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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update.

Thd starting part of the update where we see Geet is not to be found and she sitting on library roof and crying,it was really painful.For a teenager,the whole situation was so difficult.

And when I saw that even Arjun was missing fm the action,the effect of Geet's last night's words can be felt more.

Then her wait ouside Arjun's apartment,painfully long.

And when he came back,the emotions of both Maaneet are worth reading.Arjun trying hard to stay unaffected with Geet's presence,her words and Geet trying to open her heart out to Arjun.Then the fabulous kiss and Geet's confession.

One jst feels swayed with emotion to see them in the hug and Arjun requestingly whispering to Geet to repeat the magic words again and again.


The size of the part doesnt matter the feel matters.

Though i m still fearful for the future but the present is too beautiful and we shud enjoy it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
fanning myself...need an AC to get myself out this stupor that u have weaved with his intense update...planning to sit inside a fridge now..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago


update was beautiful...

kya kahun abhi aisa lag raha hai ki bahut saari baatein hain emotions hain but I fail to express them in words...

both Maan and Geet are insecure...in pain of past...and the manipulation they have to face in the hands of Anant is making them weak...

on one hand Arjun wants Geet to remain in love with Maan and he is in pain to know that she completely forget Maan but when Geet expressed her love for him then he forgets what he wants...his inner self wanted Geet to express love for him whether it is for Maan or Arjun...in that moment difference between Maan and Arjun diminished...

Geet wants to move ahead in life...I can't see any wrong in that...when she don't know that Maan send her letters and tried to come for her and it was her grandfather who didn't let him succeed...so according to her Maan betrayed her, he is not going to come back again...and what if it may have been right also...here Maan came back to get his love but what if he didn't have come...she is not going to wait for him all her life...so there is nothing wrong if she wants to move on in life...she has all rights to do that...but the thing is that they both don't know what other went through in all these yrs...how Geet was waiting and still is waiting for Maan to come back and how Arjun aka Maan tried to come back to her, tried to contact her, tried to follow her...and at last came back to her now as Arjun...

it is so complicated situation...first their past which is not letting them loose themselves to the person they love and second that old scumbag Anant...it is all making their situations very complicated...

Anant wanted to create misunderstanding between them to make them apart but here his ministrations back fired completely...their small misunderstanding is also cleared and they are in road to become one... I hope so...😉😃...

Anant don't know that Arjun is same Maan whom he make disappear from Geet's life...what will happen when he will come to know...how will he react...what will he do...I am really very scared for that moment...





Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg geet confessed her feelings
loved it
bus jaldi se inke past ki misunderstanding dur ho jaye
thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet confessed her love wtg for their past mu to be cleared and to see true colours of dadaJi
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 16
awesome dear...
loved it...
Geet has confessed her love to Arjun not knowing hes her Maan...
and what will Maan do now?
hope he tells her before that old man meddles their lives again...
Geet has good understanding friends and hope Zaria comes out of that creep Vikas' so called love...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I never blamed geet d way Arjun does...she should not b punished coz she was too small to remember everything...even if she forgot she should not b hold accountable for dat but here she was cheated...by her so called own family...

I felt so bad seeing her sulking like anything n blaming herself for everything...Arjun tell her u r maan bt I want geet to tell him first abt maan so he can knw wht happened...

Loving d story too much reet...

Being a doc it must b very hectic bt still u updt and write such beautiful stories...amazing...hugs...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
gosh i loved it.it was just amazing.can you give one more update please???i think it's high arjun should know the truth that it's totally that bloody anant's deeds to make him & geet suffer.omg geet confessed.i hope arjun gives her the ring he has brought for her.that old man is such a cheap.how dare he do this??telling teachers to give low marks to geet.reet when will geeet & maan get to know that their life is all messed up because of this man??anyway i just loved the update.it's wonderful.
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Posted: 12 years ago

While going thru this page I saw your previous post that said the update is in the next post.

'next post contains the update , its not that long though . but i hope u forgive me reading the content it holds'

I read that very casually just inferring I' hope u forgive me reading the content it holds' You should have seen my fallen face..I was like So here comes the cliched misunderstanding..'I hate u track'. God help me bear thru the upcoming painful part. Nothing that happened till the mid of update made my tubelight light up😆. I was all the while sulking….

Noon turned into afternoon . afternoon turned into evening . she didn't move an inch from there. She feared if she closes her eyes for one second . he would come and seeing her he would go back , he hated her . didn't he ?

Oh my that had sheer intensity!! She was so vulnerable. Just like Geet I thought he just went away. Just few mints back I was appreciating su n zaria for bng wonderful frnds and in a moment I was cursing them. Had they not stopped her, may be she cud hav met him once.sorted this out. But then reading on the next line..

Suddenly a shuffle of key made her look up .

There he was..

Wait..he is back! OMG Maan indeed is back!! Oh wait the update is going to be sad one remember..they are not going to reconcile..huh.🥱

And then what followed, the encounter between the two..swept me off literally.

timid footsteps closed the distance between geet and maan 😳AWWW!!! SIGH..that calmness I felt with those words

I had nt expected geet to lower all her guards like this..so yeah what a surprise. Just loved Maan even more, his protest, his helplessness in sticking up to his promise, the way geet dominated him in her passion…oh Man that was impactful, ferociously impactful. Maan is a hell lucky man.Loved geet even more than him. This part reminded me of ur last ILWE update. Very similar..strong geet confessing for the first time leaving behind her apprehensions, after trying her very best to stay away and then eventually losing badly to heart,the kind of effect her confession had on Maan..Nostalgia..( The only missing thing was RAIN )hope u continue the similar passion in upcoming part!! And probably more feelings on display from Maan's side. Something other than jealousy and hurt! Girl deserves it, at-least now.

You by now wud have guessed my reaction on finishing the update. 'Reet u r so dead. It was a HAPPY super awsm update'. I was going to post a retort..when I went back to prvs post only to realize..'I DON'T KNOW HOW TO READ'😆

Thanks for one of the best update in a while and please give me a chance to say the same for the next part as well. If you know what I mean.😉


Btw I was just wondering why did you choose such a plain name 'my teacher'? The story has got lot more shades!! Especially considering you who pondered a lot over what to name ILWE for a while..it was earlier dil mera behosh banjara and then u contemplated over incognito or smthing!! haina??

Edited by sarita21992 - 12 years ago

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