my teacher-(I) chap-22 pg 135 LINK fr 23 c index - Page 66

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

okay ... i m done wrting . my fingers are cramping !

guess what ! microsoft denied to count , it was so long . proofreading baki hai . so you have to wait few more minutes .

i dont know what will be your reactions . cause you guys are really surprising me .

listen dearies , the truth is . i have never attempted things like this . i m wrting what i m feeling but if u are despising it . thinking the charm is gone then i m gonna call quits and everybody will after my with juttis

but i got few comments that elated me . when i was sulking and dwelling whether i shud write or not they really kept me going .
its hard for me too. just want you to be little patient and judge it carefully . critics highly welcomed !

koi hai padhne ke lie ?

reet opening the attendance register !

100 page pe comment karna tha...😛

Awesome update...!!

Emotions portrayed out really well...loved the whole thing..!!

It would be really hard for Geet now to face the changed man that she loves..

Let's see if Maan is really able to resist her or that she really does not affect him anymore..

Cont soon..!!

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

How Can you say I wud bash you.You've given me a story that made me so attached with itself.I was really desperate to know what happens.I've never been so involved in any story though I read a lot of fics which are fantastic.But this is...what shud I say,lets use the 'cliched' word,its different.

Thanx a ton for giving such a story.I must read ur other works too.

You are too good to be praised by words.

I m still feeling hurt,for Arjun.

until i update until u comment . i m never sure that i can do good !

i love you sampa ! declared !

.I've last paper 2mmorow...so will edit my comment 2mmorow😊

updtt s super,osmdia opend geets eyes.i apreciate dia 4 hving faith on arjun.may b i m biased bt stil admire geet.mean 2 say she did wrong wid arjun .wrong s very less word.bt stil she hs de guts 2 accept hr faults in front of all.she proved here udays dauter 2 sm extent still a long way 2 go,2 face de college.i m eger 2 noe hw vil she face de changed arjun...

Originally posted by: BelleFilleDD

I just happen to hit upon this piece & am so glad I did 😛

It has kept me hooked that I finished all parts starting yesterday ... I loved the flow its very realistic , love the characters they are believable and earthy . I loved how these two deeply got delved in this complicated love . Love both Geet and Maan . Until last three updates came as tornado ... I was expecting these things would be revealed sooner or later but ... in a not so twisted matter though . I guess the damage is deep and beyond repair now . I feel sorry for Maan , after his turbulent life ...

Geet was like a breath of fresh air . No denying that he truly loved her . Whatever Geet did in last update was wrong ; nothing can justify what she did . However , having said that I still feel more for Geet . Geet , still is , as I recall in dark ... she still does not know who Arjun really is . Geet , from how much I could understand ... her character has clarity . She knows what she wants , even when she was playing indifferent to Arjun was because she considered Arjun has no feelings for her . Perhaps its all a figment of her imagination . But when she felt he does feel something she gave heart and soul to this relationship . Whereas Maan was still in throes of doubt whether or not to disclose his identity ... to me the cardinal mistake in the relation ... Maan hid his identity ... he loved Geet but still harbored feelings to make her feel the same like he felt in past . I resented he did not even bother to tell her about scholarship regardless what was between them and Geet lost it to Dia .

I am not defending Geet for keeping mum when Vikas created a make-belief sexual harassment story of Arjun ... and that she simply complied ! But this situation wouldn't have arised if Arjun at least would have steer cleared some things about Geet and his relation at least to Geet . Geet had Nothing to hold on to . I don't want Maan to forgive Geet for this allegation ; but Geet has stood for right she will make things okay . And thereafter if Geet comes to know that Arjun being Maan all this while did these with her ; especially knowing how much her father and this scholarship meant to her will come as yet another shattering news for Geet ...

I love both the complex characters but my heart pains for Geet more ...

Do continue ...

i loved the way you picked out the parts that are relevant ..
yes..that is what i wanted to tell in the story ..


thank you so much for understanding and be a real reader ..
welcome to /mY Teacher . hope to see your comments frequently

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

so true dear

it's just arjun for me also in this update

logo ki badua main , kaha woh dum tha

jo hame maar de !

yeh to aah thi mere yaar ki ,

jo hum ek pal main haar gaye !

kiya hai pyaar , to nibhaana bhi padegaa

yeh woh dard hai ,

jo duniya se kya ,

khud se bhi chupaana padgaaa !

tu jaan maang leti ,

to accha tha !

tune to meri wafaaye maang li !

naam dekar ,

mujhe bewafa ka !

mujh se mei khudai maang li !

nafrat tujhse to kar sakte nahi

par ab ,

mohabAT khud se bhi hum karege nahi !

yeh sazaa hai tujhe pyaar kane ki

ke zinda hai bas naam ke ,

kyoki ab markar bhi hum mare nahi !

thats really beautiful .
i liked it

😊

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

And yes,likhna bhul gayi,

but I m too sad for Geet too.

Poor she how will she live with the hatred.And now Dev...

poor geet .
to be frank i loved geet more .
nobody understands what desolation she had gone thru . she craved for love all her life . but never got it . when she got it . she expected maan to say it baack . but he didnt . when he did it was way too late