THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 87

Originally posted by: mayyo13

As answer to your note, I will just say that do what you feel is best for the story. If you feel that you cannot do justice to it while writing a few more chapters then write as many chapters as needed to give the story a fuller feel.

Now that will keep depending on my fluctuating moods...😆

Dadi has so many shades to her, doesn't she? With Maan, we have seen her all motherly and protective while with Dev, she is shararti too but at the same time, she doesn't let her motherly side drift away from her amidst Dev's masti khor attitude. I love her the way you've sketched her character.To be honest, I never planned her to be different with either one. They are different so it comes out easier. She knows Maan will not open up because he is and always has been his mother's😳 so she has to wait for him to share. Dev is the naughty one so she gets tangled up with his masti.

Dev is going through quite a lot, isn't he? He is experiencing that greying in his personality from the bright hues that he used to be earlier. But his greying is as welcomed as much as his colourful personality is loved.

While on one side, Dev is getting tamer and more efficient, Naintara is mellowing down at a very tiny pace. Well, ek qadam Dev chalega toh ek qadam Naintara bhi toh legi.

I like the transparency Dev has kept with his Dadi yet still keeping from her what he felt was not his secret to disclose. This shows the sincerity in Dev, the person he is underneath the mask of the flamboyant and extravagant Dev Khurana.
Dev finally has an impetus to grow. There had to be growth in his professional life to be more secure in his personal too.
With the slow comfort, a sort of camaraderie setting in between the two, it seems like everything is more peaceful around them, like they both are making efforts to make it work for them - professionally of course. I like the fact that he is noticing little things about her though.He already cares about her and he is hyper aware of her now. Slowly heading towards more cause he does not want to rush her. He knows she does not feel the same yet.

Reading about Poonam and what she's had to go through at the hands of her family, what she'd had to suffer just because she was from a rich family and the man she loved wasn't, how lonely she felt after the unfortunate passing of her love, how her love had turned upside down after that and how she had lost her happy life as well as her sanity, it was all so painful. It hurt me when they tortured her for being a widow who they believed had snatched the rich and successful Thakur. I was shuddering by the end of it. She had gone too far as a commodity and as the wife of Chandan Thakur that her daughter suffered as well...

NT was too little to understand. Other than fearing them she did not suffer. Poonam died a thousand deaths because of her mothers ambitions for her daughter.

Surprisingly though, I don't feel much aversion towards Chandan. He did a heinous act, no doubt about that and I do despise him for that but as far as his relation with Poonam could be seen, it seems like he has been caring towards her. Of course, I can't say if that really was the case or not.

A few readers like you caught on to that. He is not a negative character although the act was negative. More in a couple of updates.

I do want to know more about Naintara's relation with her stepfather and the way he treated her. Like Poonam, I don't believe the story that Brij has told about Naintara fleeing since that clearly is not the truth. What I wondered about was, how much efforts did Poonam do to find her daughter. Did she try to get her back? I really want Naintara to reunite with her mother at least. I want them to confront each other and Poonam to know the truth rather than having a third person's story which she doesn't believe in.

Hoping to read more of Naintara's past but more than eager for her to start finding happiness with Dev, the happiness she deserves.

One thing goes with the other. Sometimes in life the crosses you have to bear are so heavy that you can't move forward unless you shed them. Such is the case for NT. Couple of more updates with them and we will be there.

And yes, you need not put any note up since I haven't taken such a long time to comment on this one. 😆

Thanks for updating Avi! 🤗

PS: The song is a painful one. It only makes me feel sad whenever I listen to it.

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Aur abhi mujhe shaqi ladki keh rahi thi!

I may not say a lot of words in appreciation to you or anyone else, but you and I wouldn't have been friends like this if I didn't mean what little I do manage to say. 😊

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Poora padho. Maine kaha hai 'I may not say a lot of words in appreciation.' 😳

Originally posted by: dqno1

Poora padhugi toh ladhai kaise karungi...😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Huh! Ladaku! 😛

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

😳

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

U typing Me waiting 😉