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Posted: 12 years ago
Sheen Heytal Sona Sky Sweety

I need the best pic u have of Maan in black shirt with green tie
If you guys get a chance please post it here.

Thanx guys xox
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is Brij ki Maa ki...😡
Maan is sho cute 😆
Poor Nakul bechare ko awaien me Limu pani aur karele ka juice peena para 🤣
Nice song but I did't hear it before 😳
Loved the Pics of Chandan n Poonam 😉
Beside Maan I like him also 😳😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Sheen Heytal Sona Sky Sweety

I need the best pic u have of Maan in black shirt with green tie
If you guys get a chance please post it here.

Thanx guys xox


Dhoonding 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sheen
Maan loves geet wala part mein tha

Buff muscles and all
Geet ab notice karegi 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow dear
Super amazing update
Loved it to the core
Thanx 4 d pm
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Sheen
Maan loves geet wala part mein tha

Buff muscles and all
Geet ab notice karegi 😉


Kitni Jhalli hai Geet hum tou kab ke NOTICE karke bethe hain 😉😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
The starting really scared me,avi..!!!
I wasn't over the fear that "My teacher" had caused me and now,this...I am really very scared specially because of college area preference of that bast**rd brij..I don't want Geet to be his next victim...!!!😭
This part brought a twist in character of Chandan..I would wait patiently for you to reveal the past bit by bit in coming chapters...!!!!
Coming to second half...
It was "super cute"..and filled with natural humour..Sometimes humour seems "forced" in the story and I stay quite conscious about this forced humour while writing comic genre but still some parts of my comic stories seems "forced" to me..!!! But this Maan nakul dadi part was completely natural. I really admire you for this avi..👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏
.I was giggling,though i felt really bad for Nakul..Poor guy had to drink neem and karela juice without any reason...😆
and "Jijji" part was my favourite...
Because my younger brother used to call me that sometimes..specially in "HARYANWI ACCENT"..you know,with extra emphasis on "JJ" part...!!!!😆
I loved the chapter,avi..
now waiting eagerly for "Rose day..."

PS- extremely sorry for my late latifi...😳
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
brij 😡
maan checking himself 😆
nakul - maan's convo GG n Jiji 😆
loved it
continue soon
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Oh! Okay firstly tell me one thing the first part was from a different time line than the second right? If I'm getting it right then its from the time period when Dev-Naina's story is going on with Maan away for studies.

Yes you are right. That's the timeline for that part.
Brij disgusts me. 🤢 I mean how can someone be so. He gives me creeps, I felt goosebumps just reading his thoughts. He treats women as trash, use & throw just for petty enjoyment. At his age he's spoiling lives of innocent girls who have dreams to aspire in life unknown that monsters like him are awaiting to snatch not only their dignity but also to turn every dream of theirs to a shocking & scary nightmare. Date rape drug is something that has many in its clutches and the victims of it are in a very bad position as they live the nightmare each moment as the helplessness of not being able to fight it out scars them forever, trust me its not a good thing to even talk to these victims it makes you tremble that any one could be the next victim & in a away thank god that you're safe. Brij like people shouldn't be left to roam around freely even after committing such heinous crimes. 😡
He has several issues but extreme power has corrupted his soul. He is beyond any redemption now. He will pay heavily.
He has had a grudge since his childhood which was not attended to precisely (I agree to Mayyo's take on it ... ) If that small sibling rivalry would have been taken care of appropriately & would have been resolved than a lot of harm could have been spared. Its said in psychiatry that childhood is a crucial phase of an individual and fixations & unattended complex or improper channelization of those urges can be carried ahead in life causing bigger & disastrous consequences. That's what has happened with Brij. His unresolved conflicts has led to such disasters everywhere in his brother's life, an innocent woman pushed to depression, a child tortured so much that from being a princess to her father she was considered a burden in another family, an unborn kid strangled to death... and most of all innocent girls - teenagers left abandoned, thrown away with scars that will haunt them for life.
His parents were not at fault. Brij has habits that are causing these delusions. About Chandan and Poonam, their base was so weak, trust never entered in it. So they also suffered.
Chandan- his character is gradually building. I won't judge him for now, But yes a lot of questions are swirling in my mind regarding him. Many of which are why?? Chandan -Poonam relation dynamics has more complexity than what has been revealed. He knew Poonam's mom's greediness & wrong ways for her widowed daughter & fatherless grandchild, but I guess that isn't known to Poonam. Anyways I will want you to reveal it all in your own style.

Okay. I am nervous about this relationship but I hope I can do it properly.
I liked how you kept the light hearted part for later ... so that after all that intense & harsh realities of our society we get a glimpse of budding love, romance & innocent ways. it surely was a good mixture and distraction.
Need to keep the continuity for the next part.
Maan checking himself pout post work out 😳 And SBV as well as without it... THUD. 😳☺️

Nakul bechara... 😆 Jiji ko call nahi karega... 😆 Neem ka juice... 🤣

I loved Maan's naming for his Geet ... GG 🤣 Avi I love this unique ways of you bringing a smile on the readers face. 😃

He is so possessive man in love can't even let anyone use his own naming given to his lady love. 😳 hayye .

I loved the description of roses you gave. I'm not so much of a rose person but loved the descriptions. ❤️

The blushing rose has its own symbol for Maan its like his parents blessing to his life, letting him know of the hard work that goes in planting & nourishing a flower, how delicate handling is needed. Also its like his Mother's token of acceptance and showering of love on his love , on his bride, oh his Geet.

Oh I'm waiting for the rose day celebration. 😳 Will he be able to give her the rose ?


That is a good question...😆
Thanks for being here..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago



Brij part was really scary...

this is the mistake parents make when they have second baby...they stop caring for first child...they immediately started expecting from first child to behave mature...when the child itself is very small...this thing then led to this type of hatred between siblings...

Maan and Nakul part was very hillarious...Maan chanting GG and Nakul becjara thinking he is remembering his sister...now he has to drink Neem and Karela juice 🤢 for 3 days...

Maan wanted to gift Yellow with red border rose to Geet...will he be successful...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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