THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 66

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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a dream

"He must be hungry. Must have thought your cheek is an apple", slips out of my mouth before I can stop it.

he said that, reallyy😆😆 wow ...i sooo loved her reaction to that...😊

glad to see her noticing him soo much ,that too in detail😉

finally she is getting affected very much...😊

and moreover they spoke somthng more than their usual hi's and hellos 😃 😃

Giiith 😆 am not Giiith am Geet, woh waaala dialog bhi i liked a looot...geet lookd sooo cute in that anger😳😳

one of the best maaneet wala update this is...

but i miss istar-dev already ...and i hate myslf for likin someone other than maaneet...😕 all ur fault Avi...😳
thanku sooo much for writing this story...
your updates n comments always brings a smile to my face...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayyeee!!! wat an update mari !!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update

baby scenes were so cute

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




aww Maaneet took care of baby...

abhi se practice ho rahi hai...

Maan tried to be strict with her but he was stumped by her only one glare...

Maan babu business and love mein bahut fark hai...

very sweet update...

thanx for pm...


Glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kalabhas

very cute update.
now its maan's turn to dream ,
maan is using business negotiation skills to his love life😆
i am glad that he gets some result.
his love first time calling by his name,how excited he was,it was really cute.
what she was thinking?
city boys ,and even city babies also created only for troubling her?
babaji how our poor maan is going to survive with her?pls save him?
i am just kidding,my geet is as cute as the little baby.her cribbing was so sweet.
her cautiousness around a guy,her withdrawal of hands and her contraction of feeling are so typical
girl of our society.how maan is going to break the wall around and enter in to her heart is a big deal.
i am sure its going to be tough,meanwhile i hope we could get some romantic moments as well.

Will try my best..
Thanks Kala
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 20
excellent...
this is the first time am actually loving Maan Geet side...
absolutely loved it dear...
the baby was damn cute and naughty...
and Geet's cribbing was too funny...
and Maan he was at his best...
lovely...
cont soon dear...

Thanks for your honesty Deepa. I am finding that a lot of people feel this way that they are enjoying MG for the first time.
My only reason is that I needed to establish that he is deeply in love from the beginning and she is resisting from the beginning.
I will try to move the story forward faster by cutting some chapters to move them along.
Glad you are liking it now.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

loved this Update a lot

Maan is also Naughty like My Baby
Geet is sooo Innocent
awesome mindblowing update Avi

Glad you liked it...
Tera baby pyaara hai.. finally banda khush hai who dekh kar Geet melty ho rahi hai..😳
🤗 faint hone ke liye...😆,
nahi seriously for being here with me always...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haath rokna pada tha...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

that was a dream


"He must be hungry. Must have thought your cheek is an apple", slips out of my mouth before I can stop it.

he said that, reallyy😆😆 wow ...i sooo loved her reaction to that...😊

glad to see her noticing him soo much ,that too in detail😉

finally she is getting affected very much...😊

and moreover they spoke somthng more than their usual hi's and hellos 😃 😃

Giiith 😆 am not Giiith am Geet, woh waaala dialog bhi i liked a looot...geet lookd sooo cute in that anger😳😳

one of the best maaneet wala update this is...

but i miss istar-dev already ...and i hate myslf for likin someone other than maaneet...😕 all ur fault Avi...😳
thanku sooo much for writing this story...
your updates n comments always brings a smile to my face...🤗

Purvi! They are not even talking how could they be in bed...Ouch
Glad you liked the update.😊

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