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Vivah part 5

Today everything is special for maaneet. Today they will get engaged there was excitement, nervousness, soo many emotions together they were feeling but somewhere deep a disappointment that this is the only day they can meet n see each other before their marriage after that only in marriage rituals. There day started with wishing each other gud morning which really made their day with the thought that just some hours and they can see each others.

Geet's hand was decorated with mehndi with maan's name on it. All handas were ready to welcome the groom family. Arrangements were going in full swings, rano ridhhi baa all were engaged in dng all arrangements for engagement n the rituals which they have to perform. Mohinder n ammy was busy on checking food, decorations and etc. Where as maanu was busy with her own shorts of work. Geet was sorrounded by her friends who were teasing her making her blush. These all things were making handas house lively where as at Khurana mansions all were running here n there for arranging all thing, ladies were busy in shagun n males in checking all arrangements, whereas dulhe raja is busy in meetings which he need to complete before leaving, he was irritated becoz he don't want to attend it but he cant do anything he was given biggest opportunity of his life n he cant afford to lose it, leaving all thoughts aside he is giving his 100% to his work, after he completed all works he took relief breath n thought that he can now enjoy his engagement n with smile he went toward home where all are waiting for him so that they can leave towards handas house.

Maan reached home where priya was waiting for him all ready to take his class when he just hugged his mother n said "sorry maa but it was imp." On which priya stated "more than ur engagement" maan smiled n said "maa, bhaiya n papa has given me this responsibility n I will not let them down, n jaha tak baat rahi enagagement ki I wont let ur bahu to wait more okh, let's came n help me in getting ready" Priya smiled at him n said "till when u will take my help haan, after bahu will come m not gng to help you, it will be her duty" maan smiled at his maa who was giving him teasing smile. Priya helped him in getting ready then all Khurana family started for handa house.

There in handa house all were ready to welcome Khuranas, slowly guests too started coming, whereas geet was too ready n all were teasing her on maan's name n she was blushing to hard, hiding her face behind her palms. Riddz came n sat beside geet n said smilingly "don't tease my nanad more, wase geet tujhe pata h kya koi neeche aa gaya h or kisi ki aankhe tujhe dhoond rahi h bhid me" geet smiled ear to ear n said "bhabhi plzz" riddz smiled n said in her ear "aaj bhar le apne aankho me apne maan ko" geet blushed when riddz took her whereas as downstairs hands welcomed khuranas warmly n rano did tilak n aarti of maan, he too touched elders feet and they blessed him heartly.

He was made seat on a beautiful decorated swing, he smiled thinking geet will seat beside him officially n nodded his head, when armaan came near him n said "I can't tease u also on the name of ur bride as the bride is my kiddo" maan laughed at him n said "ab kya kare saale sahib aap toh phas gae behan or dost me" ammy nodded his head n said "koi nahi janab mai nahi lekin or toh h kya dosto" all their frnds nodded n started teasing him, when his eyes were searching for his geet, when riddz came after welcoming all khuranas and sat beside maan n said "maan dil nahi ho raha h geet ko niche lane ke" on which kashish said "aese mat bolo riddhima warna mera devar khud utha ke le aaega apni dulhaniya ko ku devar ji" maan smiled at them when veer said "ab kehne wali thode baat h bhabhi, aap na v khaoge toh bro utha laege geet bhabhi ko ku bro" on which maan glared at him. When a voice came n made maan smile broadly "kaun pareshan kar raha h mere bahiya ko" maan looked for her n she came n hugged him tightly n whispered "miss u bhaiya" on which maan too replied "miss u too doll" she meet with all when ram introduced her "mohinderji she is my doll anwesha singh khurana youngest in our family n twin of veer" all smiled at her n blessed her. When pandit ji announced to bring down bride for ganesha puja, n riddz went to bring geet while giving wink to maan.

Geet descended from stairs wearing beautiful white and silver dress matching with maan's white n silver sherwani both were looking made for each other. Geet cheeks were red due to blush as her frnds were teasing her constantly. Ammy was standing at the end of stairs n forwarded his hand to escort his kiddo happily n geet kept her hand in his hand n he escorted her till swing where maan was sitting n made her seat beside maan, she was all the time looking down unable to bear the gazes which all n maan was giving her. Panditji started ranting some mantra n performed small pooja for happy life of maaneet. After Pooja riddz n kashish forwarded rings to maan n geet to slide in eachothers fingers, geet with lil. Shaky hands took ring in her hand n maan forwarded his hand towards her, she held his hand softly n slipped the ring in his ring finger then maan held her hand softy n slide the ring un her finger, all clapped for the union then maaneet took blessings from the elders n they blessed them heartily there was tears in rano n mohinder's eyes, their daughter will be away from them in some days but singed happily that she is gng in safe hands.

All congratulated maaneet n photographer took soo many pics of them alone with family members then maan introduce aniee to geet, geet happily meet with her n she too liked geet in instant all were chatting when veer started singing song as he loves singing n dancing.
--veer--
Wah wah Ramji, jodi kya banaayi
Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko badhaai ho badhaai
Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaai
(he started dancing in front of maaneet n both maaneet were trying to stole some moments for them)
Seeing veer dancing aniee n maanu too joined as clicked too well.
--maanu--
Aap ki kripa se yeh shubh ghadi aayi
Jiji aur jija ko badhaai ho badhaai
Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaai
(she went near maaneet n dancing, showing her moves with aniee)
--veer--
Wah wah Ramji

--maanu--
Wah wah Ramji

--veer--
Wah wah Ramji
Mere bhaiya jo, chup baithe hai
Dekho bhabhi yeh kaise aithe hai
Aise bade hi bhale hain - 2
Maana thode manchale hain
Par aap ke siva kahin bhi na phisle hai
( he took geet's hand b took her to dance floor n dance around her showing maan, whereas geet was blushing hard )
--maanu--
Dekho dekho khud pe jiji itraai
(at that time maanu came near maan sat with him n sang Showing geet to maan who smiled at her blush which was for him...all were enjoying there)
--veer--
Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko badhaai ho badhaai

--BOTH--
Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaai

--veer--
Wah wah Ramji

--maanu--
Arre wah wah Ramji

--veer--
Wah wah Ramji
( armaan,riddz, sujal kashish, aniee,veer n all other people too dances around whereas maan held geet's hand in his n was looking at all 1stly geet was stiff but relaxed with time n enjoyed with him in hands in hands).
--maanu--
Suno jijaji, aji aap ke liye
Meri jiji ne bade tap hai kiye
Mandiron mein kiye phere - 2
Pooja saanjh savere
Teen lok, tain tees devon ko yeh rahi ghere
( their trase broked by maanu who took maan to dance floor n danced with him, he too mached his step with maanu n all, were as geet was looking at all smilingly.)
--veer--
Jaisi maine maangi thi, vaisi bhabhi paayi
(he came near geet n touched her feet while singing)
--maanu--
Jiji aur jija ko badhaai ho badhaai

--veer--
Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaai
Wah wah Ramji

--maanu--
Arre wah wah Ramji

--veer--
Wah wah Ramji
They all danced happily n enjoyed too much, whereas maan was dying to spend some time with her but was not getting chance whenever he was about to speak someone would come there wishing them, talking to them he growled in frustration only some hours have been left before his departure to London n here he is not getting time to talk a word with his fianc.
Edited by geetsmile - 10 years ago
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Vivah part 6

Khurana ladies came near geet n gave her all shagun n did some rituals, when maan silently escaped from there n came near sujal n stand beside him. Sujal smiled at him but looked at his face from which he was looking frustrated, he kept his hand on maan shoulder n asked "what happened maan any prob. U looking lil. Cranky" on which maan said "nothing bhaiya" sujal smiled n said "bol kya hua h" maan made faces n said "nobody is giving us time to talk just some hours have left for my flight n m feeling I won't be able to talk her before leaving" sujal smiled at his brother n can understand his feeling everyone after engagement wanted to spend some time with their fianc which he will not get as after a month is their wedding and he will return just a week before he kept his hand around his shoulder n said "maan I can understand u wanted sometime with her n I will try that u can spend some time with her don't worry" aan smiled lil. N said "pakka na bhaiya" in which sujal nodded n went towards kashish to talk with her regarding this. When maan left, geet started looking for him in the hall n here they cant speak to each other but they were sitting together this feeling is enough for her to wait for him till returns from London.
After all rituals were done guests were escorted to lavish dinning space where soo many types of food was present. At that moment kashish whispered in sujal ears "this is the perfect time, for them to spend alone time" he looked at her when she said " u just wait n watch". By saying this she went towards rano n Priya who were chatting about something n said " auntyji n mumma, I want to say something hope u wont mind" both gave her nod n she continued " if u all don't mind can maan n geet can eat together" on which ladies nodded bit then kashish said " without disturbance" rano n Priya looked at her when she continued " mumma n aunty ji mai ghuma phira ke nahi kahugi, as maan is leaving tomm. He wanted to spend some time with her n I hope geet too wanted the same, so plzz let them spent lil. Time together plzzz, both ladies thought for some time when Priya spoke "kashish sahi bol rahi h rano ji, humare samne toh baat karne se rahe dono so better let them eat n talk" on which rano nodded n called riddz n told her to take maaneet dinner in geet's room n Priya told kashish to take maaneet upstairs.

When maan got to know this he was happy n smiling broadly where as geet was blushing with the thought of spending some time with him alone. Both were escorted till geet's room where riddhima had placed their dinner n has cleaned the room lil. N smiled at them n said " enjoy ur time" n left with kashish as both ladies din't want to pull their legs today more. Both entered inside n sat where dinner was placed both wanted to talk but don't know what to talk as usual maan thought he should start the talk when geet murmured slowly "when is ur flight tomm." Maan smiled n Said " 11'o clock morning" geet just pressed her lips n said " dinner" maan smiled n said " yes we should start" they both started eating n finished it fastly after eating both stood in terrace n started talking when maan held her hands where his claim was n kissed the ring n asked "will u miss me" on which geet nodded smilingly n asked "what happened y u are looking lil. Dull" on which he said "sorry geet" geet looked at him cursorily when maan said "m sorry,like every couple I know u too wanted to spend some time with me, I too wanted but my business trip is in middle that we can't spent this beautiful period of our life together, kash Mai tumhe v apne sath le jaa pata" geet smiled at him n took his hand in hers n said " we r different maanji,I know like other couples we can't spent time together or go on our wedding shopping together but maanji we can chat on phone, n rahi baat shopping's Ki then don't worry after our wedding I will take u on shopping to spend ur money". He smiled at her n said " u r an angel to me" geet smiled when maan hugged her n she too cocooned him in her arms when she asked "will u miss me, n call me"with soo much expectation on which maan smiled at her n said "yes mishty" geet blushed when maan asked her "what u have saved my name in ur phone" she smiled at him n said "maan" maan looked lil.disappointed when she said "after marriage i will change it but here she can't keep any other name" maan smiled at her n asked to go downstairs n she happily agreed but before gng maan clicked their pics together as togetherness of them that he can take London n kissed her forehead, Geet blushed with his every gesture n followed him silently downstairs where all were waiting for them.

When they came out dadimaa n baa called them n they sat with the elders n chatted with them, all guests have gone till now only handas n khuranas were left, all chatting, laughing giggling with eachother when sujal came n asked his dad "dad its 12, we should leave as maan's packing is still left, n more over he have to go office tomm. Early morning for some paper work soo better we should leave" all nodded at him, whereas maan n geet face fell lil. Hearing this.

Baa signalled rano to give shagun to all, rano happily accepted n called ridhhima for help, both ladies gave gifts to khurana n all accepted happily at last rano came near maan n gave him his shagun, he accepted happily n touched her feet when she blessed n said "babaji tujhe khamyab kare is trip pe, or dheer sari khusiya de, jaldi aana puttar hum intejar karege tera" maan smied happily at rano then touched all elders feet n they too give him blessing for success in his trip, geet to touched elders feet n took blessing. Khuranas sat in their cars n zoomed out with a smile, whereas handas were still standing outside, mohinder came near geet n took her inside n made her seat near him said "tu khush na mera bacha" geet nodded smilingly all chatted for sometime n retired to their room.

When geet reached her room, the moments she just spend with maan came in her mind n thought to msg him gud night, she lifted her phone, when a smile came in her face finding maan's msg there, she sat in bed comfortably n read msg "in between everything I forgot to say very imp. Thing" geet smiled n msged him "what was that imp. Thing maanji" maan was sitting in car with his bro n bhabhi n veer n chatting his cell beeped n he know who it will be soo without thinking he just looked at cell smilingly, n replied "I will tell u that imp. Thing after u start calling me maan not maanji, u making me feel Buddha" n smiled naughtily himself when veer said "dekh lo bhabhi n big bro, abhi geet bhabhi aae v nahi humare ghar or yeh maan bro khud hi khud me smile kar rahe h" maan glared at him, when kashish said "wase aesa kya padh rahe the devar ji, hume v padhaiya kya bheja h humari devrani ne" maan murmured "nothing bhabhi bas aese hi" kashish laughed n said "ab nahi batana h toh mat batiye, wase baat toh sahi bola h veer ne mere bade devar pe jadu chal gaya h meri devrani ka" maan blushed at her comment n looked outside n was waiting for her reply.

Whereas geet rolled on bed n lied on her stomach n read the msg n laughed at the word n replied "maan" maan read the msg n hold his heart, he wanted to hear his name from her mouth but he cant call her, n replied "hayee maar daala tumne" geet hide her face blushingly in pillow n replied "ab bataie na kya h who imp. Thing" maan smiled n replied "soo someone is curious to know" until then they have reached km n he went straight towards his room, saying priya to pack his bag in mrng. Geet read his msg n replied "someone made me curious ab batao na maan plzz" he smiled n thought about her cute face n replied "u was looking gorgeous today" with msg he send a heart smiley. Geet smiled heartily n hide her face in pillow but then msged "n someone was looking handsome" he smiled at her replied n asked "what ur dng now" when geet replied "nothing ..u?" he replied "gng to change wait for 5 mins" geet smiled n sat thinking something n then hit her head n said to herself "tu v change kar le would be mrs.khurana" n blushed herself n went to change. When she came she have got two msg from maan
"Tell me something more about u geet"
"soe gae kya"
When he was not getting her replied he thought she slept n was about to send gud night when his mob. Beeped "no didn't slept who went to change" when maan replied "itna late" geet replied smilingly "hmm, was with papa and mumma" maan replied her "hmm gr8" when his cell beeped again "packing kar li" maan replied "nahi mom will do it in mrng, she was tired now" geet replied "okh, I think u should sleep subha office v jana h na aapko" maan smiled at her caring thoughts n replied "haan subha 8 baje" when geet replied "then sleep its already 2" maan nodded his face n looked at time n replied "okh gn sweet dreams n will call u before gng" geet smilied at him n replied "will wait, gud night sweet dreams" both kept their phone aside n slept thinking about each other with a smile on their face.
Precap- more about maaneet
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Thanku everyone who r liking n commenting n sorry for making u alll wait too much n m not gng to give any excuse because as always my prob us same will try to comp it as soon as possible

If u like it do comment n like n next part will be in a week hopefully again double updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
maneets engg
maan busy in off
geet is getting teased by her friends n bhabhi
priya helping maan to get ready n teses him saying it will be geets duty after marriage
engg is done
maan dying to spend some time with her n asking sujals help
n both mamas accepted to make them have dinner together
maan enjoying with her the time n asking sry for leaving her at this time b4 marriage
maan left half heartedly
the ph msgs were romantic
nice part

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