MG: TWIN TELEPATHY last part pg 18 aug 28 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm,...read part 2 already n commented! Nice teaser! update soon
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Awsome teaser
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome story hmm so maaneet and arjvi together
Lovely concept loved their entries especially Maans
Me telling in advance I would be little partial towards maaneet ( isn't that obvious)waiting waiting and waiting
Plsss update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing upate...
waiting fr thr date especially blind date if maneet...
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its wrong time to stop dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept. So both sending their siblings instead of going themselves
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~~~ TWIN TELEPATHY~~~




LAST PART

thank you all for your likes and comments

@JASMINE RAHUL THIS UPDATE IS SPECIALLY FOR YOU...


She reached on time..or say she was early with almost fifteen minutes well geet doesn't like to be late anywhere and this was the things she didn't share with her sister since she gets late and this time also she was late and poor arjun who was always late was early just for her..because of his puppy love for anvi he was doing everything that was not personality and maan who was known for his punctuality was late for the first time since he was still contemplating to go or not..arjun had definitely put him in a mess...

And this was not at all done for him..why cant his brother know that he was not for this kind of surprise dates and now bearing a egoistic and attitude ki dukaan model was not in his books but today arjun had even made him to do what he was not intended to..

Though it was not that he was with models earlier .. he had been on most of the cover pages of the magazines thanks to his brother .. every single date that arjun fixed for him was the hot news of the next day this was something that he never wants and still things happened...

Maan thought first not to go and let arjun know that everytime he cant be his scape goat but also that love that he has for his brother comes in front and the next moment he is made to do what is not intended to do...

Maan reached in the restraurent of hotel la LA SHANGILA and just as his place was booked he went there in order to wait patiently for the model ... and just opposite to him there was she , waiting for him though anvi had already informed geet that arjun would come to meet him but she didn't knew that arjun was a way ahead to her he do have sent his substitute and now this was definitely going to be the big muddle and the four are going to have a fun now just because of their twins...

Anvi was dressed in a pink colour simple yet elegant pink chooridar her hair were just tied in a simle loose braid and having a thin layer of kohl and baby red lipstick suiting to her attre and pure naughty glint that was very much visible in her eyes... she had already looked at him dressed like a gentle man in that black Armani suit ..he was looking pretty decent today no layers of attitude that he carries least she knew that it was their surname that was filled with attitude nothing else...

Arjun was just praying that he will be alble to impress her not like that he was scared but he was pretty much scared .. this was the first girl who have tried to gain his attention and denied him and it took him whole one month to make her agree for a simple date and here she was still absent ... arjun was not aware that she was the same girl who posed to be Natasha .. it was actually anvi never had the direct face off with arjun she just made him and his designers to run behind her she was too difficult to handle...

Arjun : wont she come.. arjun just behave she is not any girl who will try to impress you with her charms instead you have to impress her this time.. just be sure that you will do what you are intended too... don't let her go.. you like her right...

He asked himself to make sure that he was confident enough but that was not simple just because he knew the answer .. his heart skipped many beats one after the other as he saw her coming towards her ... she was drop dead gorgeous and he was gaping at her with his wide eyes and mouth which was about to open... her small smile and those eyes which were fixed with his .. she had actually played her first charm on him.. and he forgot to even ask her to sit...

Anvi st : just like I expected him mannerless arrogant arjun khurana .. that god geetu is saved from him .. lets see what you will do here mr khurana ...

Here at other place...

Geet had already taken two orange juices and it was already half an hour that she had waited and fifteen minutes that maan had been sitting he was though not interested In sitting here anymore and casually looked around and saw many couples having their time and here he was sitting alone... it was not even a while when his eyes caught a worried face . she was looking absolutely a delight with thosepink lips which were quivering with some discomfort ..those loose curls were freely flowing on her face.. the doe shaped hazels were marked with thick layer of kohl just to hide her apprehension...

Maan : looks like baby doll is worried for something ...

Well if someone would have heard his words than he would have definitely thought that he must be saying about that two twin two year old babies which were eating and messing up but he knows that his all attention was on her .. the girl who was looking just like a baby in that pink frock and that small jacket that was covering her off shoulder dress .. graceful yet stylish ...

Geet looked above and here and there but her eyes didn't spot anyone... but the next moment she found someone calling arjun and her gaze followed the direction... again maan was mistaken as arjun and this time he was given the task to perform.. arjun is the regular visitor the restraurent and that idiot guy had reserved the table in the same hotel.. the owner of the hotel was surprising knowing both maan and arjuna and today seeing maan he mistaken him as arjun and requested him to sing a song since arjun was fond of singing... he was trained as a singer and pop and jazz were his skills but maan was no less he was too trained and his genere was soft romantic melody...

The hotel was celebrating its fiftieth anniversary so he requested maan and maan didn't said anything because he knew that if he will say the truth then arjun's plan will be spoiled...and this he cant definitely do... but there was a difference no one knew about maan's being a singer except his family since he was so much in his business and arjun shares this same.. people were ignorant about khurana brothers having multitalented charms...

The lights were dim and the atmosphere was itself adding to the burning eyes which were just getting some relief on seeing them ( geet and anvi)

Hmmm..mm.. hey hey hey ...

Maan was sitting with his guitar and the soft romantic tune reached her ear and she looked at him.. he was though having his concentration towards his guitar yet he could feel her gaze on her and for a second he lifted his gaze only for her to look at him..and in the next moment she looked away ...

Ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hai

Ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hai

Kya kahun pyaar mein deewano jaisa haal
Deewano jaisa haal hai
Tumhara hi khayaal hai
Ho ..o..oo ahaa haa la la la la la la...

Anvi smiled as se heard the lyrics she could hear the soft music and arjun knew that it was maan since his voice was right now echoed in whole hotel premises and gladly arjun had booked his date in the same hotel but in a different wing ...

He looked at anvi she smiled and he took her hands...

Arjun: thanks for coming... he softly kissed her hand and she blushed this was new but mr khurana knew how to make her feel different ...

Ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hai

Kya kahun pyaar mein deewano jaisa haal

Geet immediately averted her gaze as she saw him looking in her direction he was just trying to see her and she thought that he knew that its her...

Geet : why is he looking in my direction.. babaji what did this stupid anvi had done.. obviously he is here and that is for a DATE ... but why cant I take off my eyes off him ...he is so handsome...

Geet opened her mouth in a O ..she was suddenly feeling flushed and all red as he can see her clearly ...

Maan smirked and concentrated on his words this was his favourite song and now since he had seen her he knew that he was falling for her and he was glad that he was here else he would miss this diamond which was all pink by now...


Tumko dekhe bina ...aa.. chain milta nahi
Dil pe ab toh koi zor chalta nahi
Jadoo hai kaisa dil ki lagi mein
Doob gaya hun is bekhudi mein ho..aa...la...

Arjun looked at anvi with much sincerity in his eyes and confessed what he felt for her ...

Arjun: I know that what you are thinking about me but believe me that was al true you must have heard about my affairs with almost all the models I have worked with and my new connections but that was meaningless till you came in my life and this meaningless connections will always remain like this since I promise to let you feel betrayed .. can you trust me once ...

Anvi was short of speech if he was a known flirt then he was most truthful person she had heard ...

Geet : I need to go to him and introduce my self... just be confident geet ..dont let him affect you , you are here just because of anvi and this time just for anvi meet him...

Ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hai

Kya kahun pyaar mein deewano jaisa haal

Maan st : why cant I take off my eyes off her.. never felt this way.. she seems to be another model and being haughty and bitchy is their quality but still she is looking different just like I am missing something ...



Har pal dhunde nazar tumko hi jaaneman
Had se badne lagaa mera deewanaapan
Dil mein basalun apna bana lun
Ya phir nazar mein tumko chupa lun
Oo...hooo...aa..la...

Anvi : what should I say mr khurana ... she tried to be formal...

Arjun: okk I understood your answer ..

Anvi felt bad for him...

Anvi : no please don't ..i didn't mean that ..i mean I don't know what to say arjun .. you are the most genuine person I have ever meet and this time I am short of words...

Arjun : so a yes or no..

Anvi : first propose me...

Arjun :

" hum ek baar jeete hain ..

Ek baar marte hain..

Pyar bhi ek baar hota hai...


anvi : aur??


arjun: what is there something else...


anvi gave him her famous glare ...the poor romeo was not in a place to listen or hear anything...

Ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hai

Kya kahun pyaar mein deewano jaisa haal

Deewano jaisa haal hai
Tumhara hi khayaal hai
Ho ..o..oo ahaa haa la la la la la la...

Maan came back on his seat but his eyes never left her sight there was a loud applause from the listeners and yash personally thanked him and he just nodded ...

Girl: is it vacant ...

The guy looked at the beauty that excelled in its own terms..the soft gaze that could anyone loose himself in... there was saw coming towards him and the next moment he saw her .. he just like a gentle man pulled a seat for her and she sat aside him..

Girl: thanks...

Maan : my pleasure ...

Girl : hiii I am natasha and you must be arjun..

She very politely acknowledged him and maan was pleasantly surprised hearing her silky soft voice this was new none of the girls were so polite..

Guy : I am arjun ... arjun khurana ...

Geet smiled and he was just bowled by her simple smile.. yes he had already fallen for her .. sometimes words are not needed.. they shared there thought and geet did a mistake instead of saying that she was a model she revealed her actual qualifications and job profile that made maan to look at her twice...he knew something was amiss or she was lying...

Maan : so any chances of getting settled in your life ..

Geet : I don't know dad and nani will decide ...

Maan : so you do love someone and is waiting for approval from your parents ...

Geet : no no.. I don't love anyone..

There was such a needed desperation in her voice that maan's heart to flutter in happiness .. he will now get her info..natasha good ..

Geet : I don't even know what is love...

Maan : its simple Natasha .. when you want to see the person who you cont think off even for a second ..and then he possess a place in yur life... just feel what your heart says... there will be a comfort and a desperation in your moves...

Geet : really love is so simple to acknowledge the girls twinkled with a pleasure ...

Maan : if you can see the things correctly if you can hear the things without any hindrance then you can see the love feel it..you can live the love ...

The smile on the other face was much prominent...

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Arjun and anvi were officially dating each other but with maan and geet something was not done.. they have been really close to each other since that encounter she talked and share a lot about her life but still the lie of arjun and Natasha was between them... and neither arjun nor anvi knew that geet and maan had actually met each other ...

Maan was definitely in a bad mood , geet was avoiding him..and here geet was also in a bad condition as she had seen arjun and anvi together and thought that she will be a hindrance between them... thus avoiding maan.. she was now not talking to maan ...

Maan came early and was in a really bad mood arjun was sitting with daadima and their mom .. he was about to go to his room when arjun stopped him but he went to him room and arjun followed knowing his brother needed his attention...

Maan was searching for something when he saw arjun coming and a pillow came towards him flying and arjun ducked him..

Arjun: kya hua... why are you in angry playing mood... or wanna play video game...

Maan : just go.. and you are responsible for this...

Arjun looked at his brother and came towards him he looked at him angrily and asked him the reason...

Arjun: how come I be the reason...

Maan : Natasha , she is not talking to me ... and guess what now she is avoiding me too... and all because of you...

Arjun: oh my god you and that Natasha.. I had warned you ..but what did you do..now wit let me call her...

Maan : no just don't .. he snatched the cell phone and threw it away...

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Arjun talked to anvi and she knew that why geet was behaving weired... she laughed giggled and told arjun what she did..and now he was too thrilled knowing what they did..maan and geet...

Arjun : just bring her to XYZ place and I am bringing that idiot brother of mine...

Anvi : don't you dare to call my jeej anything...

Geet was not ready to go anywhere and so maan ... but arjun and anvi need to fulfill the responsibilities of a good sibling till now anvi was unaware that maan and arjun are identical twins and that's why geet was feeling suffocated...

Maan was waiting for arjun and geet was anvi ..when he collided with each other .. it was pitch and suddenly they were under spot light geet was in a white and golden suit she was just like she is and maan was in his white shirt and jeans his personality ... she tried to go but maan held his hand...

Geet : leave me arjun..

Maan pulled her towards him and she was enveloped towards in his arms...

Maan : I am maan ..

Suddenly anvi and arjun came ..well anvi was too excited to meet maan as she hadn't meet him but was completely shocked seeing him ...

She was angry and blasted ...

Anvi : how dare you arjun to cheat me and my sister ...

Arjun immediately hold her from behind and she was shocked him..even geet was..she clutched maan s hand..and now they knew that what was actually going on...

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All four were seated and geet confessed maan what anvi told her to do and all the things there respective siblings told them to do ... this was highly confusing but anvi and geet was still digesting things...

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This was the night to be in each other arms.. after two months of planning and plotting they were finally married... arjun was in his room and he find his bride looking absolutely stunning and all shy that was not that he had expected..everything was there still there was something missing offcourse till she will not boss him there wont be the spice in their relation...

Maan looked at his wife she was standing on the window side looking at the moon which wa now enveloped between deep dark clouds and she found herself in the arms of the man she loved.. yes this was maan she loved..she was though hesitant that whether he will accept her after this mess but when he too cant stay without her then how can he remain away from her ...

Maan : jaan what are you thinking...

Geet : I still don't believe that a small prank lead me to you.. I really love you...

This was first time that she had said that ..her words affected him and were imprinted on his heart ...

The night continued with them driven in the passion of their love and love...

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So that was the pretty long part

Do share your views on twin telepathy...

Arjun and maan were identical twins in this..so consider them alike...

Share your views on this twin telepathy...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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thx a lot 4 dedicating this 2 me.i was worried whether u abandoned this.loved arjun anvi-maaneet meeting.how they fell in luv...but maaneet confusion caused some probs.but bcz of arjun anvi its solved.they r married too.loved d whole story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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too long
lovely ending sweety
maan told geet that he is maan🤣
very different concept

Edited by jssood - 11 years ago

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