THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 112

Originally posted by: newmoviefan

ch19 - hahah! poor SRK 'll be like ab maine kya kiya...lol...Maan is such a possessive khadus
ch20 - nice words

Phoolon ke khwaabon mein aakar

Khushboo chura le gayi
Baadal ka aanchal bhi aakar
Paagal hawa le gayi
Ek phool ne ek phool se
Phir kaan mein kuchh kaha...

can so hear an irritated Geet saying dusht danav and what not to Maan and the innocent city baby ;)

ch21 - a lot emotional so as to say...can't imagine having a life like Naintara or her mother...

Daadi is a star in her own way...there are so many facets to her personality...

ch22 - wish someone could write a Maan - Nakool lovestory..hehhehe

Originally posted by: brandgurti

part 11 to 21

just mindblowing avi awesum 👏 u did a awesum jab yaar ur every update make me ur fan 😃...

i love DARJI part so much so nice to read Daarji has brought her up. it reflects in Geet's every simple moves and her nature !!! love maan geet sweet sa momnts song is to gud!!

The "dream house" reminded me of GHSP... the good old days when he goes back to Delhi wow 😉 hey my dreammyyy !!!

poor geet! Innocent students with genuine reasons for not showing up get yelled at because of those who make up excuses for their absence.lol our MSK MOD Maan getting angry on hearing her getting shouted 😈 hmmm finaly ego ko side love in ❤️ i love part 12 sooo much ❤️ when he felt like hugging her then y cant he do that then LAMO KAAKHIR KAB TAK YE CONTROL GAME KHALING MAAN BABU 🤣 MENU CONTROL NAHI HO RAHA THO HW MY POOR MUNDA MAAN CONTROL HIS FEELING LOL

loved the scene where he waited for her outside her hostel lol ye aur she is bussy in playing hid nd seek :p

loved the Song very much 😉 Cable car ride was Awesome maan cribbing and sulking like a kid poor boy was on a spree to impress his lady luv instead has gone and messed up the opportunity at hand ...

so she keeps mumbling about city boys so as to keep him away
because she thinks there is no future to this he loves her and he is hoping she would do the same 🤣 lol maan ne nakul ko bhi nahi chodda munda is now gon case 🤣 POOR NAKUL BAYB

I actually really enjoy the parallel stories of MG and DT, YE AUR HAI I LOVE MY MAANEET LIKE NAYTHING 😉

I get little butterflies whenever I read about how he admires her and is so engrossed in everything ...

ONES AGAIN THANKS FOR UR WONDERFULL STORRY DEAR

nd i like ur running parts too lol baad mein sirf comment karna he reh jaye ga ...

ya ill read ur note to All Maan Geet romance parts will be on the password protected blog. Each update will have a separate password, so do keep commenting if you want to read further.

don't forgot to send me ur blog link avi bahlye he im ur latlatife 😉 readder but im ur genune readder too 😊

huhhh fainaly i did it yaaa muhhh to u avi

love ya aru

Originally posted by: Susegad

Ch19

Aww man. Avi, every chapter I have been going aww. What a pair of brothers you have created. Total jaan lewa twins.

The scene where Maan is showing the pics to Dadi is amazing. There is no Geet in the pics but her presence is felt in every pic. What an idea sirji. That was just totally heartfelt. I am melted.😳

Ha!! Eavesdroppers not only get to hear bad things about themselves, they get to hear about SRK's awesome eight packs. Now that's a double whammy.😆

SRK - his biggest headache for now..😆

That was so totally cute of Maan. An exact reaction I'd expect from a teenage boy or a young guy in the thores of a crush. The all important question. Stubble or no Stubble.😉

I really really want to know how does one climb a ladder with a girl in his arms. I want to be a fly on that wall.😲😆

Straight up, holding no sides.. after all his Giit is in his arms😆

And yeah thank God, Geet made it through Mari the nishachar's room. 😉

Secret chamber of what? yehi nahi pata...😆

Ch 20

Haaye kya romantic sapna dekh raha tha Maan and then for one terrible moment I thought Maan had been romancing Nakul, thinkig it's Geet.🤣

Aww the whole Maan Geet and the baby chapter was so adorable. It was a glimpse into their future perhaps?

And Geet was such a cutie pouty pie.

Baby also thought so. He was happily chomping down on her and the surrogate father for a night was busy drooling on both 😳

Baby ki wajah se 'Suniye' se Maan ko 'Maan' ka promotion mil gaya.😳

I loved the baby part too. That's how they eat our cheeks right?

Ch 21

Dadi Khurana is one ishmart cookie. She knows when to let things be. 😃

Damn but is one sad, messed up past Tara has got. I pity her mother. I cried when I read her miserable story and yet I resent her. May be I'm wrong but somewhere i felt that she may have not paid enough atention to Tara. She loved her very much no doubt, but her dead husband was her first priority, not her daughter. Hmm, I could be wrong about all this, but that was just the way I read into it. As for the stillborn baby, is it really gone, or is Brij involved in something more sinister than just beating Tara. I am assuming he is he one who caused those injuries to her.

As for Chandan Thakur, not much of an impression so far, except that what he did was dead wrong.

Still perhaps there is more to Chandan and Poonam's story. Also lets see how Poonam and Tara reunite again.

All this when Tara was just softening up. Just finding a measure of happiness.

So part of Taras life has been revealed. Hmm.

She was in a deep depression. Something like post partum but she never got out of it. There was an avalanche of negatives for her from which she could not recover, first with her husband's death, then Chandan's behavior, then the baby and on top of that abusive inlaws. She was too broken to think anything beyond survival.

Ch 22

EWW!! Eww!! What a creepy, disgusting character you have drawn in Brij. I know I'm going to love hating him.🤢

What is this hold he has over Chandan I wonder. Hmm.

GG and Jiji

That was awesomestest.😆

Avi, tumhe aisa rose kisne diya tha? Is that why it's your favorite?

AHA!!😉

I had one planted in my backyard for that reason My most favorite one.

Poor Nakul. Neem and Karela.

Oh god!! Poor Nakul. Scolded, thrown out and almost labeled as one who is batting for the other team.🤣

Nakul and GG will become friends..😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thank you Nisha. 🤗