MG OS {LOVE} ~Nelu~ [Completed]

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys.. I'M NELU...
I'M BIG FAN OF MANEET 😃...
THIS ONE IS MY FIRST OS EVER 😛...
Firstly i post it in fb nd now posting in IF
PLEASE guys READ ND LIKE & COMMENT... 😊



MG OS ~LOVE~




Introduction
Maan singh khurana:
MD OF KHURANA CONSTRUNCTION... A GREAT HUMAN BEING... in family just dadi...

Geet handa:

Simple & Lovely GIRL... Lives Alone With Friend Pinky & Her DAD... No one in family or relative...
Geet's family died in one accident...
So now she is in DEHLI, worked in KC as MAAN'S Secratry...


START

geet: sir ne mujhe iss jungle main kyun bulaya hai??? aasi kya baat thi...
sir sir kaha ho aap????

maan: geet... take the sit...

Maan then Her Hand in his Hand...
.

Maan: tumhe pata hain mujhe ghuma phira ke baat nahi karne aate tumhe pata hai,,,,, aur ye bhi ke maine tumhe yaha kyun bulaya hai...

geet {thought}: main bhi aaj aapko na bolne hi aaye hu...

boliye sir...

MAAN: geet woh .
.

I LOVE U MISHTI!!!!!!! I love u a lot...
I WANT 2 MARRY U...😊... I want to get Old with you...
I'll try to make ur life beautiful... I will always be with you
WILL U MARRY ME??? Will you be Mine forever...

GEET: I'm sorry Sir
.
BT I CAN'T LOVE YOU, SIR...

MAAN: WHY DEAR ??? DID I DO ANYTHING WRONG???

GEET: NO SIR!! But I DON'T DESERVE YOU...

MAAN:{HOLDING GEET'S HAND TIGHTLY}
Why u think like that???
Maine kitni baar kaha hain tumhe Tum jese ho wese he ache ho?? Kyun aapne aap ko tum choto mehsus karke mujhe hurt karte ho??
I can't live without you, Aasiq ho gaya hu tumhara, Nahi aacha lagta mujhe kuch bhi tumhare siwa...
Now I can't think a second without you...
.
I know u also love me... Then Asse kya baat hain jo tum mujhse durr rehna chahte ho?? bolo geet...

GEET: SIR... main ek mamuli ladki hu... jiske pass apne naam ke aalwa aur kuch bhi nahi hai, no family, no

background,nothing... nd yesterday mane aapne izzat bhi sayad kho de...
main jante hu aap mujpe taras nahi ka

rahe ho bt main aapko kuch v nahi de sakte... i lose everything...
{crying}


MAAN: Geet plz roo maat, u knw naa it hurt me most... plzzz

geet: ISS liye kehte hu dur rahe ye mujhse...
main jab tak aapke sath rahunge aap kabhi khush nahi rahoge.. mujse dur chale jaiye..
Aur wese bhi jo kal hua woh...
please leave me alone...i beg u...

Flashback Of Last Night
.

FRIDAY NIGHT IN KC AT 10 PM...
geet: sir, main ghar jauu??
maan: ok geet... main driver ko bool deta hu
geet:no sir ... i'm fine... main texi main chale jayunge, aur wese v aabhi yaha sirf ek hi car ,aapko jarurat ho sakte

hai...
maan: no tum car main jaaooge... maan calls driver...
D: JEE SIR?
MAAN: GEET KO GHAR DROP KARDENA...
D: SIR BT CAR KE BREAKS NAHI CHAL RAHE TO MAINE WORKSHOP MAIN LAYA HU
M: OK BYE...
G: KYA HUA??
M: CAR NAHI HAI... TUM THORI DER WAIT KARO, MAIN DUSRE CAR MANGWATA HU
G: NO SIR.. MAIN SACH MAIN CHALI JAUNGE...
M: BT GEET...
G: plzzz sir aap aopna kaam karlo MAIN AAPNA DIYAN RAKHUNGE.. koi v problem hui to aapko phn karunge ok???
m:hmmm... mujhe phn karte rahne raste main,ok??
g: sir.. ghar sirf half hour ki duri main hai...
m: toh kya hua.. agar tum aasa nahi karoge toh main tumhe janne nahi dunge... nw ur choice ...
g: okkk baba bye
m: hmmm tc

geet was in texi nd the driver was drunk
g call m
m: haa bolo, koi prob hai?kaha ho? main ata hu??? jaldi bolo...
g: main thik texi main hu xyz road main...
m:okkk
g: byee
m:nahi geet call on rehne do plzzz
g:kyun sir??
m: i don't knw plzz call on rakho..
g understand him
nd :okkk
thn texi suddenly stops nd 2 boys nd driver come 2 geet's sit ...
g: was to sacred.. she starts shout: sir sir plz help me
m:geeettt...
..
phn cuts maan started running
3 boys trying to rape geet.. they took her duppta away nd going to her lips 2 kiss

bt maan comes nd fights...
geet go nd hug maan tightly...
they went home nd full tym maan was trying 2 fell her better...
after sometym geet sleep nd maan kiss her forbead nd sleeps in couch...

morning ...
geet was geeting normally after talking 2 maan...
maan remember thir date nd tell her 2 go nd ready
geet was nt ready bt force her...
.
Flashback End


maan: pehle baat tum aaj v pure ho jitne pahle thi... kal jo v hua wo ek accident tha.. unn ladko ne kuch nahi kiya tumhare sath...
[geet don't let her complete
]

geet: ... kuch nahi kiya unho ne???? boliye... un hone mere rape karne ki kosis ki...aagar aap nahi aate to kuch v ho jata...

maan: mere hote huye tumhe kabhi kuch nahi hoga... tum uss baat ko bhul jaao... maine unhe police main v de diya hai... aur ek baat humesha yaad rakhna tumse jiyada pavitra aur humare riste se jiya paak aur kuch nahi ho sakta... tum mere zindagi ho...

geet: kyun karte hai aap itna pyar... itne ache kyun ho aap?? chale jaiye mujhse dur... aap ki itne bari duniya main main kab aapki yaad se chale jaunge aapko pata v nahi chalege...

maan: main Aaine main aap na chehra bhul sakta hu, Par tumhara kabhi nahi... Samjhe Tum?

GEET: kab hua mujhse itna pyar??
.

MAAN: pata he nahi chala kab main Apni Mishti ka Aasiq baan gaya...
.
Geet: MAAN
{1ST Time she call him maan}
I Love You...
.

they hug each other so tightly that nobody can seprate them...


song of aashiqui 2 { tum hi ho}
"Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera
Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera
Tujh se juda gar ho jaayenge
To khud se hi ho jaayenge juda
.

ABOUT 1 months ago...
maan started loving geet in their 1st meeting in office... geet's purity made her mad 4 geet...
maan made everything 2 make her happy... after pinky's family sifted in thailand.. maan foce geet 2 stay in his outhouse...
in that time she also feel 4 him... they also makes cute nokh-jokhs... eyelock nd [head kiss just once whn geet was sick]...
.

Kyun ki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Ki zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ek pal door ganwara nahi
Tere liye har roz hain jeete
Tujhko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera'

once maan's frnd comes 2 meet him... she was a girl...
maan: hii swety hw r u?? hug her
swety: oh jaan, miss u so much... thn kiss his checks...
geet was in full angry mood,,,, she wants to kick her
maan was noticing geet frm corner of eyes.. nd enjoying...
thn maan started 2 talk her in his cabin .. they talk for 2 hours...
after her leave geet goes 2 maan cabin... she throw maan in his seat nd taking her duppata she clean his cheeks with water...
maan was in high shock...
geet left his cabin
.

Kyun ki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
.
.

Somedays later...
geet was not giving a single chance 2 ask maan about that incident.
.
they comes kc nd went home together... in nw days maan can't spend a second without geet...
side geet also think that he can't love maan cuz she has nothing.. no name, no family, no house,nothing... but she knw that maan love her,,so she decied she will ingnore maan...

BUT maan think they will go out nd talk in alone

So one day

maan calls geet in phn: geet satarday ready rehna hum date pe ja rahe hain

geet: kya????? date????

maan: yaap mishti nw GD NI8...
.
call ended...

GEET {thought} : main iss date main apko naa bool dunge aur yaha se chale jaunge...

maan: main tumhe aapna bana ke hi rahunga... be ready jaan urff MRS.MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Kyun ki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho."
[Song End]

present:::

after their first date they go home nd maan talks 2 dadi 4 marriage...

dadi was vry happy...
after 3 days they get married... eveyboby comes nd wish them...
MANEET'S DREAM COME TRUE...
BOTH WAS SO HAPPY...
LOVE WAS IN FULL AIR... THEY BOTH WAS IN MADLY LOVE...
THEY WORKED TOGETHER

IN GEET PRENECY TIME MAAN WAS TALKING 100% CARE OF HER...


AFTER 1 YEAR IN FEB 22 GEET DELIVERD A BABY GIRL...
THEY NAMED HER ""AFSANA"" MANEET KI AFSANA...


... THE HAPPY ENDING...
...

With Love Nelu...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved this os
it was awesome
i really loved this dialogue from aashiqui 2
maan: MAIN AAINE MAIN AAP CHEHRA BHUL SAKTA HU.. PAR TUMHARA KABHI V NAHI... SAMJE TUM??/

GEET: KAB HU MUJHSE INTA PYAR??

finally maaneet got married


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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful os
maaneet married and their afsana
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome OS dear [=D> ]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice, sweet and simple OS yaar...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww sooo lovely n sweet story 👏
maaneet love each other bt still geet refused as she thinks she dnt desrves maan as she has nothingbt with MSK around hw can u say no geet 😆
awww maaneet wedding n den family complete with der little angel 😊
loved it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the os.keep writing pls

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