high point when his love is suffering in her own shell.


"Maan they contacted me again. What shall I do now?" asked radha taking their BF. Maan pretened like he didn't hear her words. "Maan plz what's the reason for your denial" this time Krishna interfered between mother and son.
This is the nth time anand asking them to do one album for them. He is very much interested in maan and just love maan'a violin tunes. But here maan is not ready to at least giving time to think over it. Maan's company is famous for traditional along with pop. It is good chance for maan as per krish view (Krishna maan's dad).

"Yes maan spit out what is running in your mind" said radha supporting krish words. Geet is silently watching the drama going in front of her eyes. As per this is just big drama nothing else. Geet is curious to know his denial she already know the reason. But she needs confirmation from maan. She hated when someone shattering their dreams for her specially maan. He don't need this she have to do something before things slipped away from her hand.


Maan silence just killing duo. Anand is their best friend they had given word to him already. Then how they will go on this matter. Maan is totally blank what he can answer. He can't split out the truth nor he can sit there silent like this.


How he can disclose to them why he doing this. He opted to escape rather than giving them any cause to get disturbed. His parents got this peaceful life after many hurdles. He cont dis obey them nor taken up their work.
"Ok I will do that but I just need time. No more arguments on this" said maan with cold voice. Geet can sense his pain this she expected least. Who said to him to take vow leaving his possession?.


"Maa I have to leave now. Will meet you in evening don't bother about my lunch etc I will take care of everything." Said maan taking blessings from both hurriedly left from there not meeting questioning gauze of his parents.


Maan had given accused glance to geet before he left geet just looked away. It's his life he is messing up his own life with this useless word called love thought geet. For geet there is no place for the word called emotions in her life. It is closed chapter which she dare to open up that again.
"What happen to maan he is not like this. He is not my maan." Whimpered radha holding back her tears which are gathered around her wrinkled eyes. Geet sat on her knees in front radha taking her hands in hers placed warm kiss smiling big. "Aunty just calm down plz. You are not feeling good right fir bhi you had given your performance last night very bad. You should get punishment" said geet with glare in baby voice making duo to chuckle. "Now be a good girl. I am leaving to work" said geet pecking krish cheeks winking at radha.


She cont see this family suffering because of anything. This family is the only one she has now in this whole world. They did a lot for her she can at least do this much. It is give and take nothing more for her. But is it? She cont fool out her own heart which is at pain for all these happenings.


"Geet just pray to god to make everything good before leaving" shouted radha but geet silently left from there. Radha know she heard that but sigh few things won't get change fatly the way we expected. "When will geet forget all these" asked radha with painful eyes glancing at krish who is all the while kept silent.

"Radha don't be cry baby ok. Geet need her time and maan I will talk with him just take some rest as you don't have any concert for few days got it" said krish hugging her close to his heart.
Maan smiled slightly his face has that glow along hint of proud as he stood in front of his music company "caravan of dreams".






name credits goes to hira thanks re



His dream came true all most many struggles he is enjoying every bit of it fully. When he entered leaving all his thoughts in door step he met with his close friend all time favorite Aditya kashyap. Setting his specks with his signature adi almost bumped to maan. Adi his friend his besty he is working as maan's personal assistant. Cool going very friendly but his one mistake will boil maan's anger. Poor guy but love his friend like his own brother.
As he passed by maan met with his company receptionist pinky who greeted him with trembled voice. Pinky is hell scared of maan for his short temper otherwise respects maan very much. Maan rolled his eyes for pinky's reaction but greeted with smile.
"Geet mam aaj bhi nahi aaya sir ab kya kare" said pinky after maan left to recording room.
"What but you said they will come today" shouted Aks who is waiting there patiently from morning.
Adi and pinky exchanged there looks with blank faces. Before aks continue with her talk they heard maan's high pitch voice which shakes entire building along with some noises.

So here is the next part just wait and watch to know more

@ Merry Christmas to all





Sparkle


Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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OH NO
Though Maaneet spent some lovely moments still I can see the pain between them


aisa kya hua Geet ke saath ki wo Maan ko khud se dur rakhna chahti hai
think she sould Trust Man and tell him every thing
Loved the update
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maneet nok jhok and sweet romance geet try to run maan catching
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...






Edited by love2_soma - 11 years ago
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thanks for the lovely update poo...

loved how u created the morning atmosphere in their home... filled with tambura melody ... its just divine ...

enjoyed reading maaneet moments...

caravan of dreams... just loved this name👏

still lots of confusion... y geet is like this??? y maan forcefully is keeping geet there??? so eager to get my answers..


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nice teaser
waiting for the next part
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Radha was singing.. n geet was trying to hide under duvet...😆 maan n geet cute lil fights... Somewhere maan has been always successful in breaking her wall.. but then she again came to her denial mode.. nice update Pooja..😊

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