MG SS : Ishaqzaade *pt 35 @ pg 148* LINK OF 2ND THREAD @ PG151 - Page 77

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999

hi shobia

nice update toh nahi hai yeh geet kisnaaped ..
oh no ..
waise itna saara gadbad kaise ho sakta hai ..
annie's father had an accident so all went to london without informing maan ..kisse ke pass phone bhi nahi ..yeh big bussiness wale hai na ...aajkal toh peon bhi mobile se dor nahi rehta toh yeh kaise ..
geet ka kidnap ...
why brij blaming maan ..
how come mohinder came to know that geet is missing ...did geet called him to to tell that she was coming home ..


i am sure its brij's plan behind this ,.,he kidnap geet to seprate maneet and to have heavy amount ...
even annie ...though she is maan's sister like but don't know why i feel she may have some relation with brij and helping him out nahi toh how come all phone missing ...
now maan will not be able to arrange money for geet's return and will have to separate from geet ...
haha pata nahi mein story kyun likh rahi hai ...


thanks for update
waiting for next ..please do post early


how my god ..itna complication ..
tabby agar mene yeh sab kiya tu tum readers hi rotten tomatos reviews mien doo ge mujhe ..😆
but yes kuch twist tou hai ...
stay with me and u will know ..😉

thanks for ur review

luv ya
sobia
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks a ton for the updates
I like both the new update
the kiss scene was mesmerizing I loved it
but the way maan handle n understand geet's feeling is so touching n sweet
liked it loved it
waiting for more
plzzz continue soon
n I think brij is the only man who can stoop so low n kidnap her
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Posted: 9 years ago

TEASER
For
PART 30


Yeh khel tum ne choro kiya tha geet apne pyaar se ...par abb mohre mere hain ..khel bhi mera hai ...chaal bhi mien chalunga rules bhi mere hi hain ... aur iss khel mien haar kisi ki bhi hu ...jeet sirf meri hugi ...

Hmm ...tu equation kya hai ..

equation yeh hai k ..

Ranjha ki family co-incidentally bahar hai ... aur mauqe ka faida utha kar Heer ko mene kidnap karlia ...abb ranjhaa kya karega ...

Ranjhaa yahan aayega ...

heer ko bachane ..

Aur mere jaal mien phas jayega ...


**^^**

now guess who is saying these dialogues ..😉

while i am typing ..


luv ya

sobia

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Posted: 9 years ago
Is it brij
He kidnapped geet to trap maan
Nice tsr
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Posted: 9 years ago
interesting teaser! update soon! pls try n update Dastaan...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice teaser
brij planning something big
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

interesting teaser! update soon! pls try n update Dastaan...


sorry for not updating dastaan ..but i am really blocked in regard of that story ..
really my apologies but i'll try n ill keep trying

stay with me

luv ya
sobia
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Posted: 9 years ago
updating the next part friends ...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

hello everyone,
so here is the tough part of the story begins ..the climax where you will get to see y i named this one ISHAQZAADE ..there will be alot of surprises and suspense so please be with me ...n trust me

need all ur support for this one ..😳

all juttis accepted but please do let me know ur reviews silent readers its a request please do leave ur thoughts in the comment box

enjoy reading ..

MG SS Ishaqzaade



PART 30

Commissioner sahib aapke kehne ka kya matlab hai ...kab tak ..akhir kab tak wait karenge hum 24 hours ...its been 24 hours meri beti unn logoon k paas hai ...kaisi hai kis haal mien hai kuch nahi jaanta mien ...
Pehle aapki problem yeh thi k geet ko ghayaab huye 24 hours nhi huye iss liye aap report file nahi kar sakte ...aapko laga yeh sirf mera khayaal hai ...but abb kya problem hai ...abb aap kyun nahi dhundh paa rahe meri beti ko ...

Mr. handa mien samajh sakta hoon aapki pareshaani ko but hum kushish kar rahe hain ...jis number se aapko call aayi wohh number ki last location ek pco tha ...iss hi liye hum kuch nhi kar sakte jab tak unka next call nahi aata ...

Tu aapke kehne ka matlab hai k hum yoon hi haath par haath rakhe bethe rahen tab tak ...

The commissioner looked down not able to explain the worried father anymore while mohinder stood up throwing the glass placed in front of him on the ground ...

Bhabi ...brijj kahan hai ..??

Tai gi : Bhai sahib wohh wohh bahar gaya hain ...pareshaan tha buhat ...geet ko dhundhne nikal gaya ...

**^^**

Here on the other hand in Armaan's house maan threw his phone on the couch in frustration ...

Maan kya kar raha hai yaar ...

Tu aur kya karoon armaan ...kuch aur kar sakta hoon kya mien ..

Kidnapper ka call jis area se aaya poora area dekh liya hum ne ...kuch pata nahi chala geet ka .. kahan hai wohh kaisi hai kuch nahi jaanta mien ...dad is out of country mera phone tak nahi utha rahe ...
Kaise dhundoon geet ko ...
Kya karoon mien aisa ...
Zindagi mien kabhi itna majboor mehsoos nahi kiya mene khud ko jitna aaj kar raha hoon ...

Armaan placed a hand on his shoulder ..

Uss se kuch nahi huga maan ...she is a strong girl ..
Kuch nahi huga ussko ...

Maan looked away trying not to break down again and walked towards the wall which had there pictures from armaan's engagement party ..n caressed her face lovingly ...

Tum theek ho na geet ...

**^^**

Maan ...

Somewhere in a pitch black room geet wake up startled ...seeing maan walking away from her leaving her standing alone in the dark ...she looked around and could barely see anything ...the sharp pain in her head made her believe that it was indeed just a dream ...but then where is she ...??

And things started to come back in front of her ...

She was going to handa haveli ...after stepping down from the bus on the way from bus stop towards her house a white van hd stopped blocking her way and few men surrounded her ...she tried running but they caught her before that and put a white cloth on her mouth after which it was all a blur ...noises she couldn't recognize ..words she couldn't remember everything was a blur memory ..nothing seems to make sense ...where is she ..?? why she has been brought here ..??
She tried to get up but her hands and legs were tied ...



Panic rose as she started gaining her senses and she screamed and screamed but nobody replied ...her tears started making their way out chocking her ...and finally she stopped with only sobs left ...

**^**
Maan kuch khalo ...kal raat se tum ne kuch nahi khaya hai ...nahi sooye hu

Ridz please yaar mera mood nahi hai ...

maan ...//

armaan stopped her and they both walked away from him ...

nahi khayega wohh ridz ...

par aise kab tak armaan ...(a few tears slipped from her eyes and armaan hugged her) ..wohh wapis aayegi na ..

wohh wapis aayegi ridz ...uss se aana huga ..maan k liye ...

maan tired calling his father again coz he knew Yash Khurana's contact can help him but wasn't picking up the call ...
for the first time ever he was regretting that his father has always kept his identity a secret from the world ...if he would have socialized as the son of Yash Khurana people would have known him ...

**^^**

London

Aniee (crying in dadi's embrace) : dadi maa ...dad ko hosh kyun nahi aaraha ...wohh theek hujayenge na ..

Dadi maa : aniee bacha plss sambhaalye apne aapko ...aapne suna na ..doc ne kya kaha ...operation bilkul successful tha ...

Tu phir wohh uth kyun nahi rahe ..

Yash khurana glanced at his child helplessly ..just then the doc came

Mr. khurana ...

Its me ...how is my friend doc ..??

Accident was quite severe ..he has major swelling inside his skull which is why we have put him into coma next 48 hours is really crucial ...if he recovers well we'll be able to pull him off the life support or else ...//

Or else doc ...//

Keep praying for him Mr. Khurana ...we have done what we can ..but the swelling isn't in our hands ...

.
.
Maa aniee kahan hai ..??

Waiting room hai ...beta RV ..

Next 48 hours is crucial maa ...I ...//

Sabar kijeye yash ...sab theek huga

Itni achanak yeh sab ...
Jis insaan ko aaj tak fever nahi aaya wohh aise ...

Sab theek hujayega yash ...hum ..hum maan ko call karne jaa rahe thay ...aise achanak yahan aagaye ...

Maa please abhi ...
Abhi maan se baat mat kijeye

But yash ..//

Maa samajhye ...aap jaanti hain RV aur maan close hain ...use pata chalega aur yahan aa nahi payega tu pareshaan h huga ...already itna kuch hua uske saath ... I don't think it's the right time ...ek baar RV ko hosh aajaye then bata denge ...

I think ...I think u're right ..
Hum aniee k paas jarahe hain ...

Maa aap dono ghar jaiye

Aapko lagta hai Aniee maanegi ...

Chaliye mien baat karta hoon uss se ..

**^^**

DELHI

Maan half-heartedly dialed his fathers' number again ...
and some1 picked it ..

hello dad ..

geet ko dhundh rahe hu maan ...mien help kar sakta hoon tumhari ..

kuan baat kar raha hai ..??

ek msg milega tumhain agle 2 min mien ...mujh se milne aajana pata chal jayega mien kuan hoon ..

hello ...helloo

shit ...dad ka mobile kisi aur k paas ..
kya hu raha hai yeh sab ..

maan dialed again ...but the number was coming switched off ...then he dialed his dadi maa's number but nobody picked it as well ... his confusion increased his restlessness but this gave him a way ..something to do ...somewhere to start from ...may be ...may be this person can help him find his geet ...may be ...

and he received the address ..

**^^**

Somewhere in a construction site brij handa stood at the roof top smiling and dropped a mobile on the ground ...

That was easy ..

Mene nahi socha tha Mr. Yash Khurana
Aapki pocket se aapka mobile nikaal wana itna asaan huga ...
Aur aapko laga k aap ghar par bhool gaye hain ...waoo ..apne friend k liye itni tension k mobile bhi yaad nahi k kahan rakha ...bloody old man
Yehh rishte bhi kaise hute hian ..kamzoor kar dete hian insaan ko ...

Hmm ... Rishte ...khoon ka rishta ..pyar ka rishta ..blah blah ..
Kehte hain kabhi nahi toote ...par mien toor dunga ..
Acha bhala geet tum chali gayi thi ..kya zarorat thi wapis aane ki ..
Acha bhala mien khush hugaya tha k tum ne mera kaam asaan kar diya par nahi good girl banne ka shook jo hai papa ki beti ko ...
Par geet aisa huga nahi ..
Mien in rishtoon ko kabhi dobara jorne nahi dunga ...

Abb maan yahan aayega ...aur mien apni baazi chaloonga
Yeh khel tum ne choro kiya tha geet apne pyaar se ...par abb mohre mere hain ..khel bhi mera hai ...chaal bhi mien chalunga aur rules bhi mere hi hain ...iss khel mien haar kisi ki bhi hu ...jeet sirf meri hugi ...

Hmm ...tu equation kya hai ..
Ranjha ki family co-incidentally bahar hai ... aur mauqe ka faida utha kar Heer ko mene kidnap karlia ...abb ranjhaa kya karega ...
Ranjhaa yahan aayega ...heer ko bachane ..
Aur mere jaal mien phas jayega ...

Bas dekhna yeh hai k kuansa rishta haarta hai ..
Pyar ka ya khoon ka ..

**^^**
Next day Evening At Handa house

Mohinder entered the house holding geet as she was too week to walk on her own ..and his mother stood up to hug her grandchild with tears in her eyes ...

Geet ..meri bachi ..

Geet hugged her ...the woman who has always played the role of her mother in her life ..

Dadi mien theek hoon ...

Kya haal kar diya meri bachi ka ...tu chal kamre mien ...

Geet walked a few steps but fainted due to weekness and brij took her in her room upstairs ...while mohinder called the docters ...

Koi pareshaani ki baat nahi hai ...trauma se guzri hai upar se weekness bhi hai ..shayad kuch khane ko nahi diya iss se unlogoon ne ..aur yeh bruises bhi ..

If a look could burn Mohinder handas' eyes would have burned brij standing there with his glares ..

mene injection diya hai subha tak araam hujayega ...par subha kuch heavy mat dijeyega issko ...

meri phool si bachi ka kya haal bana diya ...

dadi aap fiqar nahi karo ..abb ghar aagayi hai na geet hum khyaal rakhenge usska ...dekhna do din mien bilkul theek hujayegi ..

mohinder sat there caressing his dear daughters' forehead with affection and kept looking at her ...

mohinder beta tum bhi abb araam karo ...mien bethti hoon na geet ke saath ...2 din se kuch na khaya hai na piya tum ne ..ab jakar thora araam karlo ...

meri bachi ne bhi kuch nahi khaya hai maa ...mien kaise araam karoon ..

beta abb tu humari beti humare paas hai ...aur subha uthegi na tu dekhna kitna ghussa karegi sunn kar k mene tujhe kuch khilaya nahi ..

han ..chacha gi ..aap geet ki fiqar mat kijeye mien aaj raat uss ke paas hi hoon aap araam kijeye ...

mohinder sat there caressing her forehead for a long while and left sometime after mid night while pammi was still there ...

PRECAP :-
Maaneet Face-off ...
what do you think brij has done ..!!

enjoy reading n do leave ur reviews and likes

luv ya
sobia

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