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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part...geet guessed it was maan and so happy that she entered his palace and lost herself in euporia...so it was maans dadi...she was very scared of broken statue...oh ho dadi teasing maan nad maan faking being angry on her where she disappeared
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww Geet got scared by Dadi. Beautiful update as always. Fab job
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow! Maan brought her to his home..
And our chalthi philthi disaster already started her actions 😆
daadi apni bahu se mili!! yipee!!
uff ho maan!! don't fake anger!! precious pearls will form in her eyes 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi And Hello

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting mona ek bada wala update dena
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


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The Downpour... Part 24

"Where is she!!!''

He looked around but Geet clue was nowhere in sight. In darkness of dusk and coldness of rain, road was looking so deadened that it seemed, would not have even seen the tinge of aliveness ever. His heart thud with the shock she was gone missing in this dreadful surrounding. His mind was cursing him to leave her alone, teasing her to the extreme, knowing how scared she was!

"Geet!!!!!'' He called out, runs here and there like mad but water compressed his voice. He was bitterly drenched in water from head to toe and wind was making his bone become frozen but he was worried for her, how she would have been handling this frigidity, imagining her condition, chillness run through his spine.

"Geettt where are you!!!" He pushed hair in frustration. Frustration of not keeping his love safe, frustration of leaving her alone and being the sole reason of her gone missing, frustration of not finding himself efficient to get her back. He was heading to verge of devastation.

"Calm down Maan!!!" He tried to make him relax but it was coming out as the biggest failure. "I- I should call her!" The idea flashed in his mind but then remembered he had stopped her to keep anything, in fact did not even give her a single minute to be prepared.

"You were mad Maan you were stupid, why did do this!!!!"" He was turning into insane, was not capable to think properly. He wanted her to hide in his arms only, no wish he would ask for God, for the whole life ever.

"Please God please bring her back!!"

He runs for meters in each and every directions then came back thinking she might have come in car back!!

"No!!!'' He banged on car feeling so weak, incapable. He looked up to the sky with open eyes, met eyes to God asking that "why ..why….why this happened!!!

Water drops were falling straightway in his eyes, hitting it but he did not wail. No any pain could be bigger than Geet vanishing from his view. His hands were turning into fist in fury and unability.

"I should go to police!!'' Thinking he hopped in car then again her being nearby somewhere stopped his leg. He was not sure what to do, what step should be taken when suddenly, he heard her voice.

"Maan sir"

Maan turned back in flash and found she was standing with smile on her face. His expressions darken more instead of soften down. His eyes followed the thing she was holding in hands, A bunch of flowers'.

"Sir, it's for you" She raised flowers to him, " I'm sorr!"

"Geettt!!!!" Maan roared cutting her words in air and aggressively snatched flowers and threw away at once. It scattered in water lifelessly.

Geet shockingly looked her flowers, lying dead in front of her eyes. Her effort to make him happy, her try to ask for forgiveness also died with them.

"Where were you!""!!

Maan held her shoulders, shook her in aggression but her eyes did not move, still was staring her flowers.

"Tell me damnit where had you gone!!!''

Slowly his aggression softens down. "Where were you Geet, Why did you leave me?"

His voice cracked in overflowing emotions. He cupped her face firmly but effect was powerless. "Geet why did you leave me, I would have died without you'' his voice was fading in rain, Geet shocked mind could not get a single word. It was still terrified with the brutal murder of her attempt.

"Geet why don't you listen me damnit, where had you been!!!"

He could not bear the weight of his paining heart, hugged her tight to heal it, and kept her body glued with his. He held her tight, that both bodies could have felt the beats of each other's heart and then Geet realize Maan condition. His heart was skipping beats, was running in marathon and his body was shaking. She felt herself totally possessed by his arms. His hands were roaming on her back, engulfing her completely in him. The sensation and emotions were enough for her to handle it and she also enfolded arms around his waist, resting face on his shoulder but looking at flowers with teary eyes.

She was not feeling odd nor did she feel unease with this happening. She wanted Maan to be relaxed. She unknowingly was caressing his back and shoulder to heal him. It was like naturally, everything was taking place. Maan felt calm after little moments. He nuzzled nose in her neck, then looked her face which was hiding in his shoulder. He smiled, brought her face facing to his face and cupped it. Geet finally looked in his eyes which were carrying serenity.

Maan rubbed water drops from her face slowly, removed hair strands from her forehead. He looked in her eyes and found tears. He shocked, in reflex his hold diminished thinking she may be regretting their closeness but her eyes gestured toward those ditched flowers.

Maan suddenly realized the meaning of her uncompleted words.

"She wanted me to give flowers and what I did!!!" He repented. He collected them and brought to her. Most had been broken still he managed to collect each and every petal and brought to her.

"For me?" He asked lovingly, Geet nodded.

''I wanted to say you sorry sir'' Her eyes were staring ground. Rain had turned into drizzle.

Maan selected out a flower among them and raised to her.

"Now I am sorry Geet"

She looked him in awe but took it. Maan was happy; he carefully kept all flowers in car and said her to sit inside.

Maan opened door for her. As she was to sit Maan stopped her, she looked him question.

Maan came near and kissed her cheek and whispered "Thank you".

She blushed hard. One their hug, which she did not have noticed yet in her sadness but now it turned out as effect of made her feel excitement, and now his kiss.

She heard him calling her name, to sit as still she was standing as usual, at same place. She settled inside and both left, in complete silence.


Precap : "Run Geett run!!!!'' Asha dragged Geet with her to catch the lift which was shutting out. Geet runs so fast and straightway fell in Maan arms pushing him to the wall..



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Hi And Hello


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