While going thru this page I saw your previous post that said the update is in the next post.
'next post contains the update , its not that long though . but i hope u forgive me reading the content it holds'
I read that very casually just inferring I' hope u forgive me reading the content it holds' You should have seen my fallen face..I was like So here comes the cliched misunderstanding..'I hate u track'. God help me bear thru the upcoming painful part. Nothing that happened till the mid of update made my tubelight light up😆. I was all the while sulking….
Noon turned into afternoon . afternoon turned into evening . she didn't move an inch from there. She feared if she closes her eyes for one second . he would come and seeing her he would go back , he hated her . didn't he ?
Oh my that had sheer intensity!! She was so vulnerable. Just like Geet I thought he just went away. Just few mints back I was appreciating su n zaria for bng wonderful frnds and in a moment I was cursing them. Had they not stopped her, may be she cud hav met him once.sorted this out. But then reading on the next line..
Suddenly a shuffle of key made her look up .
There he was..
Wait..he is back! OMG Maan indeed is back!! Oh wait the update is going to be sad one remember..they are not going to reconcile..huh.🥱
And then what followed, the encounter between the two..swept me off literally.
timid footsteps closed the distance between geet and maan 😳AWWW!!! SIGH..that calmness I felt with those words
I had nt expected geet to lower all her guards like this..so yeah what a surprise. Just loved Maan even more, his protest, his helplessness in sticking up to his promise, the way geet dominated him in her passion…oh Man that was impactful, ferociously impactful. Maan is a hell lucky man.Loved geet even more than him. This part reminded me of ur last ILWE update. Very similar..strong geet confessing for the first time leaving behind her apprehensions, after trying her very best to stay away and then eventually losing badly to heart,the kind of effect her confession had on Maan..Nostalgia..( The only missing thing was RAIN )hope u continue the similar passion in upcoming part!! And probably more feelings on display from Maan's side. Something other than jealousy and hurt! Girl deserves it, at-least now.
You by now wud have guessed my reaction on finishing the update. 'Reet u r so dead. It was a HAPPY super awsm update'. I was going to post a retort..when I went back to prvs post only to realize..'I DON'T KNOW HOW TO READ'😆
Thanks for one of the best update in a while and please give me a chance to say the same for the next part as well. If you know what I mean.😉
Btw I was just wondering why did you choose such a plain name 'my teacher'? The story has got lot more shades!! Especially considering you who pondered a lot over what to name ILWE for a while..it was earlier dil mera behosh banjara and then u contemplated over incognito or smthing!! haina??
Edited by sarita21992 - 12 years ago
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