MG-SS Pyaar Ke Liye... Thread 1 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

awesome start jeev...very well described her current situation and how she is coping with her day to day activities...she is a multi-talented girl ...

so HE got a glimpse of her beauty...

i am litle confused who was behind her...i think HIS assistant was misbehaving with her and she gave him a good answer for misbehaving and HE was satisfied with her...

cont soon

Originally posted by: lovebirdsmaneet

hai jeev di lovely start beautifully described is it maanne ofcouse honichahiye but y maan stopped and he himself came for library work so she isdancer just awesome

Originally posted by: priyadarshini64

nice starting...

loved the update...

waiting for next part

Originally posted by: preeti555

nice starting

loved it

cont soon

Originally posted by: Surish

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

awesum start...loved it...continue sooon...

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Smooth yet interesting first part.

Music,books,love,its gonna be fun.

Specially loved d end portion,where 'She' stomps at the road side romeo's feet.

Originally posted by: ambeern

nice part

Originally posted by: harshithaaa

nice start

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
nice part...
cont soon...